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ElmStreetFan02
08-19-2003, 01:45 PM
Children Of Elm Street
Title Shows Up
Children Of Elm Street
A Script Written By Brandyn Bullock
Based On Characters Created By Wes Craven
Directed By Brandyn Bullock And Daniel Murray
Scene- House: 18 Elm Street- Inside
Camera Angle: Walking through the halls.
Camera Angle: Closes up to Rowan.
Rowan: Hello.
Unknown Voice: Hello Rowan.
Rowan: Kringer.
Unknown Voice: The name's Kringer, Jack Kringer.
Rowan: Kringer, I gave you my strength.
Rowan: I can take back my strength.
Kringer's Voice: Really.
Rowan: Yeah.
Rowan didn't hear Kringer's voice agian.
Scene- House: 18 Elm Street- Daytime- Inside
Rowan woke up on the couch.
Rowan: Too much horror movies.
A girl knocked on Rowan's door.
Rowan walked over to the door then opened the door.
Rowan: Hey Nancy.
Nancy: Hey Rowan.
Rowan: Nancy, take a seat.
Nancy: Gee thanks.
Rowan: How long did we know each other?
Nancy: Since grade two.
Rowan: Ok.
Rowan: Do you have any nightmares about a guy?
Nancy: Yeah.
Rowan: What was his name?
Nancy: His name was Jack Kringer.
Rowan: That's the same dream I had.
Nancy: Really?
Rowan: Yeah.
Rowan: I'm going to call Jacob and Ryan.
Nancy: Sure.
Rowan dialed Jacob's number. Jacob answered.
Jacob: Hello.
Rowan: Jacob, I need you and Ryan to come right now.
Jacob: Ok.
Jacob and Ryan ran to Rowan's house then knocked.
Rowan answered the door.
Camera Angle: Follows Ryan and Jacob to their seats until they sit.
Jacob: What did you call us for?
Rowan: We've been having the same nightmares.
Ryan: Yeah I know.
Rowan: What should we do?
Nancy: Pull him out of our dreams?
Rowan: That's it, we'll pull him out of our dreams.
Rowan: Well, we have to go to sleep then pull him out.
Nancy, Jacob and Ryan: Right.
Rowan: Go home and do something.
Nancy, Jacob and Ryan walked out of the door.
Rowan: The freak's getting into our nightmares.
Scene- House: 79 Elm Street- Nighttime- Inside
Camera Angle: Points at Ryan as Jacob goes out while talking to him.
Jacob: Ryan, I'm going out.
Jacob: If anyone calls, tell them I'm not home.
Ryan: Ok.
Jacob walks out the door.
Ryan turns on the tv then starts to fall asleep.
Ryan wakes up.
Ryan: Can't go to sleep or else Kringer will get me.
Ryan fell asleep.
A shadow figure walked over to Ryan then stab him with one claw.
The shadow figure disappeared.
Scene- House: 79 Elm Street- Nighttime- 11:00 PM- Inside
Camera Angle: Follows Jacob until he finds Ryan dead.
Jacob: No, No, Noooooooooo!!!
Jacob: Kringer, I'm going to get you.
Kringer's Voice: Yeah and I'm Freddy Krueger.
Jacob: Hahahaha and I'm Prince Charles.
Kringer's Voice: Whatever Jacob, whatever.
Jacob ran over to the phone then dialed Rowan's number.
Rowan answered.
Rowan: Hello.
Jacob: Rowan, He got Ryan.
Rowan: What?
Jacob: He got Ryan.
Rowan: Quick call Nancy and come over.
Jacob: Ok.
Rowan: See ya.
Jacob: Later.
Jacob dialed Nancy's number.
Nancy answered her cellphone.
Nancy: Hello.
Jacob: Nancy, It's me Jacob.
Nancy: Jacob, what's the matter.
Jacob: Kringer got Ryan.
Nancy: Wow.
Jacob: Rowan wants us to go over to his house.
Nancy: Ok.
Jacob: Bye.
Nancy: Bye.
Jacob hangs up.
Rowan, Nancy and Jacob meet up at Rowan's house.
Scene- House: 18 Elm Street- Nighttime- Outside
Rowan: Here's the deal, I go to sleep then wake up.
Nancy: That's when you pull him out of your nightmares.
Rowan: Yeah, when he comes out I'll make him chase after me
when I get around the corner Jacob will take the book then
smacks him.
Jacob: Ok.
Rowan: When he's blinded, Nancy will push then he'll fall right on the spike.
Nancy: Ok.
Rowan, Nancy and Jacob walk into the house.
Scene- House: 18 Elm Street- Nighttime- Inside
Rowan climbs on to the couch then goes to sleep.
Nancy stood beside the couch.
Rowan woke up.
Rowan: Nancy, hide infront of the couch.
Rowan and Nancy hid infront of the couch.
Rowan looked up to see if Kringer was coming.
Kringer walked around.
Kringer: Rowan, where are you?
Rowan jumps up.
Rowan: Here I am.
Kringer chased him around until Jacob whacked him with the book.
Jacob: That was for Ryan.
Nancy pushed Kringer onto a spike then Kringer disappeared.
Scene- House: 79 Elm Street- Daytime- Outside.
Camera Angle: Following Rowan, Jacob and Nancy.
Rowan: I'm glad that Kringer's dead.
Nancy: Me too.
Jacob: Same with me.
Kringer's Voice: That's what you think.
Rowan, Jacob and Nancy looked at each then ran.
Kringer's Voice: I'm coming for you all.
Kringer laughs.
End Of Part 1
Shows Cast
Written By Brandyn Bullock
Directed By Brandyn Bullock And Daniel Murray
Based On Characters Created By Wes Craven
Children Of Elm Street
Copyright (C) 2003 Bullock Productions.
All characters like Rowan Magnus, Nancy Jerald, Jacob and Ryan Sommers
also Jack Kringer are characters of Bullock Productions. All Rights Reserved.
These characters and events are ficional. The characters are not dead nor
alive.
Rebecca
08-31-2003, 07:57 AM
hmmmmmm
Citizen Kane
08-31-2003, 11:17 PM
Hey, is Bullock Productions officially recognized?
ElmStreetFan02
09-02-2003, 08:10 AM
Nah it's thing I made up with my last name, How do you like the script.
Grindie
09-03-2003, 10:48 AM
This is THE most irritating thing I have ever read! EVER!
You need to be locked up... oh yes... FOREVER.
I'm gonna point out a 'few' things I don't like...
Children Of Elm Street
As the 'Comic Book guy' from Simpsons might say : 'Worst title... EVER!'
Directed By Brandyn Bullock And Daniel Murray
Let's hope Daniel Murray actually knows something about the Nightmare movies... or even movies in general.
Scene- House: 18 Elm Street- Inside
I'm sure there is no 18 Elm Street, from what i've noticed, every house on Elm Street has a four digit number. DO YOUR RESEARCH!
Unknown Voice: The name's Kringer, Jack Kringer.
Is he a secret agent for her majesty's secret service?
Rowan: Kringer, I gave you my strength.
Really great dialog there... no really... *sarcasm*.
Rowan didn't hear Kringer's voice agian.
So, Kringer and Rowan never speak for the rest of the movie?
Rowan woke up on the couch. Rowan climbs on to the couch then goes to sleep.
Doesn't Rowan have a bed?
A girl knocked on Rowan's door.
Is this the only door in Rowan's house? That explains why he has no bed... Cheap bastard.
Rowan: Nancy, take a seat. Nancy: Gee thanks.
Wow, she seems really excited over a chair... is it a throne of some sort or something? I hope she knows that 'have a seat' means sit down, not 'here, take my big throne'.
Rowan: How long did we know each other?
What the hell brought that up? Does he have to be constantly reminded of stuff? Is he a bit slow in the head? If that's the case... Is he based on you?
Nancy: Since grade two. Rowan: Ok.
Wow, sounds just like a freakin' conversation you would have on a Yahoo chat room... Again... Great dialog... (you should know i'm being sarcastic by now...)
Rowan: Do you have any nightmares about a guy? Nancy: Yeah.
Jeez, Rowan is a perverted little crap weasel isn't he? What a conversation starter... Did Rowan dream about a guy too? I wonder what he got up to with this guy... did it involve lubricant.
Nancy: His name was Jack Kringer. Rowan: That's the same dream I had.
SHE DIDN'T EVEN TELL HIM WHAT HER DREAM WAS!!! HOW COULD HE KNOW IF HE HAD THE SAME ONE!?!?!
Rowan: I'm going to call Jacob and Ryan. Nancy: Sure.
What the hell? Is Nancy granting Rown permission to use his own phone or something? What a *****... now we know who wears the trousers in this strange relationship. Well... we knew that anyway, Rowan likes men from what I can tell... C'mon, he must be based on you.
Rowan: Jacob, I need you and Ryan to come right now.
YES! THERE IT IS! Rown IS gay, he wants his male friends to COME! I think you spelled 'come' wrong though...
Rowan answered the door.
Why? Did it ask him something? Did it ask him if he prefered men or women? I bet I know what the answer to that one...
Jacob: What did you call us for?
Maybe if he stuck around on the phone instead of whacking Ryan off, he'd know the answer.. Or maybe the door knows.
Rowan: We've been having the same nightmares. Ryan: Yeah I know.
How did Ryan know?!? He's Jack Kringer! I know it!
Nancy: Pull him out of our dreams?
Yeah, like... EVERYONE does that these days... (dumbass!)
Rowan: That's it, we'll pull him out of our dreams. Rowan: Well, we have to go to sleep then pull him out.
Well, if you can think of a better way to dream, let me know...
Nancy, Jacob and Ryan walked out of the door.
How the hell did they get IN TO the door? What madness is this!?!?
Rowan: The freak's getting into our nightmares.
It took him long enough to figure this out... C'mon, seriously... Is he based on you or what!?
A shadow figure walked over to Ryan then stab him with one claw. The shadow figure disappeared.
Now THAT, my friend, is THE most ORIGINAL nightmare sequence... EVER!
Jacob: Kringer, I'm going to get you. Kringer's Voice: Yeah and I'm Freddy Krueger.
Uh... Why did he tell the stupid gay guy that he was Kringer, if he's gonna just reveal that he's Freddy to his gay friend? This makes no sense at all!
Kringer's Voice: Whatever Jacob, whatever.
Now, you have to remember that Krueger can actually deliver SMART ass remarks.. this is something a cheerleader would say...
Jacob: He got Ryan. Rowan: Quick call Nancy and come over. Jacob: Ok. Rowan: See ya. Jacob: Later.
Oh my god! Their friend has just died and they're planning on having an orgy! Jesus... insensitive pricks...
Jacob: Bye.
According to SphericThor, no one EVER says 'bye' on the phone in a movie...
Rowan: Here's the deal, I go to sleep then wake up.
Wow! Really!? You are really talented! Can I have your autograph?
when I get around the corner Jacob will take the book then Jacob: Ok. Rowan: When he's blinded, Nancy will push then he'll fall right on the spike.
What the hell kinda book is this? It blinds people? WHat's the point in that? How the hell is anyone supposed to read it? And where the hell did this spike come from?
Rowan: Nancy, hide infront of the couch.
Wha? Who is stupid enough to hide IN FRONT of the couch? You hide BEHIND it you damn fool!
Kringer chased him around until Jacob whacked him with the book. Jacob: That was for Ryan.
Yes! A fitting punishment for slicing up someone's 'whacking buddy'! 'Hey! You killed my friend... i'm gonna slap you on the nose with a book! ARRRGGGHHHH!!!!'... no...
Rowan: I'm glad that Kringer's dead. Nancy: Me too.
Yeah, let's go get some ice cream...
Kringer's Voice: I'm coming for you all.
Souldn't that be... 'I'm coming ON you all'?
Ah! That was fun... I can't wait to rip part 2 apart...
You now have -300 GP (Grindie Points)
ElmStreetFan02
09-03-2003, 11:15 AM
Originally posted by Grindie
This is THE most irritating thing I have ever read! EVER!
You need to be locked up... oh yes... FOREVER.
I'm gonna point out a 'few' things I don't like...
As the 'Comic Book guy' from Simpsons might say : 'Worst title... EVER!'
Let's hope Daniel Murray actually knows something about the Nightmare movies... or even movies in general.
I'm sure there is no 18 Elm Street, from what i've noticed, every house on Elm Street has a four digit number. DO YOUR RESEARCH!
Is he a secret agent for her majesty's secret service?
Really great dialog there... no really... *sarcasm*.
So, Kringer and Rowan never speak for the rest of the movie?
Doesn't Rowan have a bed?
Is this the only door in Rowan's house? That explains why he has no bed... Cheap bastard.
Wow, she seems really excited over a chair... is it a throne of some sort or something? I hope she knows that 'have a seat' means sit down, not 'here, take my big throne'.
What the hell brought that up? Does he have to be constantly reminded of stuff? Is he a bit slow in the head? If that's the case... Is he based on you?
Wow, sounds just like a freakin' conversation you would have on a Yahoo chat room... Again... Great dialog... (you should know i'm being sarcastic by now...)
Jeez, Rowan is a perverted little crap weasel isn't he? What a conversation starter... Did Rowan dream about a guy too? I wonder what he got up to with this guy... did it involve lubricant.
SHE DIDN'T EVEN TELL HIM WHAT HER DREAM WAS!!! HOW COULD HE KNOW IF HE HAD THE SAME ONE!?!?!
What the hell? Is Nancy granting Rown permission to use his own phone or something? What a *****... now we know who wears the trousers in this strange relationship. Well... we knew that anyway, Rowan likes men from what I can tell... C'mon, he must be based on you.
YES! THERE IT IS! Rown IS gay, he wants his male friends to COME! I think you spelled 'come' wrong though...
Why? Did it ask him something? Did it ask him if he prefered men or women? I bet I know what the answer to that one...
Maybe if he stuck around on the phone instead of whacking Ryan off, he'd know the answer.. Or maybe the door knows.
How did Ryan know?!? He's Jack Kringer! I know it!
Yeah, like... EVERYONE does that these days... (dumbass!)
Well, if you can think of a better way to dream, let me know...
How the hell did they get IN TO the door? What madness is this!?!?
It took him long enough to figure this out... C'mon, seriously... Is he based on you or what!?
Now THAT, my friend, is THE most ORIGINAL nightmare sequence... EVER!
Uh... Why did he tell the stupid gay guy that he was Kringer, if he's gonna just reveal that he's Freddy to his gay friend? This makes no sense at all!
Now, you have to remember that Krueger can actually deliver SMART ass remarks.. this is something a cheerleader would say...
Oh my god! Their friend has just died and they're planning on having an orgy! Jesus... insensitive pricks...
According to SphericThor, no one EVER says 'bye' on the phone in a movie...
Wow! Really!? You are really talented! Can I have your autograph?
What the hell kinda book is this? It blinds people? WHat's the point in that? How the hell is anyone supposed to read it? And where the hell did this spike come from?
Wha? Who is stupid enough to hide IN FRONT of the couch? You hide BEHIND it you damn fool!
Yes! A fitting punishment for slicing up someone's 'whacking buddy'! 'Hey! You killed my friend... i'm gonna slap you on the nose with a book! ARRRGGGHHHH!!!!'... no...
Yeah, let's go get some ice cream...
Souldn't that be... 'I'm coming ON you all'?
Ah! That was fun... I can't wait to rip part 2 apart...
You now have -300 GP (Grindie Points)
Shut Up!!! I wrote the script and Rowan is not gay. I Deleted some stuff and I Dleted some stff off of the DVD too and are going to make fun of all eight scripts *****
Grindie
09-03-2003, 11:27 AM
Originally posted by ElmStreetFan02
Shut Up!!! I wrote the script
Well it's quite obvious that you wrote the script. It's also obvious that it's absolute pap (pap = crap)
and Rowan is not gay.
Well if you freakin' develop your characters properly we wouldn't have to guess their sexuality
I Deleted some stuff and I Dleted some stff off of the DVD too and are going to make fun of all eight scripts *****
I have no idea what that means but I'm gonna guess that you're asking if I'm gonna make fun of all your scripts and the answer is quite obviously... YES!!
You now have -500 GP (Grindie Points)
ElmStreetFan02
09-03-2003, 11:41 AM
Why don't you try writing a script based on Elm Street and my Characters.
Rebecca
09-03-2003, 11:52 AM
lol haha u 2 are funny ooooooooo fight,nah j/k.it sounds good to me but hmmmm interesting ...
ElmStreetFan02
09-03-2003, 11:55 AM
Why don't help me with part II it's post just find the post.
Grindie
09-03-2003, 11:57 AM
Fan scripts are wannabe ****e, I feel no desire to follow this sad trend and if I did I wouldn't use your paper thin characters. My dog could write a better script than yours. Why did you start a new topic for your other script?... you can't hide it from me
Originally posted by ElmStreetFan02
Nah it's thing I made up with my last name, How do you like the script.
Remember you said this? Weren't you asking for peoples opinions... well you got one and if you're not man enought to accept it... PISS OFF!!
You now have -900 Grindie Points
ElmStreetFan02
09-03-2003, 12:11 PM
I have nothing to hide.
Rebecca
09-03-2003, 12:30 PM
Originally posted by Grindie
Fan scripts are wannabe ****e, I feel no desire to follow this sad trend and if I did I wouldn't use your paper thin characters. My dog could write a better script than yours. Why did you start a new topic for your other script?... you can't hide it from me
Remember you said this? Weren't you asking for peoples opinions... well you got one and if you're not man enought to accept it... PISS OFF!!
You now have -900 Grindie Points
dude, chill out,let him say what he wants it's his thread...calm down a bit...ain't nobody gotta piss off get it,got it, good. Damn,u people sometimes....lol oh well i think it's funny.
ElmStreetFan02
09-03-2003, 12:44 PM
Thanks.
Rebecca
09-03-2003, 12:47 PM
Originally posted by ElmStreetFan02
Thanks.
anytime.
ElmStreetFan02
09-03-2003, 12:52 PM
Got COES Part2
Grindie
09-03-2003, 01:05 PM
So... I can't express my opinion then? Okay... i'll just tell you what you want:
Wow! That script is better than EVERY movie I have ever seen! I cannot believe that you haven't been snapped up by a big hollywood company!
Rebecca
09-03-2003, 01:07 PM
Originally posted by Grindie
So... I can't express my opinion then? Okay... i'll just tell you what you want:
Wow! That script is better than EVERY movie I have ever seen! I cannot believe that you haven't been snapped up by a big hollywood company!
lol u friggin nut i told u ...lol u can express urself all u want oh man...wow.no more fighting guys ...script was interesting and yes it does need work but it is very interesting...lol man u 2 r something else.
ElmStreetFan02
09-03-2003, 01:09 PM
Come to Part 2
Grindie
09-03-2003, 01:18 PM
Originally posted by Rebecca
lol u friggin nut i told u ...lol u can express urself all u want oh man...wow.no more fighting guys ...script was interesting and yes it does need work but it is very interesting...lol man u 2 r something else.
There was nothing interesting about that script. NOTHING AT ALL!I think you're just being nice and girly, Ma'am... Yes indeed.
Rebecca
09-03-2003, 01:29 PM
lol girly? ok i'm sorry I did say that it needed work uh yea do u have any ideas? lets see ur script on anything like this...can u do better?
Grindie
09-03-2003, 01:35 PM
Well, you CAN see my script for my comic... it's on this very board...
ElmStreetFan02
09-03-2003, 03:31 PM
Whatevere.
MovieFreak
09-04-2003, 07:48 PM
HAHAHA personally I think grindie is hilarious....I mean we are allowed to express out opinions, everything doesnt have to be nice. And this isnt a script a script is AT LEAST 120 pages, thats like what 1 page. And if you are going to do what 8 parts? Couldnt you do it all in one thread?
Grindie
09-05-2003, 07:29 AM
Originally posted by MovieFreak
HAHAHA personally I think grindie is hilarious....I mean we are allowed to express out opinions, everything doesnt have to be nice. And this isnt a script a script is AT LEAST 120 pages, thats like what 1 page. And if you are going to do what 8 parts? Couldnt you do it all in one thread?
Ah! At last! Someone with some sense...
ElmStreetFan02
09-05-2003, 07:30 AM
Die
Rebecca
09-05-2003, 07:48 AM
Originally posted by ElmStreetFan02
Die
hey that wasn't nice at all.u freak. ok now i'm getting angry...i think ur threads suck ...
Grindie
09-05-2003, 08:12 AM
Originally posted by Rebecca
hey that wasn't nice at all.u freak. ok now i'm getting angry...i think ur threads suck ...
Yeah, ElmStreetFan, you need to learn to accept critisicm, you're gonna be getting alot of it.
And how dare you call yourself 'ElmStreetFan'!? You clearly don't know the first thing about the Nightmare movies.
ElmStreetFan02
09-05-2003, 03:14 PM
Really? I'm just mad right.
Rebecca
09-06-2003, 12:08 PM
ok no more fighting boys ur gonna do a scipt,do it....i want to read it.
ElmStreetFan02
09-06-2003, 05:41 PM
Ok.
Sensation14
09-15-2003, 02:29 AM
Your story was alright. Nothing to go crazy over.
ElmStreetFan02
09-15-2003, 07:43 AM
Thanks
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