pennywise
01-10-2004, 06:33 PM
I would really appreciate it if people could read this and give back some intructive feedback. The story is the first one in the link, and you can read the small summary there too. You can post the feedback on here. Please read and reply, thank you.
http://www.fictionpress.com/~pennywise1218
http://www.fictionpress.com/~pennywise1218