CS Poetry

Citizen Kane · 04-20-2003, 07:24 PM

Whilst I was away on my trip, I thought up some poetry about the posters. Perhaps it could become an on going thread.

FRIZZO THE CLOWN:

Thwack thwack thwack...
Frizzo makes these sounds as he whacks (off)
IMO, he should get some tact (and a room)
Why is it that Frizzo performs these self-gratifying acts?
I'll never know 'cause I'm afraid to ask
For Frizzo I'm sure it's fun-
A mating dance for one
Thwack thwack thwack...

ROGUE:

These days, we could use someone full of
humanity
life
elegance
Rogue is
a supernova
a candle in the wind
a rose among flowers
She is
a Southern Belle

smokiechimp · 04-20-2003, 07:38 PM

Good Idea man!! I love mucking about with poetry!

Kneyrs

When your sad, she is there
Down and out, she'll lend a hand
When your mad, she will care
The sweetest girl in the land

She's a friend, with heart and soul
A funny chick, she'll cheer you up
A real good friend, she breaks the mould
Need support, you know where to look

Southern

She's a beuty, with real good looks
If I knew her, we'd be good mates
She likes good movies, and maybe books
to have a chat, it's never too late

She is mysterious, but thats a charm
so quiet and sweet, she shields her heart
she posts with elegance, her soul is calm
being a friend, she makes an art

Just a couple for the guys I consider the special people to me on the boards!

**Frizzo the Clown** · 04-20-2003, 08:17 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Citizen Kane
Whilst I was away on my trip, I thought up some poetry about the posters. Perhaps it could become an on going thread.

FRIZZO THE CLOWN:

Thwack thwack thwack...
Frizzo makes these sounds as he whacks (off)
IMO, he should get some tact (and a room)
Why is it that Frizzo performs these self-gratifying acts?
I'll never know 'cause I'm afraid to ask

HAHA! I love it!

CapricornDevil · 04-20-2003, 08:44 PM

Wow! I don't know whether to be scared, or amused. HMMMM...amused gets my vote.

Knerys · 04-20-2003, 10:21 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by smokiechimp
Good Idea man!! I love mucking about with poetry!

Kneyrs

When your sad, she is there
Down and out, she'll lend a hand
When your mad, she will care
The sweetest girl in the land

She's a friend, with heart and soul
A funny chick, she'll cheer you up
A real good friend, she breaks the mould
Need support, you know where to look

:o Hehe, that's very sweet of you. Heh, needed that "pick me up".

Sicy · 04-20-2003, 10:22 PM

There once was a great dane named Iben
One day she decided to leave men
She saw Sicy there
Playing with her hair
So she grabbed Sicy's hand and said "Bye Ben."

Citizen Kane · 04-20-2003, 10:50 PM

Holy crap. I don't know whether to laugh or...be scared. And who's Ben?

Colorado Cajun · 04-20-2003, 10:53 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Sicy
There once was a great dane named Iben
One day she decided to leave men
She saw Sicy there
Playing with her hair
So she grabbed Sicy's hand and said "Bye Ben."

oh my god that was great!! You made me smile

Sicy · 04-20-2003, 10:54 PM

HAHA yay

Snake Spirit · 04-21-2003, 12:27 AM

What you are about to read is a poem I made when I was sitting in my room during an early summer thunderstorm, contemplating my recent break up with someone who was very dear to me. I hope you all like it.

A Bright And Shining Lie

I sit alone this summer day
The tears roll from my eyes
Her love for me was nothing but
A Bright And Shining Lie

Sitting on an empty bed
where once we both did rest
I miss her flowing unbound hair
and warmness of her breast

It seemed at first, our love rang true
our spirits held aloft
Her eyes that shined like crystal pools
her voice so smooth and soft

But my love was not enough
another did she want
betrayal left me spiritless
so hollow and so gaunt

Could she not see the real me
and see my feelings too
Could she not see my love for her
and know it was so true?

I may never ever know
why things like this occur
From now on I shall look at love
as nothing but a word

And now I rest my weary head
The Lord my soul shall keep
And on this day I'll pass away
Forever will I sleep

And if it is that I should wake
I hope my heart would mend,
for now it seems that I am doomed
and this is now the end...

Citizen Kane · 04-21-2003, 12:31 AM

Snake Spirit · 04-21-2003, 01:15 AM

I get pretty intense with poetry sometimes, and I cover a wide range of emotions. If my depressing bent bothers some of you, please let me kow and I'll stick to happier subjects, OK?

Citizen Kane · 04-21-2003, 02:06 AM

Actually, your poem is a haunting and moving evocation of the pain of lost love and betrayal. And there's no reason for you to limit what type of poetry you post here. Feel free. Besides, some of the greatest poetry of all time is depressing.

smokiechimp · 04-21-2003, 04:17 AM

That's a very moving poem Snake Spirit!

Iben · 04-21-2003, 05:23 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Sicy
There once was a great dane named Iben
One day she decided to leave men
She saw Sicy there
Playing with her hair
So she grabbed Sicy's hand and said "Bye Ben."

**Frizzo the Clown** · 04-21-2003, 07:44 AM

Wow....everyone seems to like the poem where she leaves me......

Iben · 04-21-2003, 08:20 AM

He is my darling Clown
when he’s around I can not frown
He knows when I’m sad
and he always does his best to make me glad
He is funny he is sweet
His nose is red and he has big feet
His hair is wild, his eyes are blue
My love for him is nothing but true
But my Clown he lives so far away
Hopefully that’ll all change one day
I am his, the clown is mine
He is the sunshine of my life

:o :o :heart:

**Frizzo the Clown** · 04-21-2003, 08:25 AM

Awwwwww...now thats more like it!

:heart:

Snake Spirit · 04-21-2003, 11:53 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Citizen Kane
Actually, your poem is a haunting and moving evocation of the pain of lost love and betrayal. And there's no reason for you to limit what type of poetry you post here. Feel free. Besides, some of the greatest poetry of all time is depressing.

Smokiechimp:
That's a very moving poem Snake Spirit!

Wow, CK, you and Smokiechimp actually LIKE my poetry?
I don't know what to say, except, well, WOW again!

I guess, when you get to it, some of the greatest works are depressing, and as such, are great beause they show us true human emotion-anyone can write a poem about being on top of the world, or being in love, but when someone responds to a true loss or real pain, this is when true evocation steps in and does it's work.

Thanks again! Yer buddy for life, Snake Spirit

Snake Spirit · 04-21-2003, 11:57 AM

People have told me I'm a poet,
but I didn't even know it,
until one day I met a girl from Nantucket,
who asked me if I wanted to.....oh, ***k it!

Rogue · 04-21-2003, 12:41 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Citizen Kane
Whilst I was away on my trip, I thought up some poetry about the posters. Perhaps it could become an on going thread.

ROGUE:

These days, we could use someone full of
humanity
life
elegance
Rogue is
a supernova
a candle in the wind
a rose among flowers
She is
a Southern Belle

Awwww...*blushes*

Citizen Kane · 04-21-2003, 01:05 PM

JBOND:

He was here before the rest of us
He's entered lore with the best of us
Jibbs has more posts than everyone here
In the heart of newbies he strikes fear
He got teased 'bout his name when he was in high school
Today most of those people wish they were as cool
as JBond is today.

Sicy · 04-21-2003, 01:08 PM

Snake Spirit · 04-21-2003, 01:18 PM

That's Bond......JAMES Bond. And remember he likes his martinis shaken, not stirred

*insert Bond theme song*

Citizen Kane · 04-21-2003, 01:20 PM

PIXINESS:

She strolls along
and eyes avert
for she is elegant
She is grace
A demure toss of the hair
A natural blink
and
the world is entranced
Who is this lady?
Who is she who has
the world under her spell?
She is pixiness
She is grace.

04-20-2003, 07:24 PM	#1
Citizen Kane lol MasterChief Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Jonathan Ross Posts: 13,401	CS Poetry Whilst I was away on my trip, I thought up some poetry about the posters. Perhaps it could become an on going thread. FRIZZO THE CLOWN: Thwack thwack thwack... Frizzo makes these sounds as he whacks (off) IMO, he should get some tact (and a room) Why is it that Frizzo performs these self-gratifying acts? I'll never know 'cause I'm afraid to ask For Frizzo I'm sure it's fun- A mating dance for one Thwack thwack thwack... ROGUE: These days, we could use someone full of humanity life elegance Rogue is a supernova a candle in the wind a rose among flowers She is a Southern Belle __________________ "Have a SNEEZE on me, Batman!"-The Joker Last edited by Citizen Kane; 04-21-2003 at 02:05 AM.

04-20-2003, 07:38 PM	#2
smokiechimp Pretend American Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: San Antonio, TX Posts: 12,446	Good Idea man!! I love mucking about with poetry! Kneyrs When your sad, she is there Down and out, she'll lend a hand When your mad, she will care The sweetest girl in the land She's a friend, with heart and soul A funny chick, she'll cheer you up A real good friend, she breaks the mould Need support, you know where to look Southern She's a beuty, with real good looks If I knew her, we'd be good mates She likes good movies, and maybe books to have a chat, it's never too late She is mysterious, but thats a charm so quiet and sweet, she shields her heart she posts with elegance, her soul is calm being a friend, she makes an art Just a couple for the guys I consider the special people to me on the boards! __________________ "You are who you choose to be, and if your causing no harm then your alright with me" Last edited by smokiechimp; 04-20-2003 at 07:41 PM.

04-20-2003, 08:44 PM	#4
CapricornDevil Sophist Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Indiana Posts: 3,591	Wow! I don't know whether to be scared, or amused. HMMMM...amused gets my vote. __________________ Congress shall make no law respecting an establishment of religion, or prohibiting the free exercise thereof; or abridging the freedom of speech, or of the press; or the right of the people peaceably to assemble, and to petition the government for a redress of grievances.

04-20-2003, 10:22 PM	#6
Sicy Cat Freak Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: ebay Posts: 4,710	There once was a great dane named Iben One day she decided to leave men She saw Sicy there Playing with her hair So she grabbed Sicy's hand and said "Bye Ben." __________________ Love... You want heaven in your heart Heaven in your heart The sun, the moon, and the stars *Sicy's Lair*

04-20-2003, 10:50 PM	#7
Citizen Kane lol MasterChief Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Jonathan Ross Posts: 13,401	Holy crap. I don't know whether to laugh or...be scared. And who's Ben? __________________ "Have a SNEEZE on me, Batman!"-The Joker

04-20-2003, 10:54 PM	#9
Sicy Cat Freak Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: ebay Posts: 4,710	HAHA yay __________________ Love... You want heaven in your heart Heaven in your heart The sun, the moon, and the stars *Sicy's Lair*

04-21-2003, 12:27 AM	#10
Snake Spirit Banned Status Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: United States Posts: 1,029	A Bright And Shining Lie What you are about to read is a poem I made when I was sitting in my room during an early summer thunderstorm, contemplating my recent break up with someone who was very dear to me. I hope you all like it. A Bright And Shining Lie I sit alone this summer day The tears roll from my eyes Her love for me was nothing but A Bright And Shining Lie Sitting on an empty bed where once we both did rest I miss her flowing unbound hair and warmness of her breast It seemed at first, our love rang true our spirits held aloft Her eyes that shined like crystal pools her voice so smooth and soft But my love was not enough another did she want betrayal left me spiritless so hollow and so gaunt Could she not see the real me and see my feelings too Could she not see my love for her and know it was so true? I may never ever know why things like this occur From now on I shall look at love as nothing but a word And now I rest my weary head The Lord my soul shall keep And on this day I'll pass away Forever will I sleep And if it is that I should wake I hope my heart would mend, for now it seems that I am doomed and this is now the end...

04-21-2003, 12:31 AM	#11
Citizen Kane lol MasterChief Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Jonathan Ross Posts: 13,401	__________________ "Have a SNEEZE on me, Batman!"-The Joker

04-21-2003, 01:15 AM	#12
Snake Spirit Banned Status Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: United States Posts: 1,029	I get pretty intense with poetry sometimes, and I cover a wide range of emotions. If my depressing bent bothers some of you, please let me kow and I'll stick to happier subjects, OK?

04-21-2003, 02:06 AM	#13
Citizen Kane lol MasterChief Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Jonathan Ross Posts: 13,401	Actually, your poem is a haunting and moving evocation of the pain of lost love and betrayal. And there's no reason for you to limit what type of poetry you post here. Feel free. Besides, some of the greatest poetry of all time is depressing. __________________ "Have a SNEEZE on me, Batman!"-The Joker

04-21-2003, 04:17 AM	#14
smokiechimp Pretend American Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: San Antonio, TX Posts: 12,446	That's a very moving poem Snake Spirit! __________________ "You are who you choose to be, and if your causing no harm then your alright with me"

04-21-2003, 07:44 AM	#16
Frizzo the Clown Executive Producer Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: In a pool of my own filth Posts: 36,861	Wow....everyone seems to like the poem where she leaves me......

04-21-2003, 08:20 AM	#17
Iben Cat Lady Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: København Posts: 23,946	He is my darling Clown when he’s around I can not frown He knows when I’m sad and he always does his best to make me glad He is funny he is sweet His nose is red and he has big feet His hair is wild, his eyes are blue My love for him is nothing but true But my Clown he lives so far away Hopefully that’ll all change one day I am his, the clown is mine He is the sunshine of my life :o :o :heart: __________________ "Love is a promise, love is a souvenir, once given never forgotten, never let it disappear" - John Lennon

04-21-2003, 08:25 AM	#18
Frizzo the Clown Executive Producer Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: In a pool of my own filth Posts: 36,861	Awwwwww...now thats more like it! :heart:

04-21-2003, 11:57 AM	#20
Snake Spirit Banned Status Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: United States Posts: 1,029	People have told me I'm a poet, but I didn't even know it, until one day I met a girl from Nantucket, who asked me if I wanted to.....oh, ***k it!

04-21-2003, 01:05 PM	#22
Citizen Kane lol MasterChief Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Jonathan Ross Posts: 13,401	JBOND: He was here before the rest of us He's entered lore with the best of us Jibbs has more posts than everyone here In the heart of newbies he strikes fear He got teased 'bout his name when he was in high school Today most of those people wish they were as cool as JBond is today. __________________ "Have a SNEEZE on me, Batman!"-The Joker

04-21-2003, 01:08 PM	#23
Sicy Cat Freak Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: ebay Posts: 4,710	__________________ Love... You want heaven in your heart Heaven in your heart The sun, the moon, and the stars *Sicy's Lair*

04-21-2003, 01:18 PM	#24
Snake Spirit Banned Status Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: United States Posts: 1,029	That's Bond......JAMES Bond. And remember he likes his martinis shaken, not stirred insert Bond theme song

04-21-2003, 01:20 PM	#25
Citizen Kane lol MasterChief Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Jonathan Ross Posts: 13,401	PIXINESS: She strolls along and eyes avert for she is elegant She is grace A demure toss of the hair A natural blink and the world is entranced Who is this lady? Who is she who has the world under her spell? She is pixiness She is grace. __________________ "Have a SNEEZE on me, Batman!"-The Joker