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Old 05-17-2012, 12:49 PM   #26
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Old 05-17-2012, 12:51 PM   #27
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No I just trying to find the right font because the first ones were a bit small. I am sticking to my last posts font from now on though.
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The door opens and it is Rogue's form of Harlin Grey. She comes down the empty hall because he was the only prisoner. His cell was made of an alien energy that would turn the prisoner into Stone if they touched it. Oddly enough the bars could not be seen so it looked like a wide open chamber with him his bed and the Loo.

The prisoners eyes opened and the mask he wore kept him weakened. Yet he mostly meditated and never ate food and only drank Water. "What can i do for the honorable Harlin Grey? Who has seen fit to visit me in my cell."

"Why can't you give her what she wants in a few hours you will be taken to mortal." "You will learn many things before your end child but I'll give you three words of wisdom. Number 1 You always have a choice and even though it seems like you have no choice you do. In your case you fear to loose Gambit but a bigger question is Gambit one man worth A whole planets possible death or inslavement.

2 The Second pearl of wisdom is this an eye for an eye is always a great saying to live by. Because if ever I see the light of day. I will cut off your dear mommys head and stick it up Magnetos Colon hatch. You see my dear i am not a saint but a sinner many times over and not even The Hulk can equal the rage i feel at this moment." "You mean that for me."
"I don't kill my own children and while i am a poor parent I would not kill the child of Claire Jenkins.

That is your real mothers name." "I know who she is but wasn't she her." "Mystique would tell you that i am sure. While it is true you I gave you two very nice normal people. Jenkins very much wished to be your mother its just well from birth you had your power.

She has been in a coma the moment you touched her skin when was born. I was hoping Charles could make you learn better choice making." You never do answer a question straightly." "I answer many question its just yours is a stupid one. Give her the key to total limitless power for her so called God. The answer can only be know child." I am leaving and hoped to change your mind."

"Sorry you came down here Mr Grey those women hormones must be a bothersome thing." "What was the 3rd pearl of wisdom?" "The most important one of all." And it is." "Awe Old Coke is Better Then New Coke."
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Old 05-23-2012, 03:46 PM   #29
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Rogue Became herself at that moment and at the moment the game of deception was over. "I have no pain in seeing you become average because the world has meant more to you then me. Humans fear and hate us. I am glad in a way Mystique has lent me her powers of change." "Your brave talking this way only because you believe these bars and this base under water keeps you safe my dear."

The steel masked prisoner eyes change to a cat like amber as his right hand grips the bar that no one usually can see. The charge does nothing to him but sparks fly from it. "Child i have witnessed this kind of justice before and all dictators believe in there cause. Be they The Red Skull to Loki.

Understand this i'll not allow the power I have collected to be used to end humanity because there are as many innocent people as they are evil ones." "It will be over sooner then you think old man." The Steel Masked Figure

"This is my only warning to side against humanity is a side against me and my rivals know all too well that none wants to see me angry because that is the worst part about my curse given to me."

His hand quick grans her by the throat as the bars bend away by him using his mind. She is lifted off the floor and gasping for her breath. "No use trying to obsorbe my energy to free yourself because you see i wanted in here because it is the last place Shield could find me. Look at as you are my prisoners and you all just don't know it yet." He slams her against the wall leaving dent.

She is sitting on the floor when the bars come back and he is back sitting on the floor. "Do you give your best to your mother for me Rogue won't you."
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People who liked this do not fear this will be finished some day. Just think of it as a sequel and that Iron Mask is just the first story that i had in my head and needed to tell first.
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