Grindie Issue 1

sphericthor · 09-03-2003, 08:49 AM

My friend has an idea for a comic and here's what he has so far:
Note: This is also in the Books and Comics Forum but no one was paying any attention to it

GRINDIE - ISSUE 1

EXT. FOREST - NIGHT

Grindie is stalking three sheep soldiers through a forest. The sheep are looking for a human (Greensun) who has just escaped their mutation camp.

SHEEP SOLDIER 1
He ran this way, I can see his footprints. Be careful, he has one of our acid guns

SHEEP SOLDIER 2
Where’d he get that?

Sheep soldier 1
He must of stolen it from one of the guards back at the base

Sheep Soldier 3
Damn bastard human! I hate them all, let’s kill him slow!

Sheep Soldier 2
YEAH!

Greensun is carrying an acid gun (stolen from a seep soldier) but will not use it against the sheep. He keeps checking behind him for any signs of the sheep.

One of the sheep notices Grindie jumping around the trees above them, he can’t make out any details though as Grindie is covered in shadow. Grindie begins laughing to creep his ‘prey’ out. He stops the other sheep to look.

Sheep Soldier 2
What the hell is that?

Sheep Soldier 1
It can’t be one of the humans, look at how it’s jumping around those trees!’

Sheep Soldier 3
Who cares what it is, we can’t let that filthy human get away, c’mon!

The sheep continue running after Greensun. Grindie gets pissed off and decides to go in for the kill. He swings down from one of the branches, grabs a sheep and swings back into the tree (and darkness).

Sheep Soldier 1
What the hell! That thing grabbed four four five!

Sheep Soldier 3
It must be some kind of creature we’ve never seen, no one, not even the humans, have explored this whole world

The sheep watch as ‘Four four five’ slowly slides down from the tree above. The dead sheep has it’s back to the soldiers, one of them approaches it and turns it around so they can see it’s face.

Sheep Soldier 1
Hey, Four four five, are you oke…

He turns the sheep around and sees that it’s hanging from above by it’s intestines. The sheep screams and reels back in shock, Grindie jumps down from his hiding place, holding the other end of the sheep’s intestines.

Grindie
Hey sheepies, wanna play?

Grindie cuts the intestine from the sheep he just killed then begins to swing it around his head.

Grindie
Yeehaw pardners! I’m gonna rustle me up some sheepies!

Sheep Soldier 1
(Pointing at Grindie)
Fry this guy!

The sheep aim their acid guns at Grindie and begin firing. Grindie jumps into the air and throws a lasso created from the intestines around the first sheep soldier, he lands behind him and tugs on the ‘line’, pulling the sheep towards him. When the sheep is close enough, Grindie unsheathes his claws and slices him in half.

The remaining sheep swings around to face Grindie and continues firing.

Sheep Soldier 2
Die you freak!

Grindie
Huh? You sound like you’re not enjoying yourself. I’m so sorry for leaving you out, let me make it up to you

Grindie dives toward the sheep, just as he is about to stick his claws into the sheep’s chest, Greensun appears a few yards away.

Greensun
(aiming his gun at Grindie)
Hold it! Don’t kill that sheep!

Grindie + Sheep Soldier 2
(surprised)
Wha?

Greensun
(stepping closer)
Put him down you freak!

Grindie ignores Greensun and rips the sheep in half.

Grindie
Sheepie lover eh? I hate sheepies, but I really despise SHEEPIE LOVERS!!!

Grindie runs towards Greensun, Greensun begins firing.

One of Greensun’s acid blasts hits Grindie, Grindie is knocked backward.

Greensun
What the hell are you!?

Grindie
(with his hand on his wound)
I’ll be back to deal will you later

Grindie jumps into the trees again, Greensun looses sight of him.

Greensun
I’ve gotta get back to the village

Rebecca · 09-05-2003, 07:53 AM

hmmm interesting..but needs more..I like it so far.

Grindie · 09-05-2003, 08:19 AM

That's just the opening 2 pages of the comic... more will come... well not really, the comic's gonna be a brainless 'kill everything 'em up'. But there will be some story in there.

sniktawt · 09-05-2003, 09:26 PM

If your writing is as good as your art, then it'll be ****ing great!!!

09-03-2003, 08:49 AM	#1
sphericthor Doesn't Care Anymore Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Might aswell be gone Posts: 22,470	Grindie Issue 1 My friend has an idea for a comic and here's what he has so far: Note: This is also in the Books and Comics Forum but no one was paying any attention to it GRINDIE - ISSUE 1 EXT. FOREST - NIGHT Grindie is stalking three sheep soldiers through a forest. The sheep are looking for a human (Greensun) who has just escaped their mutation camp. SHEEP SOLDIER 1 He ran this way, I can see his footprints. Be careful, he has one of our acid guns SHEEP SOLDIER 2 Where’d he get that? Sheep soldier 1 He must of stolen it from one of the guards back at the base Sheep Soldier 3 Damn bastard human! I hate them all, let’s kill him slow! Sheep Soldier 2 YEAH! Greensun is carrying an acid gun (stolen from a seep soldier) but will not use it against the sheep. He keeps checking behind him for any signs of the sheep. One of the sheep notices Grindie jumping around the trees above them, he can’t make out any details though as Grindie is covered in shadow. Grindie begins laughing to creep his ‘prey’ out. He stops the other sheep to look. Sheep Soldier 2 What the hell is that? Sheep Soldier 1 It can’t be one of the humans, look at how it’s jumping around those trees!’ Sheep Soldier 3 Who cares what it is, we can’t let that filthy human get away, c’mon! The sheep continue running after Greensun. Grindie gets pissed off and decides to go in for the kill. He swings down from one of the branches, grabs a sheep and swings back into the tree (and darkness). Sheep Soldier 1 What the hell! That thing grabbed four four five! Sheep Soldier 3 It must be some kind of creature we’ve never seen, no one, not even the humans, have explored this whole world The sheep watch as ‘Four four five’ slowly slides down from the tree above. The dead sheep has it’s back to the soldiers, one of them approaches it and turns it around so they can see it’s face. Sheep Soldier 1 Hey, Four four five, are you oke… He turns the sheep around and sees that it’s hanging from above by it’s intestines. The sheep screams and reels back in shock, Grindie jumps down from his hiding place, holding the other end of the sheep’s intestines. Grindie Hey sheepies, wanna play? Grindie cuts the intestine from the sheep he just killed then begins to swing it around his head. Grindie Yeehaw pardners! I’m gonna rustle me up some sheepies! Sheep Soldier 1 (Pointing at Grindie) Fry this guy! The sheep aim their acid guns at Grindie and begin firing. Grindie jumps into the air and throws a lasso created from the intestines around the first sheep soldier, he lands behind him and tugs on the ‘line’, pulling the sheep towards him. When the sheep is close enough, Grindie unsheathes his claws and slices him in half. The remaining sheep swings around to face Grindie and continues firing. Sheep Soldier 2 Die you freak! Grindie Huh? You sound like you’re not enjoying yourself. I’m so sorry for leaving you out, let me make it up to you Grindie dives toward the sheep, just as he is about to stick his claws into the sheep’s chest, Greensun appears a few yards away. Greensun (aiming his gun at Grindie) Hold it! Don’t kill that sheep! Grindie + Sheep Soldier 2 (surprised) Wha? Greensun (stepping closer) Put him down you freak! Grindie ignores Greensun and rips the sheep in half. Grindie Sheepie lover eh? I hate sheepies, but I really despise SHEEPIE LOVERS!!! Grindie runs towards Greensun, Greensun begins firing. One of Greensun’s acid blasts hits Grindie, Grindie is knocked backward. Greensun What the hell are you!? Grindie (with his hand on his wound) I’ll be back to deal will you later Grindie jumps into the trees again, Greensun looses sight of him. Greensun I’ve gotta get back to the village

09-05-2003, 08:19 AM	#3
Grindie Director of Photography Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Ireland (with the leprechauns) Posts: 277	That's just the opening 2 pages of the comic... more will come... well not really, the comic's gonna be a brainless 'kill everything 'em up'. But there will be some story in there. __________________ www.grindie.tk

09-05-2003, 07:53 AM	#2
Rebecca ~I'M FEELING NAUGHTY~ Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: HERE DUH! Posts: 5,078	hmmm interesting..but needs more..I like it so far.

09-05-2003, 09:26 PM	#4
sniktawt Hammer!! Join Date: May 2003 Location: Canada Posts: 31,434	If your writing is as good as your art, then it'll be ****ing great!!!