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Old 09-06-2012, 01:02 AM   #1
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Default The Witch Sisters :The Wolf and Fang Trilogy.

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Title: The Witch Sisters


Introduction Page.

In the world of Agemmon the planet of magic and swords. For 2000 years the Dragons ruled and during the great war died in a great civil war. In that time the Elves who lived in the woodland areas and mountains saw that it was there time to take over.

They inslaved mortal beings called humans and on there backs and blood built there empire. After 500 years of Elf rule was that of any dynasty before. However the humans race had tripled in production so they decided to create a way to keep human population down.

So the Elf Dark Priests create 2 serums and these potions would change the person into a weapon to keep human population down. One potion was created with Wolfs Blood the other was Bats Blood.
The two humans selected became infected and in 24 hours they were beasts and in that time they both had killed 63 humans.

However 25 % of the kills were purposely kept alive and they for some reason were these two being chosen clans.
In 60 years the Vampires which would be called Fangs and Werewolves Wolf had become two nations and were equal to an Elf warrior. The fangs had to bite to create more but Wolf's could now simply breed with humans.

The Fangs and Wolves hated the other and War broke out. Some believed it was to keep them distracted so not to join forces against the Elves.
Still the Humans were Slaves and had no nation.
However one Fang was able to quill his anger for all things not Fang and see that the Elves were evil and the blood spilled were there fault and Humans and Wolves were really brothers in race while Fangs were just monsters created by a dark purpose.
Napier seeks the Hall Of Prophecy for he hopes to find a way to end Elf Rule and bring a time of peace.
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Old 09-06-2012, 01:22 AM   #2
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I think a "Dragon civil war" is the greatest thing I've ever heard. I want to hear more about that.
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Old 09-06-2012, 12:26 PM   #3
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There is always room for a prequel story considering I left that open for Elves being like mice in the field to the dragons. Also I never said all Dragons are dead it just desimated the race which be like what we call a near extinct species. I decided to do my own story with no comic copyrighted characters. Its more fun to create your own world in a genre thats popular
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Chapter One
The Hall Of Prophecy.


Even though the Fang Napier did become a loner giving up blood drinking is impossible so Napier became a selective feeder and never allowed his victim to become a fang. Napier was with a group of Fangs that decided to raid a Wolf village. The Thing about Wolves is they like to be left alone and they live far apart because like animal wolves they like the different pack mentality.

Napier sat on a rock as the others attacked the village he noticed there was no men or evil people of this village so he did not feed. Napier in these times still was not so heroic just yet and seemed confused by why they were deemed evil and Wolves Humans and Elves not.

He saw a Fang attack a house and a female Wolf sprung from the home in beast form and chased the Fang. She tackled the Fang 3 feet from where Napier was sitting. He was reading a book called The Great War Silverbacks vs Goldfangs. There were many books written by Elf Sage Friz Vankelsner on the Dragon Civil War.

"Help me brother kill this Vile beast." "We have no mothers per say I was turned after milking a cow. So we definately are not brothers from the same mother." Just as the Fang started to say traitor the She wolf ripped out his throat and slit him with her back left leg claw from his chest to his seed sack.

The Wolf changed back and she spoke to him. "Why are you here and why did you not save your friend." "I am curious about why we are evil and your kind is not. So i was watching to see who would win and why. Your men are gone and yet you she wolves are winning.
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He noticed blood coming from her torso as she changes back to her mortal form. The fang had managed to stab her with a dagger. His first thought was awe well one less dog to put down but, maybe she could be of some use.

He had heard of a healer of Wolves nearby. So he took the young She Wolf away to the place he had heard of. He knocked on the door of a cottage in the worst bend in the river. A portly man comes out with a silver hammer weapon. "I come in peace."

"I doubt that for the smell of innocent blood is upon you. I however will tend the child since she is the last Cravenclaw female. Bring her but do not touch or steal anything of mine. Or I'll cut out our tongue."

The healer stitches up the girl and he bared a ruby ring and wore several teeth around his neck as a necklace. "So are you a half breed." "If you are questioning your purpose I then suggest you see Agetha she is the oldest being alive since the Elves stole whatever land they could after the Dragon War."

"So Dragons did kill themselves." "Well lets say they damaged there species and could not overtake the dark magic Elves used to keep the last 10 dragons asleep."

The She wolf woke up. "You saved my life blood stealer." "A lapse of judgement on my part." "She is honor bound to you now Napier for good or bad." Napier gazed at the portly healer.

"Gurza you still live I see." "Lets just say my journey took longer then expected." "I was but 7 when you left." Gurza lit his pipe and sat down. "You should really rest Tempest and talking is a gift i need not bestowed."

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Just some friendly advice, Vader. Try using punctuation in your sentences. It would greatly improve the legibility of your work. Right now, it's a little difficult to decipher. Keep it up though.
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"I know your not human because your stories were to different." "Elves biggest assumption is that Humans have no culture beyond having scarred backs and below average intelligence. The Elves would loose if humans were united."

"Healer where is this woman." "I better show you because she does not like visitors. Especially if she is hungry." Gurza and Napier leave thinking the wolf girl was left behind.

Gurza seemed at peace and yet Napier felt there was something not normal about him. Gurza looked like a human bum but maybe that was his wizard or Sages game.

Wizards were descended from Elemental and Elf offspring and nobody was sure how many they were or how old they are.

"Your day is going to be ruined for you Fang for we have a follower." " A Fang I betrayed." " No this one is a bit more pleasant to look at and has fresh blood." "We should take care of the fool."

"Look at it this way your not gonna loose her so might as well let her think she is a good tracker." "What are you exactly?"

"I could be a traitor a curious helper or someone who is bored. I know things and I choose to keep the details of that to me." "So I am on my own basically." "Well I am here and you are their so we are not alone but within your quest most definately.

Awe just so we are clear you feed on any innocent victims I'll have to cut your head off or cut your heart out with a pick ax.

"I don't think you could fat man." Just then a log swings down knocking him into a few smaller trees. "Gurza was next to where Napier landed and yet last Napier saw him he was 3 paces behind him. "Thats her warning trap. Sorry I forgot that old thing still worked."
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"Before things happen be warned her nature is to test a being worthiness by any means, And she is at best neither a liar or a truth teller. So you neither can trust or ignore what she says."

"I think this is a mistake." Look at it this way you don't go and they burn you at the stake for refusing Wolf customs." "How do I know I can trust you?" "You can't really for I have my own reasons in any course I set out to do. Perhaps I like the idea that even Fangs can change more then one being. Maybe you give me hope that monsters have a soul."

They are soon surrounded by many 3 foot tall beings with tritons that shoot small bursts of Lightning.
A Hammer appears in the hand of Gurza and before Napier could move Gurza struck him hard and he lay out cold on the ground.

"Master what shall we do with this savage." Take him to The Temple for the Elder does us no good and he did come willingly onto us and he never asked If I had noble intentions for him." "What Of The Youngling."

"Let her track him there. and do not let her fall to harm. I know what is to come and he is vital but we need to test him not with Wolf lies but with duty upon innocent beings."


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The Wolves fallow the sent to find where Napier had deverted from his promised destination. The elder she wolf appeared before Gurza. Not knowing Tempest fallowed she assumed Gurza had betrayed his promise so told Agetha.

Well to be honest he knew she was somewhere but was not sure what she saw. Agetha leaped down in front of him and shortly Tempest came out. "I am honor bound to do what is best for the Fang." "Until he risks your life or breaks your heart." "I would not risk emotion of feelings on a Fang."

"Gurza he must be tested and you are not good at chess as I. We allow you to be in our presence and this is just a fabled attempt to prove your more wise then I. Remember I know your past and present."

"Agetha you know very little about this world and even less who I am. I once had teeth and devowering blood was what I assumed all us Fangs were born for.

I learned many things and changed more then you could guess. I also know deeds you use to do as a youth. Make your choices more wisely next time Tempest before you assume trust to your own kind. For Agetha and I both know how your parents were killed."
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