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Old 07-28-2004, 01:28 PM   #1
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Jack Bauer: Hi.. My name is Jack Bauer and this is the D.E.L.T.A Corporation, "The Defense and Elite League of Tactics". We are the Ultimate Group of Defense of The Government. It was Found in the year 2000 and it has being kept in secret since then.. we have the Best from all Agencies, The DEA, FBI, CTU, and all of the branches of the Government when Real Trouble Awakes.. We are the Ones that wipe them out. Here in D.E.L.T.A. we have 6 sections for different events that might happen.. I’ll introduce the whole team Behind D.E.L.T.A

D.E.L.T.A. Corporation

The Defense and Elite League of Tactics:

Jack Bauer
President and Head of Delta Corp:

Field Ops:
Ethan Hunt
Leader of Field Ops Team

Solid Snake
Field Ops and Weapons Expert

Major Dutch
Specialist in Weapons and Camouflage

Sam Fisher
Field Ops and Stealth Expert

Sharp Weapons:
Blade
Leader of the Sharp Weapons Team

Beatrix Kiddo
Specialist in Blades and Sharp Weapons

Obi Wan Kenobi
Jedi Knight Lightsaber Specialist

Paranormal Defense:
Logan Aka Wolverine
Leader of the Paranormal Defense

Bruce Banner Aka Hulk
Specialist in Demolition and Strength

Selene
Specialist in the Arts of the Werewolves

Matt Murdock Aka Daredevil
Special Investigator and Clue Detective

Hellboy
Specialist in Weapons and Fireworks

Detectives and Undercover Specialist Unit
John Preston
Leader of Detectives and Undercover Unit

James Bond
Specialist Undercover Agent

Sean Archer
Detective of Homicide

Danny Ocean
Specialist in the Arts of Special Effects

John McClane
Homicide Detective

Computer Programmers and Engineering
Thomas Anderson Aka Neo
Leader of the Hacker and Computer Programming

Taz “Rat” Finch
Hacker in CPU Programmer

Angela Bennett
Computer Virus Specialist

Soldiers and Warrior of the Ancient Weaponry
Aragorn
Leader of the Warriors of the Ancient Weaponry

Maximus Decimus
Warrior of Sword Fight Technique

Jack Sparrow
Captain and Specialist in Ship Sailing and Sword Fight

Achilles
Ancient Warrior Specialist in Sword fight a Shield Defense

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Jack Bauer: Now. Since you already know the team, get ready to enter our Top secret Archive Missions.. where you will know what have we done for you…

TOP SECRET ARCHIVE: MISSION 1680 Date: 03/12/2002


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CHAPTER #1: MISSION 1680 / The Call
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Current Mission: Hunting all Terrorist and Hackers from The CS! Boards
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Old 07-28-2004, 01:34 PM   #2
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so many characters....will be interesting read with the mix.....

look forward to it
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Old 07-28-2004, 05:25 PM   #3
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CHAPTER #1: MISSION 1680 / The Call


08:03 A.M.

*a young secretary runs in the DELTA halls going straight to the Director of Delta Corp’s Office*

*The secretary Opens the door with a hurry*

Jack Bauer: What is it?

Secretary: sir. I think you should come with me

Jack Bauer: What for?. What Happened?

Secretary: Follow me Sir..

*They both go outside the Directors Office and take the elevator and head to the Medical Center in the Lower Floor of Delta corp.*
*wile they still at the Elevator*

Jack Bauer: what is the Urgency?

Secretary: Sir, I think you need to see it with your Own Eyes

*They Arrive at the Medical Center*

08:09 A.M.

Secretary: Right this way sir

*They enter The ER #1*

Doctor: Mister Bauer… I don’t know how this could happened.. it was too late I couldn’t do anything…

Jack Bauer: What is this?…

*he looks in the Operation Table the Body of her daughter Kim Bauer *
*the Body is completed mutilated, his mouth has stretch with strings to reach her ears
*both Eyes where missing and both her breast were completely removed*

Jack Bauer: Oh My God!...Jesus Christ

Doctor: sorry sir. You better sit down for a moment

*Jack covers her body with a blanket*

Jack Bauer: who did this?... WHO DID THIS?

*Sean Archer Walks in with his shirt filled with blood*

08:13 A.M.

Sean Archer: Jack.. I’m so sorry

*Jack goes and Grabs Sean with lost of anger and tears in his eyes*

Jack: Tell me what happened Sean!

Sean: Jack, try to calm Down.. I found her like this in front of the Lobby here, she was inside of a Taxi Cab.. Cleric Preston is Collecting evidence from the Cab right now

Jack: I can not believe this.. who was driving the Car?

Sean: we don’t now.. Nobody saw anything. We need to investigate this situation. But you need to keep focus Jack.. You are the Head of this organization we need to stay calm!

Jack: What the F*** are you talking about.. My daughter has being Tortured and Murdered… We need to get the F***er who did this

*Jack walks out of the ER #1 and the Doctor follows him*
*Sean stands there*

Doctor: Mister Bauer!..

Jack. What is it?

Doctor: Kim had this Note in her back... it was placed with a stapler..

Jack: Jesus Christ those bastards…

*Jack grabs the note, the Note reads: CALL ME 555-000-666*
*Jack goes to his office and grabs the phone*

08:27 A.M.

*Jack dial the phone number that was written on the Note*

?????: Well… Hello Mr. Bauer

Jack Bauer: Who are You?

?????: no need to know that Right Now.. first I want to know something, did you like My Present?

Jack: You Mother***** You will pay for what you…

??????: Yea Yea Yea.. save your breath. Now that I have your attention. I think we could start making business.. ha ha ha ha ha … but first I have something to do. so I call you back….

*hangs up*

08:30 A.M:
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STAY TUNE
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CHAPTER #2: MISSION 1680 / Search for Clues
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Organizations: CTU, FBI, DEA, NSA, CIA, BPRD, S.T.A.R.S., SWAT, Fox Hound.
Age: ????
Current Mission: Hunting all Terrorist and Hackers from The CS! Boards
Location: Behind you...




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CHAPTER #2: MISSION 1680 / Search for Clues

08:31 A.M.
*Jack Bauer Hangs the Phone, and immediately calls to the CPU center*
*Angela Bennett answers Jack Bauer’s Call*

Jack Bauer: Miss Bennett

Angel Bennett: Yes, what is it Mister Bauer?

Jack Bauer: I need you to come to my Office, is Urgent, Bring Mr. Finch with You

Angela: right away sir!

*Jack hangs the Phone*
*Jack talking to himself*

Jack: I’m going to get you...You don’t know who you are messing with

08:34

*Meanwhile at the Research Lab in DELTA*
*Doctor Bruce banner is working on a Energy Fuse Alloy with Taz Finch *
*Hellboy arrives and goes where Doctor Banner is Working*

Hellboy: so, What are you doing Shrek?

Dr Banner: would you stop it, is not funny… I’m working on something

Hellboy: Yea you do? What’s that?

Finch: Ha, Would you let us work dude!

Dr Banner: it’s an Energy Fuse made of Alloy H.B. to substitute Batteries, with this I could…

Hellboy: Bla, Bla, Bla…come on man, leave that thing!, What to spar a little?

Dr Banner: Yea Right!...Don’t remember what happened the last time?, I beat the hell out of you…

Finch: well, you are Ten times bigger than he is!

Dr Banner: He is the one that keeps asking me to fight with him Rat

Hellboy: well, I’ve being working out and besides man you are the only one that can give me a hard time, I like the challenge

Dr Banner: Ok alright, but when I’m trough with this!

Hellboy: Ok I’ll wait for you in the Training Room… I’ll make guacamole out of you!

*Hellboy leaves the lab*

08:39 A.M.

*Angela Bennett Arrives at the Lab*

Angela: Hey Finch, Jack wants to see us, come on lets go

Finch: wait a minute don’t you see I’m busy here

Angela. He said it was urgent. So let’s go!

Finch: alright, alright, be right Back Bruce

Bruce: ok man

*Angela and Finch leave the Lab*

08:45 A.M.

*Angela and Finch Arrive at the directors Office*

Angela: So, what do you need Sir

Jack: well, I need you to find out everything about this Phone Number

*Jack gives the note to Angela*

Jack: Use every Combination possible with in the number, address, call records, everything

Angela: yes Right away sir

Jack: Finch, I need you to tag and trace my Last Phone call, and try to find anything unusual in that call, try to trace the Location, use the computer to separate sound, we need to get all the Clues possible

Finch: yea sure count on it.

Angela: but what is the emergency sir, what is the big deal of this phone number

*Jack takes a deep breath*

Jack: Because, it’s the phone number of the guy that killed my daughter an hour ago

*Angela and Finch both get surprised by the news*

Angela: oh my god, I’m so sorry sir. How?

Jack: I’ll explain later, please get to work!
*Angela and Finch leave the Office*

08: 53
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CHAPTER #3: MISSION 1680 / First Contact
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Organizations: CTU, FBI, DEA, NSA, CIA, BPRD, S.T.A.R.S., SWAT, Fox Hound.
Age: ????
Current Mission: Hunting all Terrorist and Hackers from The CS! Boards
Location: Behind you...




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CHAPTER #3: MISSION 1680 / First Contact

09:08 a.m.

*Jack Bauer goes down to the Lobby to see if they found any evidence in the Taxi Cab*

Jack: Did You find Anything Mr. Preston?

John Preston: Well, I’m so sorry of what happened Sir, Don’t worry we will find the ones responsible.. And Yes, we found something, the car is filled with blood, both front seats, the blood is recent, still warm, so they must have done it here, when they deliver her body in front of the DELTA corp. building

Jack: but, no-one saw anyone leave the Cab, or we have a suspect now?

Preston: well, we search the feedback of the surveillance cameras, and no, no-one left the cab, the cab arrived at 7:45 a.m. and then when Detective Sean Archer arrived at Delta corp. at 7:58, he saw the cab window filled with blood, so he was the one that found your daughter and brought it into Delta corp.’s Medical center

Jack: This can not be possible… maybe the cameras missed something

*Jack looks around and sees a Clown selling balloons just across the street*

Jack: how long does he have being there?

Preston: who sir?

Jack: That Clown!

Preston: I Don’t know sir

Jack: Follow me!

*Jack and Preston cross the street to reach the Clown*

09:18

Jack: excuse me Mister, for how long have you being here?

Frizzo: I start Selling Balloons since 7:00 a.m., the earlier the better, that way I can sell them to the kids just before they go to school

Jack: oh my god that’s Great, we need your cooperation sir!, for any chance did you see who drove that Cab right across the street, it arrived at 7:45 a.m.

Frizzo: mmmm, maybe!, how much for the Information?

*Jack smiles*

Jack: Look Clown,*Jack grabs the clown* how about spending the rest of your life in a Penitentiary Facility for denying cooperation for a government agency and holding possible Information to resolve a Case

Frizzo: Ok, Ok, Let go… well Yes I saw what happened! I couldn’t believed my eyes

Preston: so, you saw who killed the Girl that was inside that cab?

Frizzo: yes!

Jack: Who did?

Frizzo: she did it to herself!

09:26
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CHAPTER #4: MISSION 1680 / The Clown
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Organizations: CTU, FBI, DEA, NSA, CIA, BPRD, S.T.A.R.S., SWAT, Fox Hound.
Age: ????
Current Mission: Hunting all Terrorist and Hackers from The CS! Boards
Location: Behind you...




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so, should I still write this or should I just let it go?
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Code Name: T.S. Hound Aka Tony Samo
Organizations: CTU, FBI, DEA, NSA, CIA, BPRD, S.T.A.R.S., SWAT, Fox Hound.
Age: ????
Current Mission: Hunting all Terrorist and Hackers from The CS! Boards
Location: Behind you...




My DVD Collection

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Old 08-02-2004, 01:51 PM   #7
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sugestions for the Next Chapter?
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Code Name: T.S. Hound Aka Tony Samo
Organizations: CTU, FBI, DEA, NSA, CIA, BPRD, S.T.A.R.S., SWAT, Fox Hound.
Age: ????
Current Mission: Hunting all Terrorist and Hackers from The CS! Boards
Location: Behind you...




My DVD Collection

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