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ElmStreetFan02
09-03-2003, 11:45 AM
I'll Post Part 2 later on.

Children Of Elm Street Part 2:
Kringer's Revenge

Title Shows Up
Children Of Elm Street Part 2: Kringer's Revenge
A Script Written By Brandyn Bullock
Based On Characters Created By Wes Craven
Directed By Brandyn Bullock And Daniel Murray

Scene- House: 18 Elm Street- Daytime- Inside

Rowan is siting on the couch while watching Back To The Future Part II on
DVD.
Rowan: I haven't heared from J.K.?
Nancy: Me too.
Jacob: Same here.
Camera Angle: Close up to Rowan while he hears a voice.
Kringer's Voice: Hello Rowan.
Rowan: Nancy, Jacob do you hear what I hear?
Nancy and Jacob nodded.
Rowan: What do you want Kringer?
Kringer's Voice: I'm coming for you.
Rowan: I'll be ready for you.
Kringer appeared infront of Rowan, Nancy and Jacob.
Kringer: I'll be coming for you all.
Kringer: Better not go asleep.
Kringer disappeared.
Nancy: We must find The Book Of Nightmares.
Rowan: You're right.
Jacob: What's the Book Of Nightmares?
Nancy: The Book Of Nightmares is how Jack back here.
Jacob: Wow.
Rowan: When?
Nancy: Tonight.
Rowan: Ok.
Nancy and Jacob walked out of the door.

Scene- House: 80 Elm Street- Nancy's House- Daytime- Inside

Camera Angle: Walking close up with Nancy.
Nancy walks to the door of Jacob then knocks on the door.
Jacob answeres.
Jacob: Nancy come in.
Nancy: Thanks.
Nancy walked in then sat on the chair next to Jacob.
Nancy: I'm worried.
Jacob: About what?
Nancy: About you.
Jacob: Why?
Nancy: Because, what if Kringer comes after you?
Jacob: I'll kick his butt.
Nancy: Really, what if he trys to kill you then.
Jacob: Kick his butt.
Nancy: Alright.
Nancy walked out then went upstairs.
She went to get a glass of water.
Kringer was standing behind her when she turn around Kringer
cut her arm, Nancy rolled backwards.
Nancy: Ahhh.
She Kringer punched Kringer in the face with her other arm.
Nancy ran up the stairs but slipped. Kringer grabbed Nancy's leg.
Nancy: Freak!!!!
Nancy kicked Kringer in the face.
Kringer: You're gonna pay.

Grindie
09-03-2003, 01:31 PM
What in utter Christ!?

So, that other post was supposed to be a WHOLE movie!? You can't be serious.

Well, now it's time to play with this post...

Rowan is siting on the couch while watching Back To The Future Part II on

Jeez, Rowan spends alot of time on that couch doesn't he?

Rowan: I haven't heared from J.K.?

Ah! I see, Mr. Gay has become so close with Kringer that he's thought of a cute nick name for him... uh... why?

Kringer's Voice: Hello Rowan.

Okay, here's what I don't understand... Why is he called Kringer? Is it some kinda pun? Y'know... this script makes everyone CRINGE when they read it...

Kringer's Voice: I'm coming for you.

He says that alot.

Kringer: Better not go asleep.

This Kringer bloke isn't too bright... he's actually telling the people how to avoid him...

Nancy: The Book Of Nightmares is how Jack back here.

What's wrong with Nancy? She sounds a bit retarded, you should get a handicapped actor to play her...


Nancy: The Book Of Nightmares is how Jack back here.
Jacob: Wow.
Rowan: When?
Nancy: Tonight.
Rowan: Ok.


Now THAT's script writing... For a bunch of robots.

She Kringer punched Kringer in the face with her other arm.

Uh... What the hell does this mean?

Kringer: You're gonna pay.

Well, I s'pose it beats 'I'm coming for you'.

Please stop this at once, you really have no talent for writing... Please stop... PLEASE!!!

Rebecca
09-03-2003, 01:34 PM
hey Grindie... u stop being so rude,ur being mean now...jus back off of him a bit ok? and i'm not being girly... It's interesting...

Grindie
09-03-2003, 01:39 PM
Originally posted by Rebecca
hey Grindie... u stop being so rude,ur being mean now...jus back off of him a bit ok? and i'm not being girly... It's interesting...

Ok, i'll stop spurting the truth if you can tell me what is so interesting about this pap.

ElmStreetFan02
09-03-2003, 03:18 PM
Shut up

Grindie
09-03-2003, 03:20 PM
Originally posted by ElmStreetFan02
Shut up

Hmm... I'm gonna say... no.

ElmStreetFan02
09-03-2003, 03:28 PM
Piss off

Mr.Matinee
09-04-2003, 11:24 PM
Originally posted by Grindie
Ok, i'll stop spurting the truth if you can tell me what is so interesting about this pap.

Well,your "Truth" is actually your opinion.And if you don't like it,maybe you could suggest ways for him to improve the script.Besides is just a fan script;not a epic film!And how would you like if someone went to your art and/or fan-fiction thread and said it was crap?So think about this before you give your opinon again.Because if you continue to post in this manner,trust me,you'll be banned.

*steps off soapbox*

Grindie
09-05-2003, 07:21 AM
Originally posted by Mr.Matinee
Well,your "Truth" is actually your opinion.And if you don't like it,maybe you could suggest ways for him to improve the script.Besides is just a fan script;not a epic film!And how would you like if someone went to your art and/or fan-fiction thread and said it was crap?So think about this before you give your opinon again.Because if you continue to post in this manner,trust me,you'll be banned.

*steps off soapbox*

The reason I post my art and script is for opinions! I then use these opinions to improve any areas in which I am lacking... and besides, this guy asked what people thought of his script and I told him.

This is a horrible script, i'm sure anyone, who is as obsessed with the Nightmare movies as me, would also be as offended by this crap as I was.

I will say whatever the hell I want, i'm not afraid of expressing my true opinion, i'm not gonna hide it from people just 'cause I want to be liked... that's sad.

*crushes soapbox then rubs it into the ground*

ElmStreetFan02
09-05-2003, 07:29 AM
Get out of my post or be banned.

Rebecca
09-05-2003, 07:51 AM
Originally posted by ElmStreetFan02
Get out of my post or be banned.
dude, chill the frick out man...he's only stating his opinion...ur thread sucks now....I really don't know y i stuck up for ur stupid ass...what a mistake...ain't no one else posting in ur threads they should jus close them...

Grindie
09-05-2003, 08:05 AM
Originally posted by ElmStreetFan02
Get out of my post or be banned.

People can get banned for sharing their opinion? Jeez, that isn't too nice...

Chucky's Back
11-24-2005, 07:48 PM
Can anyone tell me what this means! Most of the script is confusing, and who the heck is Kringer?

Frizzo the Clown
11-24-2005, 08:12 PM
Can anyone tell me what this means! Most of the script is confusing, and who the heck is Kringer?
Whatever it was, I'm sure it wasn't worth bumping a two-year old thread, was it?