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Tornado
08-04-2004, 08:09 AM
The newest fan fic from myself. The Danger Guild is about a group of people that fight crime from behind the shadows without getting the recognition that they deserve, risking their lives for the safety of mankind and never getting heard of for it. This is not a comedy, so, if you don't want to read it, that is fine. I will not be showing my funny side in this one, this is strictly action/adventure. Although, there is a little comedy in every action film, so, there may be some subtle comedy. I'm only allowing this sign up to go to roughly 20 because the Mods do America had too many and I could barely keep up.
The first 20 (21 including myself) will get in, and if there are extras I'll choose the people that will be in it.
UPDATED LIST:
1. Tornado
2. beyond_th3
3. halo7
4. cg124
5. spiderman_2k
6. Kitty
7. flukeman
8. Starwars411
9. LordofKings
10. poashaggy69
11. Tony_samo
12. UnicornBlood3
13. Muffy
14. Frizzo the Clown
15. SnoBorderZero
16. scifi guy / Mr. Blonde1
17. HeadHunter
18. glsspder
19. Diablo23
20. 2_much_popcorn1
21. Highfire
I should mention this, the ACTUAL DANGER GUILD is comprised of 7 members. So, if I don't know you that well, don't be too surprised if you're not actually in the Danger Guild. You'll have a different part.
beyond_th3
08-04-2004, 08:33 AM
Okay, I am relatively new to this side but what are you doing? Is this like a ongoing story told by many people? What ever it is I want in.
halo7
08-04-2004, 09:40 AM
ill join
Tornado
08-04-2004, 09:43 AM
Okay, I am relatively new to this side but what are you doing? Is this like a ongoing story told by many people? What ever it is I want in.
No, it's a story that only I'll be telling, but, you can join the cast.
halo7
08-04-2004, 09:54 AM
will all the people on this list be on the team or will some be on it and others be villians etc..?
Tornado
08-04-2004, 10:01 AM
Here's how it will be broken down:
- 7 members on the team
- 1 supervillain (boss character)
- 3 or 4 henchmen (depends on how many people sign up)
- professor (leader of the Danger Guild)
- scientist (develops the weapons/technology that the Danger Guild will use)
- a few baddies (just random crime)
- extras if there's that many people interested
And I should mention that I'm really excited to write this, so, there's a good chance that this will turn into a trilogy.
halo7
08-04-2004, 10:03 AM
well everything needs a trilogy these days
cg124
08-04-2004, 10:38 AM
sign me up
spiderman_2k
08-04-2004, 10:46 AM
Sure sign me up.
Kitty
08-04-2004, 11:23 AM
sign me up please! ^_^
flukeman
08-04-2004, 01:01 PM
I'll sign up Tornado :smile:
Starwars411
08-04-2004, 01:13 PM
I'll sign up
LordofKings
08-04-2004, 01:17 PM
sign me up
poashaggy69
08-04-2004, 01:22 PM
yea sign me up for this/
Tony_samo
08-04-2004, 01:24 PM
count me in Torn
Tornado
08-04-2004, 01:55 PM
Hmm... still would like more people. But, it's only been up for about 6 hours.
UnicornBlood3
08-04-2004, 02:11 PM
I guess I'll sign up.
Tornado
08-04-2004, 02:13 PM
You.... guess? I don't want anybody to be hesitant on signing up, it's either a yes or a no.
UnicornBlood3
08-04-2004, 02:30 PM
I'll sign up
Better?
Tornado
08-04-2004, 02:30 PM
Yes, that's better.
Muffy
08-04-2004, 03:19 PM
Sign me up spanky.
Frizzo the Clown
08-04-2004, 03:28 PM
Sign me up, big boy.
SnoBorderZero
08-04-2004, 05:34 PM
Sign me up!
Mr. Blonde1
08-04-2004, 05:36 PM
sign me up, tornado old buddy :D
HeadHunter
08-04-2004, 05:37 PM
sign me up
Tornado
08-04-2004, 05:41 PM
I'm in tornado old buddy :D
LOL, I still can't refer to you as Mr. Blonde, do you care if I call you Scifi Guy in the fic?
Mr. Blonde1
08-04-2004, 05:42 PM
go for it.
Tornado
08-04-2004, 05:43 PM
nah go for it.
Alright cool, makes it easier for me. But, I'll still probably call you Mr. Blonde in the story anyways, that way people will know who you are.
Mr. Blonde1
08-04-2004, 05:44 PM
its all good and gravy
Tony_samo
08-04-2004, 06:05 PM
you should have use the same nick or just making a variation like scifi guy returns, like jedi the White did wile back :wink: nice to have you back
Mr. Blonde1
08-04-2004, 06:08 PM
whenever i get enough posts to have a custom title i'll put scifi guy. thanks for the warm welcome
Tornado
08-05-2004, 07:21 AM
Hmm.... still looking for 4 people, otherwise I'll just have to toss random people in there and I don't want to do that.
Starwars411
08-05-2004, 07:48 AM
You should PM some people asking if they want to join.
Tornado
08-05-2004, 08:17 AM
Meh, I would, but, if I have to PM them to join, chances are they won't enter this forum that often anyways.
glsspder
08-05-2004, 09:12 AM
I am game Tornado
Tony_samo
08-05-2004, 11:34 AM
so, when do you expect to start this?
Tornado
08-05-2004, 12:17 PM
Basically as soon as I get 21 people interested then I'll start picking the cast....
First chapter should be up sometime next week, probably Tuesday.
Diablo
08-05-2004, 06:26 PM
Ill sign up.. .
2_much_popcorn1
08-05-2004, 10:01 PM
ill be in
Highfire
08-05-2004, 10:48 PM
Can I be in?
Tornado
08-06-2004, 07:21 AM
THE FINAL CAST:
1. Tornado
2. beyond_th3
3. halo7
4. cg124
5. spiderman_2k
6. Kitty
7. flukeman
8. Starwars411
9. LordofKings
10. poashaggy69
11. Tony_samo
12. UnicornBlood3
13. Muffy
14. Frizzo the Clown
15. SnoBorderZero
16. scifi guy / Mr. Blonde1
17. HeadHunter
18. glsspder
19. Diablo23
20. 2_much_popcorn1
21. Highfire
Now, if people still want to sign up, they can. But, they won't get a huge role.... ;)
Tornado
08-06-2004, 10:13 AM
The Cast and their Positions:
THE DANGER GUILD
- Frizzo (the leader of the Danger Guild)
- Kitty (the Scientist, creator of the weapons and technology that the DG uses)
- UnicornBlood3 (the killer, close combat expert type)
- Highfire (the patriotic, distant and close combat type)
- Muffy (the outgoing, close combat type)
- Fluke (the beautiful, distant combat)
- Tornado (the quiet but dangerous, hidden combat, type)
- Samo (the intelligent, sniper, not close combat type)
- Glsspder (the wise, expert marksman type)
The Crime Organization:
- HeadHunter (leader of the CO)
- Spiderman_2k (right hand man of HH)
- Diablo (third in charge of the CO)
- CG (hired bounty hunter of the CO)
- Scifi Guy/Mr. Blonde1 (secret assassin of the CO)
- 2much (spy for the CO)
- Halo (the recruit of the CO, specializes in sword play)
The Independent Crime Faction:
- LOK (leader of the ICF)
- Zero (second in charge, good in hand to hand combat)
- Shaggy
- Beyond
- 411
Alright, there are maybe 2 spots open, so, if you still want to be in it act fast. :)
Starwars411
08-06-2004, 11:26 AM
Cool I'm an Independent.
Tornado
08-06-2004, 11:28 AM
I don't want anybody to get offended by their role, nobody's role is particularly small.
halo7
08-06-2004, 11:31 AM
yay im a recruit?
Kitty
08-06-2004, 12:08 PM
im a scientist *puts on glasses and labcoat and starts making weapons* :D
halo7
08-06-2004, 12:10 PM
kitty even as a good guy you scare me
Kitty
08-06-2004, 12:48 PM
kitty even as a good guy you scare me
good :twisted:
Citizen Kane
08-06-2004, 01:08 PM
edit: nm ;)
Tornado
08-06-2004, 01:10 PM
edit: nm ;)
You can still sign up if you want to. Is that what you want?
Mr. Blonde1
08-06-2004, 01:16 PM
sweet- the secret assassin :D
LordofKings
08-06-2004, 01:24 PM
It seems im always a bad guy;)
Bad guys are more fun so im happy about that.... :)
Tornado
08-06-2004, 01:28 PM
Hehehe, meh, I would have been a bad guy, but, all the baddies die in the end. ;)
It'd be funny if the story really ended like that.
*eyes dart back and forth*
;)
glsspder
08-06-2004, 01:29 PM
Yes i am Wise, you know me well young grasshopper :D
SnoBorderZero
08-06-2004, 01:34 PM
Hand to hand?? More of a weapons guy but still cool. So are we like mercenarys for hire or sumthin?
Tornado
08-06-2004, 01:37 PM
Not really, you're exactly that, the Independed Crime Faction. Your group does things like robberies to benefit the group, gang wars, whatever. You're group plays a bigger part then you'd probably expect.
If you still need people to sign up, I'm in!
Tony_samo
08-06-2004, 01:42 PM
excelent! sniper.. kind like Vasily Sispher or the sniper guy from Saving Private Ryan! ;)
krazy_marco74
08-06-2004, 01:43 PM
I'm in, tornado if you still need one more person.
Tornado
08-06-2004, 01:45 PM
The FINAL Cast and their Positions:
THE DANGER GUILD
- Frizzo (the leader of the Danger Guild)
- Kitty (the Scientist, creator of the weapons and technology that the DG uses)
- UnicornBlood3 (the killer, close combat expert type)
- Highfire (the patriotic, distant and close combat type)
- Muffy (the outgoing, close combat type)
- Fluke (the beautiful, distant combat)
- Tornado (the quiet but dangerous, hidden combat, type)
- Samo (the intelligent, sniper, not close combat type)
- Glsspder (the wise, expert marksman type)
The Crime Organization:
- HeadHunter (leader of the CO)
- Spiderman_2k (right hand man of HH)
- Diablo (third in charge of the CO)
- CG (hired bounty hunter of the CO)
- Scifi Guy/Mr. Blonde1 (secret assassin of the CO)
- 2much (spy for the CO)
- Halo (the recruit of the CO, specializes in sword play)
The Independent Crime Faction:
- LOK (leader of the ICF)
- Zero (second in charge, good in hand to hand combat)
- Shaggy
- Beyond
- 411
The Police Force:
- CK (chief of police)
- Iben
- Krazy Marco
- Krull
If there is somebody else, send me a PM and I'll think about it. You may just have to wait for the sequel though. :)
krullglaive
08-06-2004, 01:56 PM
i was just going to be in it if you needed me thats all..but you have enough now..it is ok
Tornado
08-06-2004, 01:57 PM
What are you talking about Krull? You can still join! :)
krullglaive
08-06-2004, 02:02 PM
ok then i will if you want me...
Tornado
08-06-2004, 02:03 PM
Of course I want you in it Krull. :)
poashaggy69
08-06-2004, 02:06 PM
dood sweet im independent...nice. this thread is gonna kick ass.
krullglaive
08-06-2004, 02:10 PM
thank you Tornado !!
Tornado
08-06-2004, 02:30 PM
thank you Tornado !!
No problemo, always happy to oblige. :)
Man Of Steel
08-06-2004, 02:36 PM
I know you dont know me but put me in!!!
Tornado
08-06-2004, 02:37 PM
Sorry mate, it's too late now. Maybe in the sequel.
Man Of Steel
08-06-2004, 02:39 PM
:(:(:( Ok...
Tony_samo
08-06-2004, 02:56 PM
hey Torn, how many chapters or Episodes are you going to make?
Tornado
08-06-2004, 03:00 PM
I honestly don't know, I've got a fairly big list of major action scenes, one for every chapter/episode/scene. And some scenes won't have a huge action scene. And some action scenes will be longer then one chapter.
20 to 30 probably.
SnoBorderZero
08-06-2004, 03:52 PM
Can you make my character sort of an idiot? :)
Tornado
08-06-2004, 03:55 PM
Can you make my character sort of an idiot? :)
I'll see what I can do mate.
SnoBorderZero
08-06-2004, 04:11 PM
Wa Hoo!
Muffy
08-06-2004, 04:13 PM
Muffy (the outgoing, close combat type)
what does this mean
Tornado
08-06-2004, 04:14 PM
Muffy (the outgoing, close combat type)
what does this mean
It's just a description of your character. Meaning, you're outgoing like you are on the boards, and that you'd rather fight close in with a handgun or hand to hand instead of using a sniper rifle or something from a distance.
UnicornBlood3
08-06-2004, 04:14 PM
Woooo I'm a killer. :twisted:
Muffy
08-06-2004, 04:15 PM
so this isnt like super heros? just regular people?
SnoBorderZero
08-06-2004, 04:16 PM
Right you are.
Tornado
08-06-2004, 04:18 PM
so this isnt like super heros? just regular people?
Yes, regular people.... sort of. You'll figure it out in the first couple of chapters.
Muffy
08-06-2004, 04:20 PM
do i get a cool weapon?
Tornado
08-06-2004, 04:22 PM
do i get a cool weapon?
Every member of the team has been equipped with a glock, a hunting knife, and a weapon that is "tailored" to them. Meaning you'll have a weapon that only you are an expert with. For example, the sniper on the DG (Samo) has a high powered assault rifle fitted with a scope capable of taking down enemies at 2000 yards. You'll find out what your weapon is in the first chapter probably.
Muffy
08-06-2004, 04:23 PM
tell me now :(
Tornado
08-06-2004, 04:24 PM
tell me now :frown:
I'll tell you over AIM in a few minutes.
SnoBorderZero
08-06-2004, 04:35 PM
I think Muffy wants a dildo. HAHAHA
Muffy
08-06-2004, 04:38 PM
I think I want you to shut the hell up.
Tornado
08-06-2004, 04:40 PM
Let's not have these out bursts in this thread folks. This is business, not happy hour.
SnoBorderZero
08-06-2004, 04:43 PM
I was jk!! Holy bajeebus!!
Muffy
08-06-2004, 04:50 PM
Sorry, spank me. :(
SnoBorderZero
08-06-2004, 04:51 PM
When does this all start?
Tornado
08-06-2004, 04:52 PM
Sorry, spank me. :(
Maybe later babe. You'll have to drop by my house later. ;)
Tornado
08-06-2004, 04:53 PM
When does this all start?
First chapter will probably be up on Sunday or Monday. I'm still figuring out the specific weapons for people. I've got 3 of them done so far.
SnoBorderZero
08-06-2004, 04:54 PM
OOO maybe instead of making me an idiot you could make me a "gangster". Basically a white guy who acts black and says stuff like Homeskillet.
Tornado
08-06-2004, 04:55 PM
OOO maybe instead of making me an idiot you could make me a "gangster". Basically a white guy who acts black and says stuff like Homeskillet.
OR.... I could do what I was going to do. ;)
Meh, we'll see what happens.
Muffy
08-06-2004, 05:07 PM
My weapon is sexual....
Mr. Blonde1
08-06-2004, 05:36 PM
so is mine ;)
Tornado
08-06-2004, 06:50 PM
Any of the members of the actual Danger Guild:
If anyone is interested in seeing what their specific weapon is, then tell me HERE that you want to know what it is and I'll post a picture and a description of it. Don't PM me about it though, unless you have a problem with the weapon I selected for you.
Tony_samo
08-06-2004, 07:12 PM
I want to know what kind of Character im going to be? like compare, or Example to wich character? or a mix of characters?
Tornado
08-06-2004, 07:14 PM
I want to know what kind of Character im going to be? like compare, or Example to wich character? or a mix of characters?
Nobody's really being "based" off of another character.
SnoBorderZero
08-06-2004, 07:14 PM
I wanna know my weapon!
Tornado
08-06-2004, 07:15 PM
The FINAL Cast and their Positions:
THE DANGER GUILD
- Frizzo (the leader of the Danger Guild)
- Kitty (the Scientist, creator of the weapons and technology that the DG uses)
- UnicornBlood3 (the killer, close combat expert type)
- Highfire (the patriotic, distant and close combat type)
- Muffy (the outgoing, close combat type)
- Fluke (the beautiful, distant combat type)
- Tornado (the quiet but dangerous, hidden combat, type)
- Samo (the intelligent, sniper, not close combat type)
- Glsspder (the wise, expert marksman type)
The Crime Organization:
- HeadHunter (leader of the CO)
- Spiderman_2k (right hand man of HH)
- Diablo (third in charge of the CO)
- CG (hired bounty hunter of the CO)
- Matinee (the shoot first, shoot second, ask questions third guy of the CO)
- Scifi Guy/Mr. Blonde1 (secret assassin of the CO)
- 2much (spy for the CO)
- Halo (the recruit of the CO, specializes in sword play)
The Independent Crime Faction:
- LOK (leader of the ICF)
- Zero (second in charge, good in hand to hand combat)
- Shaggy
- Beyond
- 411
The Police Force:
- CK (chief of police)
- Iben
- Krazy Marco
- Krull
If there is somebody else, send me a PM and I'll think about it. You may just have to wait for the sequel though. :)
Just reposting it because I'm sure some people haven't seen it yet.
Tornado
08-06-2004, 07:16 PM
I wanna know my weapon!
You're not in the actual DG though, you'll probably use fists and a glock or something.
SnoBorderZero
08-06-2004, 07:18 PM
Or my gangsta lingo. wait, that might just want them to kill me more. *Gleep*
Tornado
08-06-2004, 07:21 PM
Or my gangsta lingo. wait, that might just want them to kill me more. *Gleep*
I hope you realize that you in no way have any control over how this turns out. If I want to kill you off in the first sentence, I can. Not that I will, but, it could happen. So.... I suggest that you stop making suggestions, I already know how this is going to turn out and the first several chapters are sort of planned already.
SnoBorderZero
08-06-2004, 07:32 PM
HAHA I was just messing around.
beyond_th3
08-06-2004, 07:40 PM
I am independent, COOL!
Tornado
08-06-2004, 07:42 PM
I still don't know why I called it that. All the people in the independent faction are actually working together. I guess I meant independent as in away from the Organized Crime section.
Mr.Matinee
08-06-2004, 07:57 PM
And I missed this......
Tornado
08-06-2004, 07:59 PM
And I missed this......
I added you in there mate, I remembered that you told me that you wouldn't be online for a while, so, I figured you wouldn't be able to sign up and that you would have if you could have.
Mr.Matinee
08-06-2004, 08:10 PM
Good.......very good.
*cue evil laugh*:wink:
Highfire
08-07-2004, 01:38 AM
Patriotic,distant and close combat,sweet.Thanks man :).
Tornado
08-07-2004, 11:02 AM
Alright, I now have the weapons picked out for all the members of the Danger Guild. They shall be up shortly. 20 minutes tops.
Tornado
08-07-2004, 11:17 AM
Each with have a VERY simple description.
UNI:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v152/Winters21/nami_i1.jpg
An Iaito Katana with a blade that is nearly indestructible.
HIGHFIRE:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v152/Winters21/Amphiaban-b-ma.jpg
Two tactical knives that are used close in combat.
MUFFY:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v152/Winters21/replicaweaponry_1802_1439768.jpg
A whip that can grab people by the neck or feet and trip them up.
FLUKE:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v152/Winters21/crossbow150.jpg
Crossbow that is nearly perfect in accuracy and allows the user to fight from a distance.
Tornado
08-07-2004, 11:18 AM
TORNADO:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v152/Winters21/SM500SB.gif
A stun baton that allows the user to shock and knock out people without killing them. Has a take down time of .75 of a second.
SAMO:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v152/Winters21/brown.jpg
Sniper rifle capable of killing a man at 2000 yards with a well placed headshot.
GLSS:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v152/Winters21/09-2-130.jpg
A gun case that provides the user with 2 handguns and an extra magazine. 21 bullets per magazine.
If anybody has any questions, let me know and I will be happy to answer.
halo7
08-07-2004, 11:27 AM
will you be posting up enemy weapons also?
Starwars411
08-07-2004, 11:27 AM
Cool weapons.
Tornado
08-07-2004, 11:29 AM
will you be posting up enemy weapons also?
Uhhh.... no. That's not really neccessary. The enemies will use fists, knives, and handguns. That's about it.
halo7
08-07-2004, 11:39 AM
and swords
Tornado
08-07-2004, 11:52 AM
Well, true, but, that only applies to you and Uni.
halo7
08-07-2004, 11:54 AM
so what kind of sword do i have?
Tornado
08-07-2004, 12:34 PM
Honestly, it doesn't really matter.
halo7
08-07-2004, 12:38 PM
oh but i think it does how about a straight sword or something whatever you want
Tornado
08-07-2004, 12:43 PM
Don't push your luck.
How about a wooden stick, would you like that as a weapon? Yeah, I think that will do nicely.
poashaggy69
08-07-2004, 01:38 PM
This thing is gonna kick ass...even when i die, which i know i probably will ill still check out this thread...it looks like its going somewhere and somewhere good. good job torn
Tornado
08-07-2004, 01:42 PM
Thanks Shaggy. :)
BTW, anybody that's interested, the character specific weapons for the actual Danger Guild are on the previous page.
2_much_popcorn1
08-07-2004, 03:50 PM
oh oh can i get the handguns;)
Tornado
08-07-2004, 03:51 PM
Most of the members of the CO or the ICF will have handguns. So yes 2much, you will have a handgun.
2_much_popcorn1
08-07-2004, 08:23 PM
score!!!
cg124
08-07-2004, 08:30 PM
This is looking pretty cool
Highfire
08-07-2004, 10:30 PM
I have knives close to the ones you posted for me.Preety cool.
2_much_popcorn1
08-08-2004, 11:49 AM
i like guns, tho knives are good for close combat lol
UnicornBlood3
08-08-2004, 02:48 PM
Ooh pretty sword :)
HeadHunter
08-08-2004, 05:03 PM
[color=firebrick][b]The Crime Organization:
- HeadHunter (leader of the CO)
****ing awsome i am a crime boss :D
Tornado
08-08-2004, 05:08 PM
i like guns, tho knives are good for close combat lol
They've all got glocks too. Some members may just not use them as much as some others.
SnoBorderZero
08-08-2004, 05:22 PM
Sorry to ask again Tornado but when will you have the first chapter posted?
Tornado
08-08-2004, 05:28 PM
Hmmm... not actually too sure. But, most likely tomorrow morning (in my time, central time US).
Tornado
08-08-2004, 08:20 PM
I decided to write sooner, so, without further ado, I present:
Chapter I
*two people are sitting at a fold out card table, it seems as though one is teaching the other to play blackjack*
*the teacher is a man in his mid 30s, he sports a crewcut with a beard connected all the way from ear to ear, he is a well built man who looks like he’s spent his share of time in gym in the Danger Guild’s HQ*
*the girl sitting across from him appears to be in her early 20s, she has long flowing red hair and is pretty slender as well, she looks sort of nervous, as though this is one of her first days on the job, while the man across from him looks about as calm as possible*
Glss - So you still want to learn how to play right?
Muffy - ….. Yeah, sure. I mean yes of course I want to learn.
Glss - I sense a little hesitation in your voice. What’s wrong?
Muffy - As you know I’m new to the Danger Guild. I’m very nervous about the whole thing. What if I’m seen?
Glss - Did you pass the training and the intelligence tests?
Muffy - Oh yeah, they were a piece of cake!
Glss - Then what are you worried about? Those tests show you what may happen in the field. Don’t worry about it. Besides, on most nights it revolves around the 5 of us, now 6 of us just sitting around and watching TV or playing cards. There hasn’t been a whole lot of action lately.
Muffy - 6?
Glss - Oh yeah, I forgot about him. You see, Tornado likes to keep to himself. He’s not very outgoing and tends to stick to the shadows.
Muffy - That can’t be healthy.
Glss - Trust me, when you get to know him as well as I do, you’ll find that being surrounded by darkness is his nature.
Muffy - As long as he likes it.
Glss - He prefers it.
*one man is sitting at a table with a pair of glasses on, examining the scope on a sniper rifle, cleaning it and working maintenance on it, he has a small build to him, but just by looking at him you can tell that he’s seen his fair share of time on the police force as a sniper, a very intelligent man in his late 20s*
Samo - Just a few more corrections, and I should be good to go with this one.
In Another Room of the DG HQ
*two people are sitting on the couch, quickly surfing through the channels on the TV, not really taking any time to just watch one for more then a few seconds*
*the girl on the left has short blonde/brown hair and appears to be in her early 20s, she has a fit body and looks like she really puts forth the effort to stay in shape for her job*
*the girl on the left has curly medium length brown hair, in excellent physical condition with a samurai sword sitting on the couch next to her*
Fluke - Why is your sword on the couch? It’s going to cut through the cushion.
Uni - What are you talking about? It’ll be fine, besides, it’s not like we’re paying for this couch. This place is government funded, it’ll be OK.
*Fluke rolls her eyes and goes back to watching TV*
Uni - What?
In the Basement of the DG HQ
*a man in his mid 20s is hanging from a bar doing chin-ups, he is in excellent condition and sports a sort of dirty blondish hair, and is armed with two amphibian knives at his sides, he looks ready to strike at a moment’s notice*
*a second man is sitting atop a rafter, in a crouched position with a stun baton dangling from his belt, the man is in his mid 20s also and sports short brownish hair, with stubble from ear to ear, he just sits there like that’s what he was trained to do, not make noise*
Highfire - How can you do that? Just sit there and not make any noise at all I mean.
Tornado - Meh, I am the hidden combat expert on the team. Gotta give me a little credit there mate.
Highfire - That’s true, I suppose.
*Highfire goes back to doing chin-ups while Tornado just sits there and closes his eyes*
*suddenly an alarm goes off inside the building and everyone jumps to attention, while Tornado and Highfire walk up the stairs to the main room to meet with the other 7 members*
Muffy - So that’s Tornado!
*Glss pokes her in the side with his elbow and puts his finger to his mouth to shush her*
*a man in his 50s walks in, he has brownish shaggy hair with a full beard, the man is in fantastic shape for his age and walks with pride into a room*
Frizzo - There’s been a problem at the airport.
Highfire - Let me guess. Another highjacking?
Frizzo - Not quite. But you’re half right. 5 armed men boarded the plane and told everybody to get off unless they wanted to die. They’re going to be leaving the ground in roughly 20 minutes I’ve been told.
Uni - How are they going to get off the ground with---
Frizzo - The captains are still on board.
Uni - Right, right, right.
Frizzo - Now then, unless you have any other questions, get suited up, grab your weapons, and get to the van.
*as the group is heading off towards the lobby, Frizzo says.........*
Frizzo - And remember. You don’t exist. Now go get ‘em.
*Frizzo heads off in the opposite direction while the Danger Guild heads to the closets, and emerge in their outfits that consist of black skin-tight suits with a different colored circle on the right side of the chest for every member, that circle is actually a tracking device that shows up on the radar screens back at the HQ*
*Highfire is blue, Uni is red, Muffy is violet, Fluke is green, Samo is orange, Glss is yellow, and Tornado is white*
*the seven of them grab their specific weapons, and their glocks, and then head out the doors to the van waiting for them that resembles a SWAT team van, they get in as it drives off in the direction of the airport*
Mr.Matinee
08-08-2004, 08:25 PM
Niiiiiiiiiiiice.:D
UnicornBlood3
08-08-2004, 08:34 PM
Great chapter one Torn! I can tell this will be good. :)
Tony_samo
08-08-2004, 09:05 PM
Amazing! great intros and Great Start! very cool Torn! keep the good work mate ;), and try to bring the next chapter A.S.A.P.
krullglaive
08-08-2004, 09:08 PM
yes ..it is very good..i enjoyed reading it and i am looking forward to reading more...
flukeman
08-08-2004, 10:12 PM
Great start Tornado (and I love that I get a crossbow :) )
Diablo
08-08-2004, 11:12 PM
Great Start Torn.. Love it..
Highfire
08-08-2004, 11:15 PM
*a man in his mid 20s is hanging from a bar doing chin-ups, he is in excellent condition and sports a sort of dirty blondish hair, and is armed with two amphibian knives at his sides, he looks ready to strike at a moment’s notice*
:cool: This is going to be awesome.You make me sound a lot cooler that I am in real life. :P
poashaggy69
08-08-2004, 11:35 PM
seriously dude nice.
SnoBorderZero
08-09-2004, 12:13 AM
Good start. Can't wait to see what our team is like.
HeadHunter
08-09-2004, 02:56 AM
Great start dude....but i mean...you watched the Power Rangers as a kid didnt you ;)
Not complaining..was a great show...keep em coming :D
Tornado
08-09-2004, 07:14 AM
Great start dude....but i mean...you watched the Power Rangers as a kid didnt you ;)
Not complaining..was a great show...keep em coming :D
Did the power rangers ever stop hijacked planes? ;)
Tornado
08-09-2004, 07:20 AM
Oh, do you mean because of the colors? It's just a filled in circle in the corner of their flak jackets. It's not the color of their entire suit if that's what you're thinking.
Besides, it's a tracking device too. It has a reason for being there. ;)
Tornado
08-09-2004, 08:30 AM
Meh, felt like writing ;) :
Chapter II
*the van continues driving down the streets of New York towards JFK airport*
*some of the members of the team are trying to focus on what’s about to happen, Uni has her head down in prayer, Tornado is leaning back against the van wall with his eyes closed, Highfire is cleaning off one of his knives, Fluke has her hand on the weapon case next to her on the chair*
*Samo is up in front, driving the van, while Glss is just sitting back, enjoying the ride, when Muffy speaks out*
Muffy - I can’t take this, why all the silence?
Fluke - It helps some of the people on the team, it’s like the exhilaration before the wave hits you, you know?
Muffy - How could silence help? Wouldn’t it be best to formulate a game plan?
Uni - The one thing you’ll come to understand about the 6 of us, is that we already know exactly what we’re going to do. Samo is going to walk into the airport with the case next to Fluke--
*Fluke taps the case with her hand*
Uni - After we take out our weapons of course. Samo is going to walk up to the top of the airport roof, and lay down and look to shoot the tires of the plane. Highfire and Tornado are going to breach the helicopter on two of the silent stalkers--
Muffy - Silent stalkers?
Uni - Yeah, they’re these black surfboard type things that are powered by two jet propulsion systems on the back. They’re called silent stalkers because you can sneak up on someone without them having a clue about it.
Muffy - Ahh, makes sense.
Uni - So anyways, Tornado and Highfire will go in on those. Highfire will go the side of the plane and enter through the right side. Tornado will go up into one of the tire compartments and attack from the shadows.
Tornado - It’s what I do best.
Uni - Righty-o. Muffy, Glss, Fluke, and myself will stand back and wait for the signal to go ahead. Now we were “told” that there were only 5 men involved in this. But, somehow I’m thinking that it’s more around 10 or so. The Professor is wrong a lot.
Fluke - So what happened to not having a game plan?
Uni - Meh, I made one.
Samo - Clearly.
*the van stops about 250 yards from the airplane, as Tornado and Highfire pull the Silent Stalkers out from underneath the van, and set them on the ground as they lay down on them*
*everyone files out of the van, Samo opens up the weapons case and grabs his sniper rifle, then walks in the direction of the building*
*Uni and Fluke kneel down next to the starter cords for the Silent Stalkers, Fluke hands Tornado his stun baton, while Highfire already has his amphibian knives attached to his thigh and belt*
Fluke - You guys ready?
Highfire - You better believe it.
*the two women pull the cords as Highfire and Tornado take off into the night on the SS’s, while the other 4 members of the team still at the van, grab their weapons and kneel down by the side of the van, waiting to be told to infiltrate*
HeadHunter
08-09-2004, 08:44 AM
WOO....we gonna get some action soon :D
Nice one torn
halo7
08-09-2004, 10:34 AM
even better chapter good job torn
Mr. Blonde1
08-09-2004, 11:57 AM
good job my friend. :)
UnicornBlood3
08-09-2004, 02:54 PM
I have my head down in prayer. Hehe It makes me sound all innocent. ;)
Fantastic job Torn.
Highfire
08-09-2004, 03:06 PM
This is great.I sound really cool in this story :).I am going to have fun reading this.
glsspder
08-09-2004, 03:19 PM
Great job Torn.
Be cool if someone draws up a sketch of the team :D those artisticly inclined of course
Tornado
08-09-2004, 03:23 PM
Hey, if someone would be kind enough to make a Theatrical Poster for it, I would be pretty grateful. :)
You could just use the descriptions I posted in the first chapter. :)
If no one wants to though, that would be fine, no big deal, just thought it would be cool.
2_much_popcorn1
08-09-2004, 03:27 PM
AWESOME JOB MAN...... but when does 2 much the most important character come into play lol ;)
Tornado
08-09-2004, 03:31 PM
AWESOME JOB MAN...... but when does 2 much the most important character come into play lol ;)
Probably chapter 4. But most important? ;)
Most likely chapter 4, but, that doesn't mean stop reading until then. ;)
SnoBorderZero
08-09-2004, 03:33 PM
Cool, reminds me of that level in Enter The Matrix.
2_much_popcorn1
08-09-2004, 03:34 PM
lol ill keep reading, and if i have time tonight i might draw some poster art up
Tornado
08-09-2004, 03:34 PM
lol ill keep reading, and if i have time tonight i might draw some poster art up
That would be cool, thanks. :)
Tornado
08-09-2004, 03:36 PM
Cool, reminds me of that level in Enter The Matrix.
Yes, that was part of my influence for this chapter. As was the movie SWAT. But, neither one of them really plays any part in what's about to happen.
Tornado
08-09-2004, 06:35 PM
Don't expect this much a day for too long... ;) :
Chapter III
*Highfire and Tornado continue skimming across the pavement on the Silent Stalkers, Highfire looks to be enjoying the rush, while Tornado has his eyes closed like he’s focusing on something*
Highfire - What are you focusing on?
Tornado - You know how Uni said that you’re going in on the right?
Highfire - Yeah?
Tornado - Well, you’re going to go in through the top now. Before we started skimming I saw a hatch that you could easily climb through.
Highfire - Well, that’s all fine and dandy, but how am I going to get up there?
Tornado - You just leave that to me.
*Tornado hits the accelerator on the side of the SS and speeds on past Highfire*
Highfire - That guy always has some trick up his sleeve.
*Tornado continues riding along the ground, and then he quickly whips a u-turn so that his SS is laying out in the middle of the path that Highfire is treading along, Tornado flips the SS over on the side so that it’s a ramp as Highfire comes closer to it*
*Tornado crawls under the bottom of the flipped SS to brace the weight of Highfire’s SS as he comes barreling forward towards the ramped SS*
*Highfire’s SS hits the ramp and goes flying into the night’s sky over the airplane, in midair Highfire stands up and does a backflip off the SS and landing on top of the plane with his amphibian knives drawn in a crouching position*
*Highfire watches as Tornado flips his SS back over, lays on it and takes off towards the wheel and out of view*
*Highfire calmly walks over to the hatch, but people from inside the plane begin shooting through the roof, High rolls left and ride, jumps and dives to the sides and forward to avoid the bullets, he rolls on top of the hatch as he managed to miss all the stray bullets*
*he opens up the hatch, and drops inside the plane, landing in the cockpit to find the two pilots tied up and knocked out in the corner*
Highfire - What the hell?
*outside, Tornado reaches the tires, and gets off his SS, then begins climbing up the tire into the tire compartment*
Highfire - If the pilots are tied up, then, they obviously didn’t want to leave. This was a trap.
*High reaches into his side pocket and pulls out a communication device*
Highfire - Tornado, I believe we will be taking off fairly soon.
Tornado - How do you figure that?
Highfire - Because the pilots are tied up.
*suddenly the tires begin folding back into the plane as Tornado quickly scrambles higher up the beams inside the compartment rooms to avoid being hit by the tires*
*Highfire looks at the control panel to see that it’s just a bunch of buttons that don’t control anything*
Highfire - This, is not the cockpit obviously, but where is it?
*unexpectedly, the door to the room that Highfire is standing in, is kicked down and 3 men move into the room*
*Highfire slides his knives out from the insides of his jacket, and then bends down and stabs one of the men in the thighs*
*Highfire does a quick spin and catches the second man in the neck with the blade of the knife, and then jabs the other stiletto into the third man’s chest*
Highfire - ****. This is not good.
Back at the Van.....
Fluke - What’s taking them so long? This was a routine mission.
Glss - Patience, we must have patience.
Uni - Screw that, I’m going in.
*Uni takes her sword by the hilt and begins running to the plane*
Highfire
08-09-2004, 06:47 PM
This is getting exciting.I wonder what will happen?
Mr. Blonde1
08-09-2004, 06:57 PM
This story is quite interesting. :)
2_much_popcorn1
08-09-2004, 08:41 PM
this is awesome, post like 5 chapters a day lol
Tornado
08-09-2004, 08:43 PM
Yeah.... right.... ;)
One per day, possible two if I'm feeling well.
2_much_popcorn1
08-09-2004, 08:47 PM
tornado im almost done with your poster art
Tornado
08-09-2004, 08:49 PM
tornado im almost done with your poster art
Alright cool man, thanks a lot. I'll probably be gone when you post it, but, that's still cool. :)
2_much_popcorn1
08-09-2004, 09:06 PM
well here it is
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v90/2_much_popcorn1/100_0354.jpg
Starwars411
08-09-2004, 09:07 PM
Great chapter.
Nice pic man.
cg124
08-09-2004, 10:10 PM
Great chapters!
Highfire
08-09-2004, 11:21 PM
Cool pic
SnoBorderZero
08-09-2004, 11:34 PM
Yet another cool chapter. I loved that poster art so much it's now my desktop background.
2_much_popcorn1
08-10-2004, 05:33 AM
lol nice
Tornado
08-10-2004, 07:30 AM
Thanks guys, and nice drawing 2much, we can use that one. :)
Mr. Blonde1
08-10-2004, 07:48 AM
Torn, if you ever start writing for comic books, send me a free copy! :) good stuff pal.
Tornado
08-10-2004, 07:50 AM
Hehehe, will do bud. :)
redman
08-10-2004, 08:40 AM
this is so kewl. fan fic is awesome. more chapters tornado!
Tornado
08-10-2004, 09:00 AM
Well I'm still brainstorming for Chapter 4, so, it'll be up in at least 5 hours.
Starwars411
08-10-2004, 09:28 AM
Can't wait.
HeadHunter
08-10-2004, 12:03 PM
more cool chapters torny....but a suspicious lack of Crime Boss ;)...
Tony_samo
08-10-2004, 12:34 PM
Negative Color Poster
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v51/Tony_Samo/Danger_Guild.jpg
Tornado
08-10-2004, 12:36 PM
Wow! Damn man, that's some talent right there! :applaud:
Tony_samo
08-10-2004, 12:40 PM
Original Poster
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v51/Tony_Samo/Danger_Guild1.jpg
Tornado
08-10-2004, 12:42 PM
Quick question though, who's who? On the far left is Uni I know, and I'm pretty sure that that's you Samo on the far right. Highfire in the middle right perhaps?
HeadHunter
08-10-2004, 12:46 PM
well here it is
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v90/2_much_popcorn1/100_0354.jpg
Hey man great poster....so good i thought i would give it the computer makeover...to a point.....*Sorry if i offend you* :(
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v67/elkinss/Pictures/dangerguild.jpg
Tony_samo
08-10-2004, 12:47 PM
well, I think: Uni, (You)Tornado, Highfire and Me(Tony Samo)
ps. 2much's poster could be the Teaser Poster ;)
HeadHunter
08-10-2004, 12:49 PM
Original Poster
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v51/Tony_Samo/Danger_Guild1.jpg
Nice one mate...you should do themed ones....like for the baddies too :D
Mr.Matinee
08-10-2004, 12:50 PM
The Villans get no respect.;)
good posters,2_much and Tony.:D
Tony_samo
08-10-2004, 12:54 PM
yea sure headhunter, I'll try to add some more posters, and i tought I'll also post some pics of the action.. I mean like scene stills ;).. but only if I have time to do it
HeadHunter
08-10-2004, 12:55 PM
sounds good :D
Tornado
08-10-2004, 01:04 PM
Hmm.... I'll probably start writing Chapter 4 in the next couple of minutes.
HeadHunter
08-10-2004, 01:08 PM
do the baddies actually appear??
Tornado
08-10-2004, 01:10 PM
do the baddies actually appear??
How many times have we been over this mate? ;)
They appear at the midpoint of Chapter 4.... possibly. ;)
Tony_samo
08-10-2004, 01:12 PM
here's the First Banner
Negative Color Poster
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v51/Tony_Samo/danger2.jpg
Tornado
08-10-2004, 01:17 PM
Dude, I'm in awe.... :applaud:
Tony_samo
08-10-2004, 01:21 PM
Thanks, well enough Posters for today... keep up with the Next Chaper Torn! ;)
Tornado
08-10-2004, 01:45 PM
Oh boy ;) :
Chapter IV
*Tornado is in between two poles in the landing gear compartment, with his back against one and his feet against the other*
Outside the Plane........
*Uni continues running with her sword drawn towards the now moving plane, but she knows she won’t catch up to it, she sees Tornado’s SS laying on the ground*
On the Rooftop......
*Samo is sitting against the wall on the roof, whistling to himself when he hears the plane start to move*
Samo - Huh?
*Samo rolls onto his stomach and looks through the scope of his sniper to see two men at the front of the cockpit, the pilots most likely*
Samo - Fifth freedom here I come!
*Samo pulls the trigger on the sniper and takes out the two pilots from over 2000 yards away*
Samo - Nice shootin’ tex.
*he turns the sniper to see a man dressed in black crouching right in front of the scope*
Shaggy - Hiya.
*Shaggy throws a right fist at Samo, but Tony does a quick backwards roll to land on his feet*
*Shaggy quickly pulls out his gun and aims it right at Tony’s chest*
Samo - Go ahead, shoot. I dare you. I don’t think you can, you won’t kill another person.
*Shaggy’s hand begins to sweat*
Samo - Go ahead, shoot. Why not? Isn’t your mission to kill me? It looks as though you’re about to fail that mission bud. Just pull the trigger, if you can. Just pull it! Pull the damn trigger!
*Shaggy shoots 4 rounds into Samo’s chest*
Samo - Did you honestly think I could show up without a bulletproof vest on? Dumbass...
*Samo rips off his vest and swings it at Shaggy’s head, knocking him backwards off the roof, Shaggy lands in a garbage truck as it drives off*
Samo - That sucks. ;)
*Samo sits back down at the sniper rifle*
Inside the Plane.......
*Highfire walks out into the passenger section of the plane, and pulls out his glock and one of his knives, he slowly walks through the aisles, until a man with a mask on jumps out at him, but Highfire catches him with a knife to the gut, and then lets him fall to the ground as he continues walking through the aisles*
*slowly Zero walks up from behind Highfire, and grabs him by the neck, twists it, and knocks him down to the ground*
*a man walks out from the shadows, and stands in front of the knocked out Highfire*
LOK - Looks like we have our first captive boys.
*the plane takes off the ground, without a pilot*
LOK - What the hell? How did we leave the ground? There’s no ****ing pilot!
Outside the Plane.....
*Uni jumps onto the SS which catapults her into the air and over the airplane, but she lands on the right wing, and then stabs her sword through the metal, and cuts open a hole in the side of the plane*
*Glss, Muffy, and Fluke get back into the van and take off in pursuit of the now flying airplane*
Inside the Plane.....
*Tornado continues climbing higher along the structure beams, until he reaches a floor panel that can open up into the cockpit*
*Tornado pushes on it and climbs out into the cockpit and puts his back to the wall as he listens to LOK and Zero discuss something, but out of the corner of his eye he sees Uni crouching down with her sword on the left side of the passenger section*
Tornado - I won’t have her risk another mission. Not again.
*Tornado pulls out his glock, and the silencer scope, then sets it to stun and fires a dart into one of Uni’s legs, luckily she falls down onto a cushion laying on the ground and makes minimal noise*
LOK - Zero, we need to abandon this plan, we’re flying into the sky with no pilot. This is ridiculous, and, we are not alone. I heard what sounded like a bullet being shot a couple of seconds ago. We’ve got our chutes, let’s use them.
Zero - Right boss.
*LOK walks over to the side of the plane where the emergency parachutes are, he and Zero grab two of them for themselves, and then they throw the rest of them out the window*
*LOK and Zero walk over to the hatch, the lower the ramp and dive out the back of the plane*
*Tornado gets up from his hiding spot after he hears the two people jump out*
Tornado - Damnit.
HeadHunter
08-10-2004, 01:54 PM
woot woot.....theres no WAT they can get out of that ;)
Mr.Matinee
08-10-2004, 02:12 PM
Things are getting interesting...:D
UnicornBlood3
08-10-2004, 02:35 PM
You shot me! ;)
Nice chapter :)
Highfire
08-10-2004, 03:11 PM
Cool chapter,but I got knocked out :(,but I stabbed a guy :).I like the poster,Samo.I look cool.
2_much_popcorn1
08-10-2004, 03:11 PM
nice chapter
UnicornBlood3
08-10-2004, 03:13 PM
Wooo nice posters Samo! :D
Tony_samo
08-10-2004, 03:23 PM
Thanks!... I'll add some more in a couple of days... in the First Banner thats you uni! looks like you and ????? have something ;)
Starwars411
08-10-2004, 03:34 PM
Great chapter Torn. Can't wait for the next one.
HeadHunter
08-10-2004, 04:28 PM
Thanks!... I'll add some more in a couple of days... in the First Banner thats you uni! looks like you and ????? have something ;)
It looks like Frizzo :hehe:
2_much_popcorn1
08-10-2004, 05:17 PM
here's the First Banner
Negative Color Poster
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v51/Tony_Samo/danger2.jpg
watch those hands tornado ;)
Starwars411
08-10-2004, 05:37 PM
Lol
UnicornBlood3
08-10-2004, 05:50 PM
Ya'll are bad. :P
redman
08-10-2004, 07:56 PM
that was a kewl chapter tornado.
hahaha. uni got shot.:P
cg124
08-10-2004, 07:59 PM
Great chapter
krullglaive
08-10-2004, 08:04 PM
nice posters ..great writing ..
Tornado
08-10-2004, 08:05 PM
watch those hands tornado ;)
Hehehe..... I wish--- I mean that's not me. ;)
It's probably going to end up being---
*suddenly has a heart failure and is rushed to the hospital*
;)
2_much_popcorn1
08-10-2004, 08:48 PM
Lmao
glsspder
08-10-2004, 09:24 PM
GLSS:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v152/Winters21/09-2-130.jpg
A gun case that provides the user with 2 handguns and an extra magazine. 21 bullets per magazine.
If anybody has any questions, let me know and I will be happy to answer.
Gotta Love twin guns John Woo Style Baby.
SnoBorderZero
08-10-2004, 10:30 PM
YAY! Wow it was so cool being in it, like an honor!! Very awesome, keep them coming!
Tornado
08-11-2004, 07:32 AM
YAY! Wow it was so cool being in it, like an honor!! Very awesome, keep them coming!
Heheh, you make it sound like you're dead. ;)
HeadHunter
08-11-2004, 07:37 AM
more :angry:
;)
Tornado
08-11-2004, 07:38 AM
more :angry:
;)
Meh.... we'll see. ;)
Chapter 5 will be up at some point today.... when? I don't know.
Tornado
08-11-2004, 10:33 AM
Well... the villains still aren't known yet, but, next chapter for sure, this chapter was originally longer, but, after viewing the length I decided to trim some of it for the next one:
Chapter 5
*Tornado walks over to check on Highfire and Uni, but they are still both out cold, Tornado pulls the dart out of Uni’s leg thinking that perhaps she will recover sooner*
*Tornado suddenly gets an idea and he takes off sprinting towards the cockpit, he continues running and then hits the door of the cockpit*
*he tries to open the door but it’s locked*
Tornado - Damnit. Well, here goes.
*he throws a punch through the door, but doesn’t open it because he’s seen more then enough already*
*all the parts required to operate the plane are disconnected from the control panel and laying on the floor*
Tornado - Even if I knew how to fix this I couldn’t do anything about it. Damnit. I need to find a way for the two of them to escape, I’ve got my way already.
*Tornado gets an idea and rips two seats out of their places on the floor of the plane, as he feels the plane rising higher and higher, Uni is becoming to come to*
Uni - What’s going on T?
Tornado - I’ll sum it up for you basically. We’re on a plane with no pilots, and the cockpit is torn apart. There are no more emergency parachute packs either. We have to make do with what we’ve got.
Uni - What are you doing?
Tornado - I’m tearing up these seats, it’s possible that the two of you could ride them down to the ground, and hopefully pull up at the very end of the drop and skid along the ground. It’s possible, but, highly dangerous.
Uni - Well, we are the Danger Guild. If we die then it was our time to die. We led a good life.
Tornado - Stop thinking like that and try to wake Fire up! We don’t have much time!
*Uni walks over to Fire and kneels down by his side and hits him in the chest, and then slaps him in the face a few times*
Uni - Nothing.
*Tornado finishes his plans for the chairs and walks over to Fire, whips out his stun baton and jabs him in the chest with it, sending 500,000 volts of electricity into him*
Uni - Nothing.
Tornado - Check his pulse, is he dead?
*Uni feels Fire’s wrist*
Uni - It’s very slow, but, he’s still alive.
Tornado - Well then we don’t have any other choice. You’re going to have to pilot one of the chairs down to the ground, but you’re both going to have to be on it.
Uni - That’s ridiculous.
Tornado - I know, but, you have to. It’s the only way.
On the Ground........
*Samo is walking to the van which stopped for some reason, he climbs in as the van takes off*
*Muffy pulls out her comlink*
Muffy - Uni, you there?
*they only hear static*
Muffy - No answer. Do we continue pursuing?
Glss - You have much to learn yet. Our team is like a family. We never give up!
*Glss hits the gas on the van and it takes off in pursuit of the plane*
Glss - Muffy, you see that red button?
*Muffy glances at the control panel of the van*
Muffy - Yeah?
Glss - Hit it.
*Muffy slams on the button as the van shoots off even quicker then before, now approaching 170 mph*
Fluke *whispers to herself* - We’re coming guys. Hang in there.
Onboard the Plane.........
*Tornado drags Fire to the hatch opening as Uni grabs the chair and follows him*
*Tornado lifts up Fire and sets him on the front of the nearly flat chair, and Uni sits on the back and grabs the front of the chair over Fire*
Tornado - You ready?
Uni - As ready as I’ll ever be.
*Tornado gives a push and the chair with the two riders soars out into the night sky and down to the ground*
*he watches as the chair nears the ground and Uni pulls back on the chair as it skids across the ground and towards the van*
*the van screeches to a halt and the back doors open as Glss and Uni help Highfire into the back of the van, they all load back inside and continue driving towards the plane*
In the Van.........
Fluke - Is he alright?
Uni - Yeah, he’ll be fine. He just got the wind knocked out of him.
Glss - That was a very brave thing you did.
Uni - Yeah? Thanks, I try. Hopefully Tornado can pull something off.
halo7
08-11-2004, 10:47 AM
nice chapter torn
HeadHunter
08-11-2004, 10:55 AM
damn....they survived
flukeman
08-11-2004, 12:15 PM
Good stuff so far Tornado :)
UnicornBlood3
08-11-2004, 02:44 PM
Great chapter Torn.
HH you wanted us to die! :( :P
2_much_popcorn1
08-11-2004, 03:31 PM
keep the chaps coming
Tornado
08-11-2004, 04:15 PM
New avatar. ;)
HeadHunter
08-11-2004, 04:24 PM
Great chapter Torn.
HH you wanted us to die! :( :P
Dur...i wouldnt me much of a crime boss if i wanted you to live...tho the girls can become my slave girls if you want ;)
HeadHunter
08-11-2004, 04:25 PM
New avatar. ;)
I wanna make one of those now :P
Highfire
08-11-2004, 04:30 PM
damn....they survived
You bastard ;)
I almost died :omg: .Cool chapter torn and great avatar.
HeadHunter
08-11-2004, 05:08 PM
You bastard ;)
I almost died :omg: .Cool chapter torn and great avatar.
hehe I am the bad guy.....what you ecpect ;)
cg124
08-11-2004, 05:35 PM
nice avatar HH
HeadHunter
08-11-2004, 05:41 PM
hehe...thanks...Torn started the craze....
...we have one for the independants if they want it...but i havent seen any of them yet :P
beyond_th3
08-11-2004, 05:42 PM
I am waiting for my brief impact in this story. I know it will be awesome.
Starwars411
08-11-2004, 09:18 PM
I'll take the one for the independents, just make it 50 x 50.
flukeman
08-11-2004, 09:39 PM
Like the avatars Tornado and HH :)
Tornado, I'll be taking a stab at a poster/illustration pretty soon, I have some free time coming up and I feel like sketching.
Mr.Matinee
08-11-2004, 10:45 PM
HH,Am I supposed to be Mr.Blonde?;)
SnoBorderZero
08-11-2004, 10:50 PM
Awesome avatar 411!!
Starwars411
08-11-2004, 11:43 PM
I got it from spiderman_2k.
Tornado
08-12-2004, 07:19 AM
Like the avatars Tornado and HH :)
Tornado, I'll be taking a stab at a poster/illustration pretty soon, I have some free time coming up and I feel like sketching.
Cool, sounds good Fluke, thanks! :)
HeadHunter
08-12-2004, 08:22 AM
I got it from spiderman_2k.
Yeah and I made it :P
HeadHunter
08-12-2004, 08:47 AM
HH,Am I supposed to be Mr.Blonde?;)
Hey sorry dude...i used the wrong list and didnt have you on that list....you are now officially part of my organisation ;)
Tornado
08-12-2004, 08:52 AM
And yet you still haven't added him to your avatar. ;)
HeadHunter
08-12-2004, 08:54 AM
And yet you still haven't added him to your avatar. ;)
it wouldnt upload at the time...it is sorted now :P
Tornado
08-12-2004, 08:57 AM
Yep....
Chapter 6 should be up in the next 10 minutes or so, we'll see. ;)
Starwars411
08-12-2004, 09:09 AM
Yeah and I made it :P
Sorry, I got it from HH, I got the smaller version from spidy.
HeadHunter
08-12-2004, 09:11 AM
Sorry, I got it from HH, I got the smaller version from spidy.
Better ;)
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