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The Night of Death 2: Mas Asesinatos
1rst Surgeon: What the heck was he?
2nd Surgeon: Some sort of so-called superhero. Heard he lost his mind. Someone kicked him out of this town and then he got pissed and he took his revenge on all of the townsfolk. 1rst Surgeon: Well I read about what happened in the paper. That guy Oj got a good job there at the police department now. 2nd Surgeon: How long has it been, and who's giving this guy a funeral anyways? 1rst Surgeon: It's been about two months. I can't believe that they left his body here for so long. As for the funeral I have no idea who this guy is. It was a cool January night. It was two months ago on this night when SMF77 went on a killing spree across CaSpie City. A few were killed and a few survived. Nothing bad has happened ever since that terrible night. Until now... A dark figure slipped through the alley behind the room where the two surgeons were talking. The person lifted up his/her trenchcoat a little bit and walked in. He/She walked through the doors and all and went into the room where the two men were at. The 1rst Surgeon looks up at the person and says... 1rst Surgeon: Yes? If you are the one who is waiting for this body your going to have to wait awhile---hey! The person pushed the 1rst Surgeon out of the way and rummaged through SMF77's pockets. He/She found a piece of paper and gently tucked it in one of his/her pockets in his/her trenchcoat. He/She turned around and looked at the two surgeons. Man: Thank you. I just needed him out so I could get that one thing. Alright you can throw away the body. The 2nd Surgeon stepped up in front of the person and said... 2nd Surgeon: Wait right there. If your the one who wanted his body then your going to get it, now just wait, and give me that paper that you took from his pocket. The 2nd Surgeon extended his hand out in front of the person in order to get the paper. The person sighed and put his/her hand in his/her pocket to get the paper. But the person didn't take out the paper. The person took out a pocket knife. With a click the knife popped up. The person gave an evil grin to the 2nd Surgeon who walked a couple of steps back. The person ran in front of the 2nd Surgeon and cut his extended hand off. The 2nd Surgeon screamed in pain and horror at his hand lying there in a pool of blood on the floor. The 1rst Surgeon took out a little scapel and pointed it at the person. 1rst Surgeon: Get back! I know who you are! Leave me alone! I have a wife and kids! The person laughed at the 1rst Surgeon and came inches away from his face and said... Person: So? And that moment the person stabbed the 1rst Surgeon in the heart, pulling out his heart actually. The person let the heart come off of his knife and lie there on the floor. The body of the 1rst Surgeon fell on the floor lifeless as the person walked out of the room wiping off the blood from his hands with a hankerchif that he stuffed into his pocket. You see the person walk out of the building and looked up at the night sky. The person walked back into the alley and then the camera zoomed out of the alley and into the night sky. Then it revealed the title... The Night of Death 2: Mas Asesinatos
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(this shall be updated in a little bit)
*looks back at the first one to see who were the survivors*
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(alright so it was Tardumb, Colorado Cajun, Iben, funnie bunnie, Malice, Landlord Citizen Kane, bbf2, JBond, Reporter Empusae, and Trainee Oj who survived in the first one, i need to add other peoples, i'll do it in time, but here we go)
Colorado Cajun and Iben were at CC's apartment watching television at Downtown CaSpie. They were kissing each other here and there when they were interrupted by a news report. Iben: Hey look it's that reporter again, CC. Colorado Cajun: Yep it is. Iben and Colorado Cajun watched the news brief as Reporter Empusae appeared on the screen in front of a building that was lighted up with a few police cars' headlights. He moved a little bit of hair away from his eyes and he held up the microphone closer to his mouth and began to speak. Reporter Empusae: Were here at the scene of the two terrible murders where sources tell us that a man dressed in black with a trenchcoat walked in, took something from the corpse of SMF77, cut off a surgeon's hand, and took out the other surgeon's heart. Of course were not allowed inside at this moment but we believe that it might be one of SMF77's friends who came in and did this. Everyone in Japa-CaSpie is to remain inside their houses right now as we look for the murderer. Reporter Empusae adjusted his glasses and wiped a tiny bit of sweat away from his forehead as he said... Reporter Empusae: This is Reporter Empusae, back to you now Jenny. CC and Iben looked at each other as CC turned off the television. He looked at Iben and said... Colorado Cajun: Iben, don't worry, just must be some stupid crazy man. Besides, I'm here to protect you anyways. Iben smiled at CC as he gave her a long kiss. funnie bunnie changed the channel after she watched the report at her home in Japa-CaSpie. funnie bunnie: This is great... funnie bunnie walks up to her front and back door to make sure that there locked, and yes they were. funnie bunnie wiped the tiny bit of sweat off of her forehead. funnie bunnie: There all jumping to conclusions. funnie bunnie turned around and looked around the room as she heard a footstep. funnie bunnie: This is getting better and better. What kind of stupid thing is this? Next thing you know it's going to turn into scream when some stupid@ss comes behind me with a mask on and a knife in one hand. funnie bunnie giggled and walked back into the living room where she was watching television. Then her phone rang. She jumped up a little bit and slowly picked up the phone... funnie bunnie: Hello? Landlord Citizen Kane: Hi bunny, you alright? funnie bunnie: Yes I am, what's wrong? Landlord Citizen Kane: Oh nothing, just being tied up in rope here since this other person is threatening to kill me. Luckily I got to the phone. the person is in the other room making a pb&j sandwich. funnie bunnie: And why the heck did you call me then? Landlord Citizen Kane: You know where I live! Now call the police befo---oh hello. What? No I'm not talking to--- Landlord Citizen Kane then suddenly shutup and then you hear a muffled scream as you hear a knife being taken out of somewhere. Then it was complete silence. Then a second later someone hung up the phone on the other line. funnie bunnie: Landlord Citizen Kane? Kane? KANE!?! funnie bunnie threw the phone into the receiver as she shook in fear. She crossed her arms and looked around the room scared that she'd be next. She then picked up the phone and called 911...and guess who picked up? No other than Officer Oj.
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Officer Oj: This is the police department. What is it?
funnie bunnie: Well you still act the same Officer Oj: bunny? oh well hello there, are you alright? funnie bunnie: After hearing my old landlord citizen Kane getting hurt on the other side of the phone how would you think i'd feel right now? Officer Oj: Well then just bring a weapon with you when you get to your car. You live in Japa-CaSpie right? funnie bunnie: Yes I do. Officer Oj: Alright then, just run over to the car and drive over here. We'll take care of you. funnie bunnie: Alright, thanks Oj, bye. funnie bunnie hung up the phone and looked around for a weapon that she can use. She smaked her forehead and said... funnie bunnie: Of course, I can use the baton that Kitty gave me. funnie bunnie then went to her closet and she took out the baton. she held it and she walked over to the door, after putting on her coat and getting her car keys. She slowly opened the door and looked around seeing if there was anyone outside. no one was outside. funnie bunnie walked over to her car and she unlocked it, went in, and drove off to the CaSpie Police Department. Malice: King me! JBond: What do you mean king you? This is poker stupid. Malice, JBond, bbf2 and Tardumb were at JBond's pad in Downtown CaSpie playing cards. bbf2 was winning a lot (maybe it was because of the real extra aces he had up his sleeve). Tardumb: What's that? bbf2: What's what? Tardumb: I thought I saw something come out of your sleeve. bbf2: No you didn't. I think the drink is starting to take effect finally. Jbond: Shutup and fold for once bbf2. bbf2: No, this is my lucky night. I want to bet all of it. bbf2 pushed all of the chips to the center of the round table. Malice looked at bbf2 and said... Malice: I quit, i mean I fold. Malice put down his cards face down and so did Tardumb. Tardumb: I fold. It was between JBond and bbf2. bbf2 looked at his cards and realized that they were crappy. JBond looked at his cards and knew that he was lucky finally, but he didn't show it in his face. It was complete silence until... Tardumb: *farts* Malice: That was beautiful bbf2: Yea really. bbf2 swung his hand around and the aces came out of his sleeves of his long-sleeved shirt. bbf2: Where the heck did these come from? I didn't put these here. Which one of you did this? Malice, JBond, and Tardumb looked at bbf2. JBond: It's mine! Malice, JBond, Tardumb, and bbf2 all dived to the center of the table for the chips. They broke the table as they grabbed as many as they could. Then they heard someone come in through the front door. JBond gets up with some chips in his hands and says... JBond: Who's there? Silence. Then he said... JBond: Who's there? Silence some more. JBond then took out a gun from his pocket in his tux and slowly walked towards the front door. He saw a figure slowly closing the door and then he pointed the gun at the figure's head. JBond: Who are you and what are you doing here? The figure turned around and revealed to be... JBond: Sicy, nice to see you. Sicy: Pay up. I've been waiting for weeks and you still haven't paid up. JBond: Pay up? For what? I have nothing to pay you back. Sicy: Yes you do. You ruined my business when you were on one of your stupid wild-goose chases and ended up slamming your car through my whole store. Now it's nothing but piles of wood. So where's the money? JBond gulped and said... JBond: I've got to go. I have an appointment with Dr. No. JBond turned around and saw the television was on in the other room. He ran over to the other room to ask the guys if they would have a kind enough heart to give him some money to give to Sicy, but then the news caught his eye. He watched the whole report on the person who murdered one surgeon and cut off the other surgeon's hand. Then he heard about SMF77's body and the note he took from his corpse's pocket. Sicy walked into the room and said... Sicy: Well? Am I going to have to beat it out of you?...JBond?... JBond turned around and looked at Sicy... JBond: Stay here. Don't go anywhere. I don't want you to get hurt. JBond went to the front and back doors of his place and locked them, including the windows. He then ran back to the room and said to the others... JBond: Stay here, and don't mess with my CD collection! He pointed at Tardumb throwing some CD's on the floor and he stopped.
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  Yeah pay up bond. :p Nice job portraying me kitty.. 
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Back at the scene of the crime Reporter Empusae is talking to one of the police officers, mic in one hand, and the other one wiping the sweat off of his forehead.
Officer Methos: Well I don't know. This murder sounds just as bad as the ones a couple of months ago or so. You were part of that one weren't you? Reporter Empusae: Cut! Cameraman Todd turned off the record on the camera as Reporter Empusae grabbed Officer Methos by the shirt. He looked at him in the eye and said in an angry tone of voice... Reporter Empusae: Listen here! I don't want to go through the same thing that happened that terrible night. I want you b@st@rds to find this murderer now or else! Officer Methos: That's not putting you in a good position right now when your grabbing my shirt and threatening me. For all we know you can be the killer. Reporter Empusae: No I'm not the killer! How dare you say that! Reporter Empusae let go of Officer Methos' shirt and wiped some more sweat off of his forehead. Cameraman Todd handed Reporter Empusae a hankie to wipe off the sweat. Reporter Empusae: Thanks. He then threw the hankie in Cameraman Todd's face. Cameraman Todd put the hankie back in his pocket and said to the two men... Cameraman Todd: Did you know anyone who was a good friend of SMF77? Maybe if you know who was a good friend of his then maybe that's who the murderer is. Reporter Empusae and Officer Methos looked at Cameraman Todd like he smoked something. Cameraman Todd sighed and said... Cameraman Todd: Forget I said that. Back on the freeway we see one of our heroines, funnie bunnie, driving over to the police station. Panicked at first as soon as she started the car remembering the one time when SMF77 went onto the police car and tried to kill them all, she turned on some calming music to take her mind off of that memory. She went out of the freeway on an exit and drove into the police station. She turned off her car and quickly took out her keys and locked the car, running into the police station scared. The first person she saw in the crowded room was Officer Oj. She ran to him and gave him a hug. funnie bunnie: Sorry, I'm just scared right now. Probably the first one on the murderer's list. Officer Oj pulled funnie bunnie out of the hug and looked at her. Officer Oj: Don't worry, everything will be fine as long as you stay here. funnie bunnie nodded as Officer Oj led her down a hallway to another room in the police station. Colorado Cajun and Iben went to bed soon after they saw the news. They slept. Iben hugged CC as she dreamt. Suddenly in the kitchen someone slipped through the window and was inside the house. It was the murderer. He/She walked through the hallway as quiet as he/she could. Then the person made it to CC and Iben's bedroom. The person took an extra pillow from the closet of theirs and put it tightly on Iben's face. She gave a tiny bit of a muffled scream as she quickly snapped out of the dream world seeing that she was being suffocated. She tried pushing the pillow out of her face but it was too late. She didn't have enough energy to move. She didn't even have any energy at all as her eyes rolled back and her arms plopped down on the bed. The murderer's work was done. No one would've suspected me to have came all the way down to Downtown CaSpie instead of finishing off that bunnie gal in Japa-CaSpie, he/she thought to him/herself. The murderer then took out a paper from his/her black trenchcoat. It was a paper, bloodstained from SMF77's blood. It had on there a list of all of the people he intended to kill and killed. He already crossed out the names of the ones that were already gone. The murderer then took out a pencil and crossed out Iben's name. The murderer then looked at CC sleeping soundly, not knowing that he lost his love about a few seconds ago. The murderer then took out a taser gun and for the fun of it shocked CC. Before CC opened his eyes the murderer ran out of the bedroom, into the kitchen, and went through the window. To make things more worse for CC, the murderer then made a high-pitched scream from the kitchen before he went out, making it sound like a girl's scream. Making it sound like Iben screaming. Colorado Cajun woke up with pain in his left arm. He put his left hand on the pillow that the murderer used to kill Iben with, and looked to his side. Colorado Cajun shook Iben a little bit and said... Colorado Cajun: Iben, why in the hell did you shock me? That wasn't funny...Iben....Iben? Colorado Cajun shook Iben again to find out that she wasn't breathing. Colorado Cajun lightly grabbed her right arm and checked for a pulse. There was none. Colorado Cajun breathed deeper as he tightly grabbed onto the pillow that his left hand was on as a silent tear ran down his cheek. He then remembered about the report that he saw on the news earlier of a new murderer who took a piece of paper from SMF77's pocket. CC's eyes widened in anger as he thought of the paper having a list of people to kill, most likely him and Iben on it. Colorado Cajun threw the pillow on the ground with anger as he ran to the front of the house and opened the door. He was suddenly blinded by a couple of police lights from a couple of police cars that just drove into the front yard. An old lady in her pajamas shouted... Old Lady: There he is! There's the murderer! The police then ran up to Colorado Cajun and threw him down to the ground. One of the policeman handcuffed Colorado Cajun and said... Officer Horace: Your under arrest for the death of a surgeon, Iben, and cutting off another surgeon's hand.
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Aw man!!! Now I have to bust out of jail and go after the killer myself
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alright! i got my thingy fixed! i mean..that picture.....oh nvm....
by the way, when are you going to write more kitty?
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JBond checked the backyard to see if anyone was out there, and there was no one out there. He went back inside and he caught the end of the news brief that Reporter Empusae was giving to channel 8.
Reporter Empusae: Well I'm here at the new crime scene where Iben was killed in her bedroom. Police are suspecting that Colorado Cajun killed her, which in my opinion is ridiculous. But as I was saying she was killed by suffocation with use of a pillow that has Colorado Cajun's fingerprints on it only. Ah c'mon people, it's not him, I don't believe this. Well he's being sent to jail right now as...dare I say this.... Cameraman Todd: You have to or else the boss will fire you. Reporter Empusae: *sigh* fine, now everyone can go back to their normal routine as the murderer has been sent to jail. This is Reporter Empusae for Channel 8 News. The television showed the logo of the station as Jbond turned off the television. Sicy crossed her arms and looked at JBond. Sicy: Well? Aren't you going to do anything for your friend? JBond: Of course I am. Were going to bail him out, right guys? bbf2: Alright then Malice: Sure TyRoss: Where's the dip for the chips? Everyone looked at TyRoss. TyRoss: What? (AGH! WRITER'S BLOCK! AND TO TOP IT OFF, I'VE GOT TO GET OUT OF THE HOUSE THIS WEEKEND! *dies*)
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