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Fat Albert

05-01-2002, 04:45 PM

<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Knerys:
 <blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Fat Albert:

Chancellor- 5,000-7,00 posts.

Senator- 3,000-4,499 posts.
<hr /></blockquote>What about those in the 4,500-4,999 bracket?<hr /></blockquote>Uh, I dunno :o . Surprise me!

Colorado Cajun

05-01-2002, 06:15 PM

Alright I guess I'll give this a shot if it's cool with you Fat Albert?

I'll work on the characters now

thebtskink

05-01-2002, 06:25 PM

Sweet! I'm a councilman!

Colorado Cajun

05-01-2002, 06:31 PM

Jedi Council: Jbond, Frizzo, Killown, Kyle
Yoda: Mirko
Sith Lord: Tech
Sith(Maul/Vader type): Colorado Cajun
Senators: Rogue, Iben, bbf2
Jedi: Tyross
Droids: Tardumb,Optimus
Padawan: Beemanbone
Bounty Hunter: Pixi, Knerys, Tyler_Durden
Hutt: Thebtskink
Those will be the main roles with others filling in along the way as Stormtroopers, Wookie, Ewoks etc. I changed it a bit to make it fit better storyline wise

[ 05-01-2002, 06:32 PM: Message edited by: Colorado Cajun ]

Frizzo the Clown

05-01-2002, 06:33 PM

Wow...I'm a Jedi Councilman and a Chancellor....I'm two, two, two characters in one! :D

[ 05-01-2002, 06:34 PM: Message edited by: Frizzo the Clown ]

beemanbone

05-01-2002, 06:36 PM

I'm a Chancellor and a Padawan :D

Tardumb

05-01-2002, 07:08 PM

so are Optimus and I like C-3PO and R2-D2? I figured thats whta you was going for since there's two...that's cool...even tho Albert had me as a Sith...can't wait to see how this turns out CC!

Colorado Cajun

05-01-2002, 07:11 PM

Yeah I made you a droid because they say there are only two Sith at a time. Plus I had to rework Albert's a little to make it less watered down

Tardumb

05-01-2002, 07:14 PM

ahhhh...good call

Rogue

05-01-2002, 08:51 PM

This should be good!

thebtskink

05-01-2002, 09:32 PM

<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Colorado Cajun:

Hutt: Thebtskink

Hutt- 350-399 posts.
<hr /></blockquote>I don't mind the role. Cause Hutt probably eats worms too, but I just want you to notice how many posts I have. I'm done. :D

Colorado Cajun

05-01-2002, 10:15 PM

I'll start it soon

[ 05-05-2002, 10:39 AM: Message edited by: Colorado Cajun ]

Hank Scorpio

05-01-2002, 10:28 PM

Can I be a Jawa? If not a Jawa then a Wookie considering I'm closer to a Wookie's specs.

bbf2

05-01-2002, 10:35 PM

I just thought I'd point out that my name stands for "Bond BOBA FETT 2" whilst you're deciding roles!

Colorado Cajun

05-01-2002, 10:39 PM

The roles are handed out and the story is underway
I just did the Star Wars style intro and part 1 will happen tomorrow

Hank Scorpio

05-01-2002, 11:00 PM

You didn't assign me one(understandably). Well, if I have to be a pod racer then I wanna be a Jawa pod racer. <img border="0" title="" alt="[Wink]" src="wink.gif" />

Link

05-01-2002, 11:02 PM

I'll be an extra! Just like Nsync..

Fat Albert

05-01-2002, 11:15 PM

Well, CC, I was thinking that the people can see what they are, and once we have a part for everyone, then we'll make up a story from there!

Thank you all for your interest!

Colorado Cajun

05-01-2002, 11:25 PM

That's cool I was just trying to setup a simple process

Knerys

05-01-2002, 11:34 PM

Heh, heh

Nice! I'm a Bounty Hunter.

Iben

05-02-2002, 03:20 AM

Cool CC I get to be a Senator...perfect!...this I'll be great heehee :D

JediPaul

05-02-2002, 04:11 AM

Cool I'm a Podracer which means my name is Anakin Skywalker (Jedi in the making) and I go on to become Darth Vador.

Take that Sebulba.

HeadHunter

05-02-2002, 07:51 AM

damn it that means i am a bl00dy gungan

i better get posting then

[ 05-02-2002, 07:53 AM: Message edited by: HeadHunter ]

Kyle Katarn

05-02-2002, 09:20 AM

Kyle: Woo-hoo! I'm on the Council!

beemanbone: <shouts from across the room> Hey, haven't I got a lot more posts than you???

Kyle: Maybe this will teach you to listen to authori-tah, Padawan! <uses the force to hurl his lightsaber across the room, nailing bee in the forehead with the hilt!> :mad: :D

beemanbone

05-02-2002, 04:57 PM

<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Kyle Katarn:
beemanbone: <shouts from across the room> Hey, haven't I got a lot more posts than you???

Kyle: Maybe this will teach you to listen to authori-tah, Padawan! <uses the force to hurl his lightsaber across the room, nailing bee in the forehead with the hilt!> :mad: :D <hr /></blockquote>There will be hell to pay for this!! :mad: <img src="http://uv3.homestead.com/files/beemanbone.gif" alt="" />

Fat Albert

05-02-2002, 05:45 PM

Okay, so we can get this in order, let's just post (in one word) what we are, we need 5 council members, 3 slaves, the rest, one will do.

OKay, Im a slave :o :(.

Tardumb

05-02-2002, 05:57 PM

well if you go by your post count list then I would be a Sith, but I think I was assigned as a droid by CC for his fanfic...yep...

[ 05-02-2002, 09:46 PM: Message edited by: Tardumb ]

Fat Albert

05-02-2002, 06:11 PM

This is so fun! <img border="0" title="" alt="[Eek!]" src="eek.gif" /> :cool: :D

Knerys

05-02-2002, 09:09 PM

I'd still like to be a Bounty Hunter, if that's cool.

Knerys

05-02-2002, 09:09 PM

I hit the button once, the computer post twice. What's wrong with this picture?

[ 05-02-2002, 09:11 PM: Message edited by: Knerys ]

Colorado Cajun

05-02-2002, 09:52 PM

Hey Albert we probably should start this sucker soon don't ya think?

Hank Scorpio

05-02-2002, 10:50 PM

*cough*Jawa*cough*

Fat Albert

05-03-2002, 12:34 AM

<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Colorado Cajun:
Hey Albert we probably should start this sucker soon don't ya think?<hr /></blockquote>well yeah when people start signing up!

Colorado Cajun

05-03-2002, 12:43 AM

we have a decent roster already hehe

Knerys

05-03-2002, 12:53 AM

<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Knerys:
I'd still like to be a Bounty Hunter, if that's cool.<hr /></blockquote>**Ahem**

Colorado Cajun

05-03-2002, 12:55 AM

<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Knerys:
 <blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Knerys:
I'd still like to be a Bounty Hunter, if that's cool.<hr /></blockquote>**Ahem**<hr /></blockquote>:D

Knerys

05-03-2002, 01:04 AM

I was replying to Mr. Albert, thank you very much.

TyRoss

05-03-2002, 08:14 AM

I'm happy with the way it is.

Optimus Prime

05-03-2002, 08:26 AM

<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Colorado Cajun:
Yeah I made you a droid because they say there are only two Sith at a time. Plus I had to rework Albert's a little to make it less watered down<hr /></blockquote>Why am I a droid?

Frizzo the Clown

05-03-2002, 08:31 AM

<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Optimus Prime:
 <blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Colorado Cajun:
Yeah I made you a droid because they say there are only two Sith at a time. Plus I had to rework Albert's a little to make it less watered down<hr /></blockquote>Why am I a droid?<hr /></blockquote>Because you're a Transfomer. A transformer is a robot, and a robot is a droid. Easy. :D

Optimus Prime

05-03-2002, 08:45 AM

<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Frizzo the Clown:
 <blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Optimus Prime:
 <blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Colorado Cajun:
Yeah I made you a droid because they say there are only two Sith at a time. Plus I had to rework Albert's a little to make it less watered down<hr /></blockquote>Why am I a droid?<hr /></blockquote>Because you're a Transfomer. A transformer is a robot, and a robot is a droid. Easy. :D <hr /></blockquote>Living Robot, but still good point.

TyRoss

05-03-2002, 08:47 AM

<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by HeadHunter:
damn it that means i am a bl00dy gungan

i better get posting then<hr /></blockquote>Is there any better type of Gungan?

Optimus Prime

05-03-2002, 09:37 PM

What happened to the story? CC? :confused:

Colorado Cajun

05-04-2002, 01:38 PM

waiting on Albert to decide if he wants to write it or if he wants me to

Fat Albert

05-04-2002, 11:08 PM

<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Colorado Cajun:
waiting on Albert to decide if he wants to write it or if he wants me to<hr /></blockquote>In fact, I'll turn this whole thing over to you! Go, Cajun, go!

Colorado Cajun

05-04-2002, 11:29 PM

<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Fat Albert:
 <blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Colorado Cajun:
waiting on Albert to decide if he wants to write it or if he wants me to<hr /></blockquote>In fact, I'll turn this whole thing over to you! Go, Cajun, go!<hr /></blockquote><img border="0" title="" alt="[Eek!]" src="eek.gif" /> why? I thought we were going to do it together?

Hank Scorpio

05-04-2002, 11:31 PM

As long as someone does it!

Colorado Cajun

05-04-2002, 11:32 PM

ok here's the cast for the CS Star Wars epic
Jedi Council-Frizzo, Kyle, Killown, Jbond

Yoda:Mirko

Chancellor- Tech

Senator-Rogue, Iben, BBF2

Teacher (Qui-Gon to Obi)-Tyross

Padawan- Beemanbone

Sith-Colorado Cajun

Bounty Hunter- Pixiness, Knerys, Tyler-Durden

Droid- Tardumb, Optimus Prime

Gungan-Runagar,Lackey

Hutt- Thebtskink

Podracer-JediPaul,Kitty,Ripley

Slave trade (think Watto)-Link

Slave- Fat Albert

and others to come

Hank Scorpio

05-04-2002, 11:34 PM

Gungan? NOOOOOOO!!!!!

My calls to become a Jawa have fallen on deaf years. <img border="0" title="" alt="[Frown]" src="frown.gif" />

[ 05-04-2002, 11:55 PM: Message edited by: Runagar ]

Fat Albert

05-05-2002, 07:58 AM

Ok, yeah, you better start on this CC, post haste!

Colorado Cajun

05-05-2002, 10:38 AM

A(not so) long, long time ago on a messageboard(not so) far, far away. The sect known as the Sith watch from the shadows as the Imperial Senate and the Republic battle each other in a pointless war of words.
As the Senators struggle for control another war is being fought inside the walls of Cloud City. A young Jedi Tyross and his Padawan have been dispatched to help stop Skink the Hutt from expanding his rule over the city. Tyross races to stop Skink's Bounty Hunters from Kidnapping the Senator from Cloud City.

Fat Albert

05-05-2002, 02:59 PM

Alrighty that's good. Here's mine:

A (not so) long, long time ago, on a messageboard (not so) far, far, away.....

CS! STAR WARS

THE SECT KNOWN AS THE SITH WATCH FROM THE SHADOWS AS THE IMPERIAL SENATE AND THE REPUBLIC BATTLE EACH OTHER IN A POINTLESS WAR OF WORLDS.

AS THE SENATORS OF TWO PLANETS STUGGLE FOR CONTROL ANOTHER WAR IS BEING FOUGHT INSIDE THE WALLS OF CLOUD CITY. A YOUNG JEDI, TYROSS, AND HIS PATAWAN, BEEMANBONE, HAVE BEEN DISPATCHED TO HELP STOP SKINK THE HUTT FROM EXPANDING HIS RULE OVER THE CITY. TYROSS RACES TO STOP SKINK'S BOUNTY HUNTERS FROM KIDNAPPING THE YOUNG SENATOR FROM CLOUD CITY, SENATOR ROGUE.............

[ 05-05-2002, 04:54 PM: Message edited by: Fat Albert ]

Hobbit Girl

05-05-2002, 04:43 PM

Where are the Hobbits in this story. I think I must demand to be an ewok.

Fat Albert

05-05-2002, 05:10 PM

<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Hobbit Girl:
Where are the Hobbits in this story. I think I must demand to be an ewok.<hr /></blockquote>Sry, HG, we already started :(. But if we do, you can be in the sequel :D .

Colorado Cajun

05-05-2002, 06:05 PM

Senator Rogue stood before the huge glass

window. "Wow," she thought, "I wish I could see

this just one more day. But I can't. My life no

longer matters. I've given it all up. If I wasn't

so stupid I wouldn't have pledged my life to these

people. Yet I promised to do my all to protect them."

Rogue suddenly snaps back to reality.

Barely seeing her reflection in the mirror,

she whispers to it, "Stop whining, big baby! We

have work to do!"

So with a final glimpse of the clouds, she begins topack again.

She did not notice the blurr that

zipped by her window. That blurr was Tyler-

Durden, a bounty hunter bound to catch Senator

Rogue..................

Rogue

05-05-2002, 08:33 PM

Oooh I'm being kidnapped! Ty better save me! <img border="0" title="" alt="[Wink]" src="wink.gif" />

Colorado Cajun

05-07-2002, 12:22 PM

I'll get the next part up this afternoon when I get back from Boulder

Frizzo the Clown

05-07-2002, 01:00 PM

<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Rogue:
Oooh I'm being kidnapped! Ty better save me! <img border="0" title="" alt="[Wink]" src="wink.gif" /> <hr /></blockquote>Nope, sorry. Ty is forbidden by the Council to do any saving this month...so, you'll either have to save yourself, or wait! <img border="0" title="" alt="[Wink]" src="wink.gif" />

Hank Scorpio

05-07-2002, 01:09 PM

If I'm still a Gungun then I want a glorious death. Both sides nailing me with a hail of laser blasts.

Meesa wanta die!!

pixiness

05-07-2002, 04:28 PM

All I'm saying is don't expect me to obey that silly "no-disintegrations" rule! Mess with me, you'll cease to be!

Oh yeah... I'm bad... Who wants a piece-o-dis? <img border="0" title="" alt="[Wink]" src="wink.gif" />

Frizzo the Clown

05-07-2002, 04:36 PM

<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by pixiness:
All I'm saying is don't expect me to obey that silly "no-disintegrations" rule! Mess with me, you'll cease to be!

Oh yeah... I'm bad... Who wants a piece-o-dis? <img border="0" title="" alt="[Wink]" src="wink.gif" /> <hr /></blockquote>No offense pix, but its hard to imagine you as someone that bad-ass....

Colorado Cajun

05-07-2002, 04:40 PM

She can be whatever she wants in my story <img border="0" title="" alt="[Wink]" src="wink.gif" />

Fat Albert

05-07-2002, 05:12 PM

<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Colorado Cajun:
She can be whatever she wants in my story <img border="0" title="" alt="[Wink]" src="wink.gif" /> <hr /></blockquote>OUR story :mad: :D

Malice

05-07-2002, 05:47 PM

OOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHH YYYYYYEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAA

I am the Chancellor...
Am I the good one or bad one?

Colorado Cajun

05-07-2002, 11:01 PM

hey Albert I'm just too swamped with other things lately to write for this so it's now up to you to keep it alive

Fat Albert

05-07-2002, 11:21 PM

<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Colorado Cajun:
hey Albert I'm just too swamped with other things lately to write for this so it's now up to you to keep it alive<hr /></blockquote>:mad: fine!

Colorado Cajun

05-07-2002, 11:23 PM

I'm sorry but i have to put school and work first man

Iben

05-08-2002, 08:54 AM

<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Colorado Cajun:
I'm sorry but i have to put school and work first man<hr /></blockquote>So you're not gonna finish what you started eh?.... :rolleyes: :mad: :p <img border="0" title="" alt="[Wink]" src="wink.gif" />

Rogue

05-08-2002, 09:38 AM

Ooooh!

Colorado Cajun

05-08-2002, 11:20 AM

<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Iben:
 <blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Colorado Cajun:
I'm sorry but i have to put school and work first man<hr /></blockquote>So you're not gonna finish what you started eh?.... :rolleyes: :mad: :p <img border="0" title="" alt="[Wink]" src="wink.gif" /> <hr /></blockquote>alright, alright just for that I'll continue writing it but all of you will have to be very patient can you handle that? :p

Iben

05-08-2002, 11:28 AM

Okay good, I think I can handle a little patience.....but only a little :p <img border="0" title="" alt="[Wink]" src="wink.gif" />

Colorado Cajun

05-08-2002, 11:30 AM

That's ok I'm doing my essay that's do this afternoon right now and then after that I can hopefully right a part before tonight. So all we need is a little patience :D

Hobbit Girl

05-09-2002, 12:28 AM

<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Fat Albert:
 <blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Hobbit Girl:
Where are the Hobbits in this story. I think I must demand to be an ewok.<hr /></blockquote>Sry, HG, we already started :( . But if we do, you can be in the sequel :D .<hr /></blockquote>Well, **** that, I don'twant to be in this ****ing story anyhow. Don't put me in any ****ing sequel. I don't want to play

bbf2

05-09-2002, 09:23 AM

Calm down, HG, it's just a story. No need to react so violently.

Hank Scorpio

05-09-2002, 11:09 AM

Anger leads to hate. Hate leads to suffering.

Optimus Prime

05-09-2002, 12:54 PM

<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Runagar:
Anger leads to hate. Hate leads to suffering.<hr /></blockquote>Vary true.

Colorado Cajun

05-09-2002, 01:23 PM

<Ty Ross and his Padawan Beemanbone touch down in Cloud City, whereupon they step out onto the landing platform and take in the chiiled air>

Ty Ross: Careful my young Padawn I sense a great disturbance in the force. Something isn't right here and we have little time to find the Senator

<Bee looks at his master and puts a hand on his lightsaber.

The doors to the City open and out walks Slinger occampanied by George W Bush's 18th Cousin and Hobbit Girl. They warmly greet the two jedi before escorting them into the city>

George W: Master Ross Skink the Hutt has began his seige of Cloud City. His Bount Hunters have started to wreak havok on my business.

TyRoss: How is Senator Rogue? Is she still safe?

Hobbit Girl: Last time we checked on her she was packing to go home and save her people

<Suddenly laser blasts fill the air and the humm of two lightsabers ignited can be heard. Two more Bounty Hunters are firing down on the jedi from a closed in area a few yards away>

TyRoss: Everyone take cover! We'll draw their fire while you get to safety.

<Bee and Ty whirl their sabers deflecting the laserfire as Hobbit Girl leads the others to safety within the walls of Cloud City. Ty and Bee charge towards the Bounty Hunters who scatter and take cover>

Knerys: Remember our orders are to keep the Jedi busy long enough for Tyler to kidnap Rogue. So no disintegrations Pixi.

Pixi: I'm making no promises but I'll try not to

<Knerys and Pixi reign down laser blasts as the Jedi deflect them all and slowly move into range>

Bee: Master they seem to be toying with us, look at how their laser fire isn't even trying to be accurate.

Tyross: Their trying to stall us Bee, but why?

<overhead a small YWing flys out of the city with Tyler Durden behind the controls>

Tyler via comlink: The mission was succesful, you can let the Jedi go now and meet me back at the Hutt's. I have the Senator!

<Knery's and Pixi fire a few more blasts towards the advancing Jedi and then Pixi tosses a few thermal detanators that explode in a massive way causing the Jedi to dive for cover. When they get back to their feet the Bounty Hunters have vanished>

Beemanbone: Now what master?

Iben

05-09-2002, 01:28 PM

It's good, keep it up :)

Frizzo the Clown

05-09-2002, 01:29 PM

blah blah blah....hurry up and get to my part! <img border="0" title="" alt="[Wink]" src="wink.gif" /> j/k...keep it up! :D

Colorado Cajun

05-09-2002, 01:35 PM

you're coming up soon Clown boy

[ 05-09-2002, 01:36 PM: Message edited by: Colorado Cajun ]

Frizzo the Clown

05-09-2002, 01:37 PM

<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Colorado Cajun:
you're coming up soon Clown boy<hr /></blockquote>Oh goodie! :D

Tardumb

05-09-2002, 04:33 PM

Good Job

Colorado Cajun

05-09-2002, 06:05 PM

<Elsewhere in the darkness of the Imperial palace, Malice sits on his throne smiling coldly. Next to him stands a man dressed in all black with a cloak over his face>

Malice: Cajun it seems the Jedi failed just like I said they would. Prepare for the next step in the end of the force that holds us back.

<The man nods and steps to his Master's side with a smooth flawless motion>

Cajun: I will depart once I recieve word from Skink that the Jedi have arrived on Tattoine.

<Malice grins and looks out into the darkness of the night>

Malice: Make sure not to let them feel your presence until everything is in place for the falling of the jedi. I will not tolerate failure Cajun, so see to it yourself that everything goes according to plan.

Cajun: Yes my Master it will be done

<Cajun then exits the room and heads to his ship to prepare for the trip to Tattoine>

Cajun: I will not fail Master!

<He slides his saber over his shoulder and climbs aboard his ship which departs for the outskirts of the desert planet>

Iben

05-09-2002, 06:10 PM

Good, you're keeping it up!

bbf2

05-09-2002, 06:43 PM

I'm not going to be Jar Jar, am I? I heard he was a senator in this one or something! <img border="0" title="" alt="[Eek!]" src="eek.gif" />

Colorado Cajun

05-09-2002, 06:45 PM

<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by bbf2:
I'm not going to be Jar Jar, am I? I heard he was a senator in this one or something! <img border="0" title="" alt="[Eek!]" src="eek.gif" /> <hr /></blockquote>actually he is a senator in it lol and a jedi in the making I hear :p

tyler_durden

05-09-2002, 07:12 PM

Woohoo!!! I kidknapped a Senator!!!!!

Knerys

05-09-2002, 07:27 PM

Nice! Keep it up.

Fat Albert

05-09-2002, 10:11 PM

Hey, CC, don't be a glory hog! We did this together! :mad:

Rogue

05-09-2002, 10:54 PM

Good job!

Colorado Cajun

05-12-2002, 04:10 PM

<A lone Ywing can be seen touching down on the sesert planet of Tatooine. The doors open and Tyler-Durden drags Senator Rogue to her feet>

Rogue: You know you will never get away with this. The Imperial Senate will not stand for such actions!

Tyler: Shut up, I'm only following orders

<Tyler drags Rogue into the palace of Skink the Hutt as another ship touches down in the distance.

Tyler leads her over to the large hideous creature who takes one look at her and laughs>

Skink the Hutt: Whoah hohoho! Seems to me that I now hold the fate of you and your people in my hands Senator. We Hutt's are business people, we only want to grow in power. Give us Cloud City and I will let you go

<Rogue ets a look of Rage in her eyes and she swings her fist which smashes into Skinks face. Tyler garbs her and points his blaster at her head>

Skink the Hutt: Ho ho ho! we'll see how feisty you are once your people suffer from your actions

<Knerys and Pixi enter the room and nod as Hutt gives them their new orders. They grab Rogue and drag her off to her cell where they toss her in.>

Knerys: Now Senator you will see the pain you are causing your people first hand. Oh and don't think that anyone will rescue you. We're more than ready for the jedi

<Knerys and Pixi head on over to Tyler to prepare for the Jedi's arrival>

Knerys

05-12-2002, 04:13 PM

And the plot thickens. Keep it up.

Iben

05-12-2002, 04:31 PM

But where the hell am I? :mad: <img border="0" title="" alt="[Wink]" src="wink.gif" />

MysteryStar

05-12-2002, 05:02 PM

good job there Cajun

Fat Albert

05-12-2002, 09:33 PM

<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Iben:
But where the hell am I? :mad: <img border="0" title="" alt="[Wink]" src="wink.gif" /> <hr /></blockquote>I helped too. How dare you! Darn you all! :mad: :mad:
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:D

Fat Albert

05-12-2002, 09:37 PM

Colorado Cajun

05-12-2002, 10:35 PM

<Inside the senate on Coruscant negotiations are underway between the Republic and the new order known as the Empire. Senator Iben and Chancellor Tech have been in a heated debate for the last three hours>

Iben: Chancellor are you insane? What you offer will surely lead to war between our people

<The Chancellor grins as he looks directly into the young Senators eyes>

Chancellor Tech: Senator Iben I assure you that the Empire doesn't want to cause any problems with the Republic, we just want to usher in a new age of prosperity for the galaxy

<Iben laughs at the words she is being subjected to as she walks over to BBF2 who is working on a droid. BBF2 slides an information card into the small droid as Iben approaches>

Iben: What do you think of the Chancellors proposal BB? Do you feel we should let him rule over the senate as he so wants?

<Chancellor Tech and BBF2 lock eyes as the rest of the senate whispers amongst themselves. Suddenly Hobbit Girl enters the room and whispers something to Iben>

Iben: It seems that Senator Rogue has been kidnapped by Skink the Hutt. We have been asked to have our security upped for the remainder of these negotians.

<Imperial Stormtroopers march into the room as Tech smiles coldly>

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Hobbit Girl

05-13-2002, 04:12 AM

Two cameos so far for the little hobbit :) Seems throwing a temper tantrum does work. Thanks, CC, I lub yew lots :) :p to you nasty mean old Fat Albert

bbf2

05-13-2002, 08:25 AM

Good job!

It's bbf2 though, not BBF2

Longshanks

05-13-2002, 01:50 PM

Small insignificant background droid (C Shanks Pee oh) scuttles by, having absolutely nil effect on plot.

"dreep ploop weep meep meep.....phut"

Iben

05-13-2002, 02:22 PM

Hey now we're talking, good job keep it up CC! :D <img border="0" title="" alt="[Wink]" src="wink.gif" />

Chambers

05-13-2002, 03:27 PM

You're still looking for young talents to appear in the sequel of the story, arent'you? :D :D :D

Fat Albert

05-13-2002, 04:35 PM

<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Hobbit Girl:
 :p to you nasty mean old Fat Albert<hr /></blockquote><img border="0" title="" alt="[Frown]" src="frown.gif" />

Colorado Cajun

05-14-2002, 10:53 PM

<TyRoss and Bee are in hot pursuit of Tyler Durden and the kidnapped Senator. They sit in the ****pit of a Rebellion shuttle as Ty types their destination into the computer>

Bee: Master why are we going to Coruscant? The Senator is being taken to Skink the Hutt's palace on Tatooine

Ty: Yes she is Bee but I sense someone or something else is behind her kidnapping and I wish to speak to the Jedi Council about it first

<Bee looks the older Jedi in the eyes and can see the fear he's trying to mask>

Bee: Master do you think that the Council will have anymore information than we do?

<Ty stops punching the buttons on the control panel as the shuttle veers and heads south towards Coruscant>

Ty: Yes I hope so, because if Mirko and the others don't; I have no idea who will

Bee: Master If the one's behind it are more powerful than the Bounty Hunters, we're going to need help

<Ty turns and gazes out the canopy of the ship into the darkness of space blankly>

TyRoss: I just hope we're not too late to save the Senator and prevent the start of a war

<The jedi sit back in the ****pit as the shuttle enters the airspace over Coruscant. The ship touches down on docking bay seven whereupon Ty and Bee are escorted towards the Jedi Council by security>

Hobbit Girl

05-16-2002, 04:00 AM

<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Fat Albert:
 <blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Hobbit Girl:
 :p to you nasty mean old Fat Albert<hr /></blockquote>:(<hr /></blockquote>don't you try and look sad at me. You were the one who said I couldn't play in the story and hurt my feelings. I am a very sensitive little hobbit, you know.

Optimus Prime

05-16-2002, 08:57 AM

Going good Cajun :D , One question Will I be armed?(aka. my laser rifle)

Colorado Cajun

05-17-2002, 04:17 PM

<Ty and Bee step into a large councilroom where the entire Jedi Council sits pondering the events of the last few days. There's Masters Frizzo, Kyle, Jbond and Killown all waiting to here what the two Jedi have to say>

Ty: Masters I can't help but feel that someone of great power is pulling the strings of the Bounty Hunters that Bee and I were dispatched to stop from kidnapping the Senator

Bee: Master Ty is right, something just doesn't feel right about this entire kidnapping

<The Council look at eachother and talk amongst themselves while Ty and Bee stand patiently waiting for their response>

Frizzo: We too have sensed a presence just beyond our reach. It's a presence surrounded in the darkside of the Force

Kyle: Yes which is why we can't tell exactly what it is

<Ty and Bee stand in the center of the room as the Jedi Council suddenly become fairly silent as Mirko steps into the room. He sits in his chair and looks down on the two Jedi before speaking>

Mirko: Hmmm I sense much confusion in you two yes! A darkness has risen, and you two must see to it that it fails. Young Ty be mindful of the darkside for it knows your weaknesses and your fears

<Ty nods too Mirko who looks at Bee with a serious face>

Mirko: I sense much fear in you, fear is the path to the darkside

Bee: I'm not scared Master, I will not go down the path to the darkside

Mirko: We'll see, We'll see

Ty: Masters what do you wish for us to do now?

Frizzo: Return to Tattooine and rescue Senator Rogue from Skink and his Bounty Hunters

Killown: Yes but beware of the darkside, they know that we're vunerable now

Ty: Yes masters we will be careful

<Ty and Bee then exit the room to prepare for their rescue mission>

Frizzo the Clown

05-17-2002, 04:58 PM

Its about time I was in this story! <img border="0" title="" alt="[Wink]" src="wink.gif" /> But where are the nuances of my character? Like the midgets, or the porn.....or the midget porn? <img border="0" title="" alt="[Wink]" src="wink.gif" />

Fat Albert

05-18-2002, 08:56 PM

<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Frizzo the Clown:
Its about time I was in this story! <img border="0" title="" alt="[Wink]" src="wink.gif" /> But where are the nuances of my character? Like the midgets, or the porn.....or the midget porn? <img border="0" title="" alt="[Wink]" src="wink.gif" /> <hr /></blockquote>:rolleyes:

Rogue

05-20-2002, 02:53 PM

Good job! Keep it coming!

Fat Albert

05-20-2002, 08:00 PM

<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Rogue:
Good job! Keep it coming!<hr /></blockquote>You're too kind :o

Colorado Cajun

05-24-2002, 12:13 PM

<Late night on the desert planet of Tatooine. A small Sith infiltrator lands unnoticed on the outskirts of the desert. Darth Cajun emerges with a few reconiscence droids who he sends to gather information for him.

He takes some binoculars from out of the ship and looks around with a chilling grin on his face>

Cajun: I'm here Master and there is no sign of the Jedi yet. I'll stay hidden and let them come to me whereupon I'll crush them or turn them to the darkside.

Voice: Do not underestimate the jedi my young apprentice. The force is a powerful ally when used correctly. Just do as I said and stay hidden until I give you the order to strike. The Jedi will fall by our hands!!

Cajun: Yes master it will be done

<Cajun hooks his saber over his shoulder on hops on his Sith speeder. He takes one last look around before heading off in the direction of Skink's Palace>

Rogue

05-24-2002, 08:26 PM

Good job! Someone better rescue me soon!

slinger

05-24-2002, 08:37 PM

If I complained would I get a cameo? Great SW story.

Colorado Cajun

06-01-2002, 11:31 PM

Hey everyone I'm so swamped with things right now I won't be able to write anymore for awhile. Does anyone want to take over the story? Let the legacy of CS Star Wars live on

Optimus Prime

06-02-2002, 12:07 PM

I'm willing to.

Colorado Cajun

06-02-2002, 12:17 PM

excellent just pick it up from where I left off if you like

Optimus Prime

06-02-2002, 01:16 PM

<In the space above Tatooine, the Rebellion shuttle has just arrived in orbit.>

TyRoss: We'll land in the desert near Mos Eisley spaceport.

Bee: Yes Master.

<The sleek Rebellion shuttle glids down through Tatooine's the night sky to have a soft landing.>

TyRoss: Bee get the swoop bikes ready. We must head to Mos Eisley, immediately.

Bee: Right away Master, but why are we going to Mos Eisley?

TyRoss: There we'll find a way to get into Skink's Palace with out being noticed.

Bee: Understood, Master.

What do you think, Cajun.

[ 06-03-2002, 06:29 PM: Message edited by: Optimus Prime ]

Colorado Cajun

06-02-2002, 01:19 PM

I like it keep up the good work

Frizzo the Clown

06-02-2002, 05:56 PM

<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Colorado Cajun:
I like it keep up the good work<hr /></blockquote>Yes, great job...but we need more of that "Clown" character...he's great!

Optimus Prime

06-04-2002, 07:53 AM

<The shuttle's cargo hatch opens revealing a pair of Swoop bikes. Bee has finished the preparations.>

Bee: We're ready Master.

TyRoss: Vary good Bee.

<The two Jedi climb on to their bike and streek off across Tatooine's desert sand. As Morning dawns on Tatooine as the Jedi reach Mos Eisley Space Port. The two bring their swoop bike to a stop infront of the cantina.>

TyRoss: Keep a watchful eye Bee.

Bee: Yes Master.

<The Jedi enter the cantina.>

Bee: Who are we looking for?

TyRoss: Him.

<Ty points over to a man sitting at a table.>

TyRoss: Ripley its been a long time.

Ripley: Well look what the Jawa dragged in. TyRoss, how have you been?

TyRoss: I've been doing fine. But I didn't come here to talk about old times.

Ripley: Then what?

Bee: We need to get in to Skink's Palace, with out him knowing.

Ripley: Now why would a Jedi want to get into Skink's Palace.

TyRoss: Bounty Hunters have taken Someone there that we need to get out.

Ripley: You meen Senator Rogue.

TyRoss: Yes.

Ripley: I wouldn't help anyone get into a hutt's home. But...

Bee: But?

Ripley: All right I'll help you.

TyRoss: Thank you, Rip.

Ridley: Yeah, well you two meet me at my place O.K.

TyRoss: We'll be there.

<Unscene the them a sith droid watches them from one of the windows.>

[ 06-04-2002, 07:57 AM: Message edited by: Optimus Prime ]

Knerys

06-04-2002, 03:01 PM

Nicely done. Keep it up.

Optimus Prime

06-06-2002, 06:59 AM

<The Jedi quitly leave the cantina unaware that they're meeting with Ripley is know to someone else.>

Cajun: The Jedi are here, I must go prepare myself.

<Hours laters in the burning sun of Tatooine's twin suns. TyRoss and Bee are just arriving at Ripley's Podracer hanger.>

Bee: Master do you think Ripley realy can get us in unnoticed.

TyRoss: For the senator's sake I hope so.

<The two Jedi walk to the door and TyRoss Knocks. A small eye holl opens quickly and then closes qiuckly.>

Ripley: Welcome to my humble home, guys.

TyRoss: Ripley it would be best if we got strait to the matter at hand.

Ripley: Right, now you know about the great Bunta race right.

TyRoss: Yes.

Ripley: Well the Hutt that is Skink will be there.

Bee: So?

Ripley: Skink can realy get into a podrace so if I can get the race interesting he and some of his guards will be out of your way.

TyRoss: But what about getting us in the the palace?

Bee: and the Bounty Hunters?

Ripley: As to the Bounty Hunters you guys are on your own. But getting you in will be no problem if you have Prime with you.

Bee: Who's Prime?

Ripley: My droid he can get you in anywhere, Prime come over here.

TyRoss: A pit droid won't help us.

Ripley: He's no pit droid.

<Suddenly a battle type droid marches over.>

Prime: Somebody call.

Ripley: Yes I did, Prime meet your new master.

Bee: We can't that a droid.

Ripley: "We" aren't, TyRoss is Prime's new master.

TyRoss: Ripley I.....

Ripley: There's no sense arguing about it. Besides I built him to be a Jedi's perfect droid. Come with me Ty I'll tell you what he can do.

TyRoss

06-06-2002, 07:51 AM

I get a battle droid and Jedi powers???? Sweet!!!

tyler_durden

06-06-2002, 04:59 PM

Sweet, I hadn't read this in a while. I am still alive at least. I figured that I would be dead by now. But with the Jedi coming and a Sith ready and waiting, someone will be dying soon....

Optimus Prime

06-09-2002, 09:25 PM

<TyRoss and Ripley walk into a room>

Ripley: O.K. Ty this is the plan. The race starts in five hours, when it starts that's when you, your friend, and Optimus brake into the palace. You'll have at the most one hour to save her. You have to be in and out before the race ends or else you'll have to deal with all of Skick's guards.

TyRoss: Right, then in four and a half hours Bee, Optimus, and I will go to the palace.

Ripley: Good luck.

TyRoss: Don't worry the Force is with us.

Ripley: That and the fact that no one know your coming.

<In the desert, Colorado Cajun is meeting with a man>

Tyler Durden: So the Jedi that were fallowing me are here.

Cajun: Yes.

Tyler Durden: Well I'll make sure that they get a warm welcome.

tyler_durden

06-10-2002, 02:27 PM

I am going to kick some Jedi a$$!!!!

Optimus Prime

06-11-2002, 02:46 PM

<Four and half hour later, Infront of Skink's Palace. The Jedi and the droid Prime are well hidden in a cave.>

Bee: Prime you haven't told us how we're getting in yet.

Prime: Don't worry Bee.

TyRoss: Prime are you malfunctioning?

Prime: No sir. I'm not we just have to whate here until the race starts.

TyRoss: Alright.

<Deep in the desert of Tatooine, everyone is getting they're finel podrace preparations.>

Ripley: There all finished.

JediPaul: You better be becuase your going to lose anyway.

<Ripley turns and faces JediPaul.>

Ripley: Don't bet on it.

JediPaul: Yeah right. I'll see you at the end of the race or at least what's left of you.

<JediPaul walks away as a cat girl walks over.>

Kitty: Good luck in the race today Rip.

Ripley: Kitty your racing today!?!

Kitty: Sure am. So what with all the upgrades?

Ripley: Just making the race more interesting.

Kitty: O.K. well good luck again.

Ripley: (Talking to himself) Ty will need more luck then me

Speaker: All racers to the starting line.

[ 06-17-2002, 06:54 AM: Message edited by: Optimus Prime ]

Optimus Prime

06-17-2002, 07:16 AM

<At the Podracing Start/Finish line. Tte two headed annoncer takes his set in the annoncer's tower.>

Annoncer: Well Hi out there to all you podracing fans. We have quite the race for you today. Now let's see whose out racing. It looks like last year's champion JediPaul is back trying to make it two chanpionships. But he's got to get past the other racers to do it. Ripley is looking go, and what a suprise here! It looks like Kitty is finally back for more racing action! Well here comes the march of the flags. It looks like we're about to start and to start the race Skink the Hutt!

<Skink waves.>

Skink: Lets have a real good race!

<Skink snaps his fingers and a man walks over.>

Skink:(whispering) Is everything ready for the Jedi?

Man:(whispering) Yes, the Jedi have no idea what awaits them.

Skink:(whispering) Good, ha ha ha.

<Skink hits the gon and the race begins! Over infront of Skink's Palace.>

Prime: The race has started.

TyRoss: Then it's time to make the rescue.

Knerys

06-19-2002, 11:51 PM

Nice job. Keep it up.

Optimus Prime

06-20-2002, 06:43 AM

<The Jedi and Prime stealthy head tor the guarded front gate.>

Bee: Three guards Master.

TyRoss: We need to get past them.

Prime: Leave that to me, sir.

<Prime using rocks for covering sneaks up behind the guards.>

Guard1: Nice Quite day, eh guys.

Guard2: When you work for Skink everyday is a quite day.

Guard3: Yeah but I don't know about the nice part.

<Prime Rolls a round object over in between the guards.>

Guard2: What's that?

Guard3: I don't know.

<The guards kneel to get a better look.>

Guard1: Hold it I know what that is...It's a thermal detonator!!!

<The detonater explodes, All three guards are killed in the blast.>

Bee: Prime could you have tried to have done it quite.

Prime: No Bee.

TyRoss: The guards won't be telling any one that we're here.

Prime: Now all we need to do is open the gate.

Bee: I'll handle that.

<Bee walks over to the door control panel. After he removes the cover he hot wires it. The gate opens.>

Bee: We're in.

TyRoss: Good work Bee.

Prime: Well lets get moving.

<As the three of them enter the palace watching them from one of the towers was Tyler Durden.>

Tyler: The Jedi are walking right into my trap.

tyler_durden

06-20-2002, 03:30 PM

Ha ha!! I set a trap. This is getting good. :D

Optimus Prime

06-24-2002, 09:16 AM

<Back at the Race, the racers are streaming through course.>

Ripley: OK it's time to make this race interesting.

<Ripley drives up beside a fellow racer. Ripley then throws a detonater into the racer's engine.>

Racer: Hu???

<The engine explodes!>

Racer AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!

<The racer spins out of control and into a a cliff side.>

Announcer: Ouch I don't care what speices you are but that gonna hurt.

Skink: Hu hu hu the race is getting good, but how is our guests.

Man behind Skink: I have been told that the Jedi are in the palace.

Skink: Good very good hu hu hu.

Kitty

06-24-2002, 12:05 PM

very kick @$$ story in my opinion. actually...i didn't even know that I was in the story until prime pmed me yesterday...:D, but it's all cool.

tyler_durden

06-24-2002, 03:29 PM

I am bounty hunter. Fear me.

I can't wait to see what happens with the trap that I set.:D

Optimus Prime

06-26-2002, 08:11 AM

< Back at the Race, the racers are streaming through course. >

<We return to Skink's Palace, where the Jedi are stealthily sneaking around.>

Bee: Master it would appear that the palace is deserted.

TyRoss: It might appear deserted, but things are never what they seem.

Prime: Well If you asked me. I'd say it feels like we're in a trap.

<The Jedi walk down the hall and in to the holding cells area.>

TyRoss: Alright start searching the cells for the Senator.

<The three of them start searching cell be cell for Senator Rogue.>

Bee: Over here Master.

<TyRoss and Prime run over to the cell that Bee is standing infront of.>

TyRoss: Senator Rogue we're here to rescue you.

Rogue: That's nice.

Prime: That's nice? Sir I think they brainwashed her.

Rogue: Not at all Jedi!

<Suddenly Senator Rogue reveals herself to be Iben!!!>

Bee: That's not the Senator!

Tyler: How perceptive Jedi!

<Tyler Durden Jumps down as Iben open her cell.>

Prime: It's Three against two a fair fight.

<Just as Prime said those words. The Holding Area was filled with Skink's guards. >

Iben: You were saying droid.

Colorado Cajun

06-26-2002, 08:18 PM

nice twist there!! You're doing a great job

tyler_durden

06-27-2002, 01:26 AM

I concur. You are doing great with this story. Hey, you have me coming in here everyday to see if you have updated it.

Kitty

06-27-2002, 02:01 AM

Originally posted by tyler_durden
I concur. You are doing great with this story. Hey, you have me coming in here everyday to see if you have updated it.
same here :D:D:D:D

Optimus Prime

06-28-2002, 08:10 AM

<Back at the Race, the racers are on the second cercit (Lap) of the Race. Ripley is now pulling in between a pair of other racers.>

Ripley: Two at once.

< Ripley turns on his afterburners and passes both of the racers at the smae time. As he was doing it he damaged the stablelizers. The racers crash into two pillers.>

Ripley: There is know way that Skink isn't into 'this' race.

<Why'll Ripley continues the race, The Jedi are over there heads in trouble.>

TyRoss: Bee are you ready?

Bee: Of course, Master.

Tyler: Don't give the Jedi any more time! Kill them!

<TyRoss and Bee activate their Lightsabers as all the guards begin attacking them. Watching the battle up high and cloaked man stands.>

Cajun: The time is not now for me to reveal myself.

<Prime throws a flash Granade infront of five guards. Binded be the flash that fallowed Prime quickly takes out the five of them with a his Blaster Rifle. TyRoss slashes and defeats four others, Bee finishes the last of them.>

Prime: That's the last of them.

Iben: You wish!

<Iben presses a button on her wrist pad. A rumbling sould is heard coming towards them.>

Bee: What is that sound?

TyRoss: I don't know but be ready for anything.

Tyler: You'll not be ready for this!

<Iben grabs on to Tyler as he starts his rocket pack. One of the Larger doors open and a rancor enters!>

Bee: A rancor!

Prime: Worse a cyborg rancor!!!

tyler_durden

06-28-2002, 11:50 AM

Cyborg rancor!!:eek: :eek: Cool! And I have a jet pack. I'm the Boba Fett of this story! Plus I get to fly out with Iben, umm, embracing me!:eek: ;) :p

Colorado Cajun

06-28-2002, 12:02 PM

WHOOOOOOO HOOOOOOOO! Cyber Rancor's are spiffy:D

Optimus Prime

07-01-2002, 08:04 AM

<The rancor roars, at a first look it's cybernetic arm, chest plat and head set makes this rancor look more dangerous then your normal rancor.>

TyRoss: Don't back down we must rescue the Senator!

Bee: I'm ready Master.

<The Jedi take up battle positions, as Prime ready's a heavy launcher. Just then the rancor attack's. TyRoss ans Bee dodge the hands of the rancor.>

Bee: I have it Master.

<Bee jumps at the rancor ready to kill it. But, then the rancor pulls up it's metal arm and activates a built in laser cannon.<

TyRoss: Bee watch out!!!

< The rancor opens fire. Bee skillfully refects the laser shots away from him.>

Bee: We can't get close enought to harm it.

Prime: You can't but I can!

<Prime loads the launcher with a heavy detonator. Takes aim and fires it at the rancor. Booom!>

Prime: Direct hit!

Bee: So much for that rancor.

TyRoss: I wouldn't be so sure!

Prime: No it couldn't have.....

< The dust starts to settle showing that the rancor is in perfect health thanks to a energy shield.>

TyRoss: It has a defence shield?!?!

Prime: We're in trouble.

Knerys

07-01-2002, 11:21 PM

Nice! I wanna know what happens!

Malice

07-02-2002, 12:28 AM

bop

Optimus Prime

07-02-2002, 09:41 AM

Originally posted by Malice
bop

What's this bop about Malice?

Optimus Prime

07-02-2002, 09:58 AM

<The rancor continues it's attack!>

TyRoss: Optimus do you have anything strong enough to break through it's sheild?

Prime: I already used my strongest weapon against it!

<Prime dives out of the way of to of it's laser cannon shots. TyRoss looks the rancor over, and tries to pull the Jedi mind trick on it. But then TyRoss collapses.>

Bee: Master!

<Bee runs over to TyRoss while Optimus keeps the rancor distraced.>

Bee: Optimus we must retreat!

Prime: Fine here!

<Prime throws a Flash Granade at the rancor's eyes. The flash does nothing to blind it and it charges at them.>

Prime: Let's move!!!

tyler_durden

07-02-2002, 03:35 PM

This is a great story.

Optimus Prime

07-04-2002, 08:54 AM

Announcer: This has been a great race ladies and gentleman, and all you followers of Skink the Hutt. We are now in the three-mile Home stretch. And the great JediPual is in the Lead followed by are feline and then one of Tatooine's best Ripley.

<Ripley moves up beside Kitty.>

Ripley: Kitty get behind be.

Kitty: Why?

Ripley: Trust me.

<Kitty moves her podracer behind Ripley's. The two catch up on JediPual.>

JediPual: Eat this Ripley!

<JediPual pull a switch and flames come out the side of his racer. The heat damages Ripley's left engine.>

Ripley: I can take it and dish it out JP!

<Ripley presses a button as he comes engine to engine with JediPual. Suddenly Ripley left pod engine explodes taking both of them out!>

Announcer: Wow what a crash! And Kitty wins the race!

<Ripley climb out of what's left of his podracer.>

Ridley: Now if that wasn't a good diverson I don't know what is.

<A hovercraft land beside the wrecked podracer, and five armored men surround Ripley.>

Ripley: Don't worry I'm fine.

Knerys: You'll be wishing you hadn't survived racer.

<Knerys climbs out of a hovercraft.>

Ripley: Now what could you mean?

Knerys: Skink has given me to orders to remove you.

Ripley: Now why would the Great Skink want me killed for.

Knerys: Adding Jedi.

<Ripley's face gives a shocked look.>

Ripley: Shoot. (whispering to himself) Sorry Ty I blow it.

Knerys: Any last words?

Kitty: Yeah how about take this!

<Kitty attacks out of no where and takes down four of the five guards and Knerys! Ridley doesn't wait to punch the last guard.>

Ripley: Make a run for the hovercraft Kitty!!!

Kitty: No problem, but as soon as we're gone you have to explain yourself.

<Knerys gets up.>

Knerys: Your not escaping that easy!

<Knerys takes aim with a heavy rifle, as she is readying to fire Kitty looks over her shoulder.>

Kitty: Ho no you don't.

<Kitty turns around and attacks Knerys.>

Knerys: What the?!?!

<Kitty ponces apon Knerys!>

Ripley: Kitty we have to leave!

Kitty: Go without me after I bet this bounty hunter I'll bet it. Now Go!

<Ripley activates the hovercraft and flys out of sight. Kitty and Knerys struggle, but in the end Knerys hits kitty upside the head.>

Knerys: You dumb cat. Your died for making me lose him!

<Just when Knerys was about to shoot her comlink activated.>

Skink(through the comlick): Knerys is Ripley dead?

Knerys: No he escaped for now.

Skink: How could you have lost him?!?!

Knerys: A catgirl attacked me.

Skink: Catgirl?!?!? Bring her to me.

Knerys: I'm about to kill her for interfering!

Skink: I'll pay you to bring me my new slave!

Knerys: Yes Skink, sir.

<turns off her comlink.>

Knerys: Lucky Cat! :mad:

Iben

07-04-2002, 09:18 AM

I like it, it's good. :)

Frizzo the Clown

07-04-2002, 09:34 AM

Good work. One suggestion though...more Clown. ;)

Iben

07-04-2002, 09:41 AM

Screw the Clown......more....Iben ;)

Frizzo the Clown

07-04-2002, 09:56 AM

Originally posted by Iben
Screw the Clown......more....Iben ;) Hey..thats sounds like something I would say! ;)

Kitty

07-04-2002, 11:15 AM

oh cool i kicked ass! hehehe, at least i didn't die, and i won the race oddly enough, good story optimus, wohoo!

Optimus Prime

07-04-2002, 01:56 PM

Originally posted by Kitty
oh cool i kicked ass! hehehe, at least i didn't die, and i won the race oddly enough, good story optimus, wohoo!

You do know that your a slave now.

P.S. I corrected the spelling.

Kitty

07-04-2002, 01:58 PM

Originally posted by Optimus Prime

You do know that your a slave now.
i know, but still, I WON THE RACE :p:D:D:D

tyler_durden

07-05-2002, 10:33 AM

I wonder if skink will treat Kitty the way that Jabba treated Leia....:eek: ;)

Kitty

07-05-2002, 10:50 AM

Originally posted by tyler_durden
I wonder if skink will treat Kitty the way that Jabba treated Leia....:eek: ;)
:rolleyes:

Optimus Prime

07-05-2002, 08:47 PM

Originally posted by tyler_durden
I wonder if skink will treat Kitty the way that Jabba treated Leia....:eek: ;)

You'll have to wait and see.

Optimus Prime

07-08-2002, 08:50 AM

<Bee and Prime, Prime carring the unconcense TyRoss. Run through the Large hall while being pursued by the Cyber Rancor. The Rancor constinly firing it's laser cannon at them.>

Bee: We're almost out Prime.

Prime: Stop Talking and keep running!

<The two of them run through the main gate. A Cloaded Man stands infornt of them.>

Prime: Who the?

Cajun: You will not escape.

Bee: A sith!

<Cajun activites his Crimson Lightsaber and attacks Bee and Prime!>

Bee: Prime I'll keep him busy, get my master out of here!!

Prime: You don't need to tell me twice.

<But as Prime was about to make a run for it the Cyber Rancor appears out of Skink's Palace!>

Prime: Darn it the Rancor!!!

<The rancor opens fire and hits Prime. The force of the blast knock Prime with Ty off the cliff.>

Bee: MASTER!!!

<Bee Stops fighting Cajun and runs over to the side of the cliff. Suddenly a hovercraft comes up from the side dirven by Ripley with Prime and Ty in the back seat.>

Ripley: Get in Bee!!

<Bee junps in and Ripley Drives it back down the cliff. Laser shots flying everywhere.>

Bee: Your plan didn't work.

Ripley: We'll talk about it later. Let's just get out of here.

Colorado Cajun

07-08-2002, 11:39 AM

Darn it you got away;)
I can't wait for the next part

Malice

07-08-2002, 01:21 PM

I hope Kitty wears the "Iron Bra"

WOO WOO

Kitty

07-08-2002, 06:19 PM

Originally posted by Malice
I hope Kitty wears the "Iron Bra"

WOO WOO
:rolleyes:

Optimus Prime

07-10-2002, 08:58 AM

<The hovercraft lands next to Ripley's Podracer Hanger.>

Bee: Ripley they knew we were coming. What's up?

Ripley: I have no idea. Now help me get TyRoss inside.

Bee: Right.

<After getting TyRoss inside Ripley and Bee looks him over while Prime repairs himself.>

Ripley: I don't get it. Ty has no physical injury but he has not recovered.

Prime: I don't think that rancor could have done this.

Bee: No I think it was the Sith.

Ripley: What could the a Sith have done?

Bee: A lot.

Prime: Well we need to know how are we going to rescue the senator?

<TyRoss's eyes open.>

TyRoss: Simple we're going back.

tyler_durden

07-10-2002, 01:03 PM

Cool, but next time, someone must die!!!!:mad: ;)

(Preferably not me....:D )

Arnold Schwartz

07-10-2002, 01:52 PM

whrong identity. Dhoh

Colorado Cajun

07-10-2002, 05:30 PM

I agree with Tyler it's time for Darth Cajun to lay some smackdown;)

MovieDudeGuy

07-10-2002, 07:58 PM

Is it too late for me to join?

bbf2

07-10-2002, 08:01 PM

Can I join in too? I mean, I've already sort of in it but I've only appeared once and didn't have any lines.

Optimus Prime

07-11-2002, 06:21 AM

OK I'll see what I can do bbf2, Of course you can be in it MovieDudeGuy, but you might be in a sequel, If that OK with you. And as to the fact that everyone thinks someone should die. I'm not going to tell what happens, But I will tell you someone will be dieing soon.

MovieDudeGuy

07-11-2002, 01:30 PM

Originally posted by Optimus Prime
OK I'll see what I can do bbf2, Of course you can be in it MovieDudeGuy, but you might be in a sequel, If that OK with you. And as to the fact that everyone thinks someone should die. I'm not going to tell what happens, But I will tell you someone will be dieing soon.

great, just like the story

tyler_durden

07-12-2002, 12:47 AM

If it's me, I better at least go out in a blaze of glory!!! (oooo...that just brought Bon Jovi music in my head, I don't know if I can take it):eek: :eek: :rolleyes: ;) :p :cool: :D ;) :p

Optimus Prime

07-15-2002, 07:31 AM

<As night after covers the sand of Tatooine, a hovercraft glids across the desert.>

Ripley: So the plan is?

TyRoss: Find and Rescue the Senator.

Prime: Well then let's lock and load!

<Ripley brings the hovercraft to a stop outside Skink's Palice.>

Ripley: It's quite...

Bee: Too quite.

<The four enter the palice, through the ramains of the front door.>

TyRoss: Prime run a scan for life forms.

Bee: He'll proable find that cyber rancor.

Prime: Strange all I detect are three life forme, And not one of them is large enough for the rancor.

Ripley: Then what?

Prime: Two are below us but one is.......right above us!?!

<A single guard jumbs downin attack, but TyRoss and Prime counter attack him sending him to the floor.>

Ripley: I think we have a way to find out.

<Ripley grabs the guard.>

Ripley: Where is the Senator?

Guard: I'm not talking.

Ripley: Ty...

TyRoss: You will tell us where she is.

<TyRoss waves his hand while saying, The guard fall under the Jedi mind trick.>

Guard: She was taken to the to the slave torture camp.

Ripley: Thanks.

<Ripley throws the Guard to the floor.>

Bee: We need to know where the camp is.

Ripley: I know where the camp is so lets go.

Colorado Cajun

07-15-2002, 11:53 AM

gotta love the jedi mind trick lol

another good installment Optimus

tyler_durden

07-18-2002, 01:16 PM

I am with CC on that. Good job OP.

Optimus Prime

07-19-2002, 08:53 AM

<After a haft hour of riding in the Hovercraft, They arrive at the camp.>

Prime: There's at least 12 guards watching the camp.

Bee: How do we get in?

Ripley: Prime attack plan 3.

Prime: Right.

<Prime sneaks closer to the camp.>

TyRoss: What's Prime about to do Rip?

Ripley: Just watch...

<Prime throws a detonator beside a Slave cell. It explodes freeing all the slaves inside of it.>

Guard: The slaves are escaping!

Guard Commander: Activate the slave inplants!!!

Guard: Those slave don't have the inplants!

Guard: What then after them!!! What?!?!?!

<Prime jumps out and attacks! While Prime is fight the guards, TyRoss and Bee grab on of the slaves.>

TyRoss: have you seen a women dressed in green robes?

Fat Albert: Yeah in there.

<Fat Albert runs off as TyRoss, Ripley and Bee run into the building he pointed at.>

Ripley: Prime come on!

Prime: Right behind you.

<Prime punchs a guard one last time, and fallows them in. The four of them sneak around until they look into a room.>

Ripley: There is the Senator!

<They look into the room and see Rouge strapped to a interrogation unit and Iben about to activate it.>

Bee: And there is Iben.

Prime: I have something for her Rancor.

TyRoss: Not now Prime will rescue the Senator and escape before she can call on her pet.

Prime: Yes, sir.

<The four of them rush into the room!>

Iben: The Jedi!!!!

<Iben dodges to shots, but Prime Punches her in the face.>

Prime: Iben down.

TyRoss: Senator is that you.

Rouge: Yes I thank you for arriving when you did.

<TyRoss releases the straps, and Rouge climbs out of the device.>

Prime: Well let's get out of here.

A voice: Ho ho ho.

Bee: What the?

<A secret wall door opens reviling Skink the Hutt, Tyler Durden, Knerys, Kitty, and a the dark robed Darth Cajun.>

Skink the Hutt: Let the Battle begin.

tyler_durden

07-19-2002, 11:18 AM

I don't get to be in this big battle, or am I hiding with a different plan of attack. :confused: :D :confused:

Colorado Cajun

07-19-2002, 12:34 PM

Oh man this is going to be good. Just remember this is one bad ass Darth Cajun. No little Padawan can off me;) :D

Optimus Prime

07-19-2002, 01:58 PM

Originally posted by tyler_durden
I don't get to be in this big battle, or am I hiding with a different plan of attack. :confused: :D :confused:

Sorry about that Tyler, but I fixed the typeo.

Kitty

07-19-2002, 02:34 PM

o0o0o0o, a good battle scene, can't wait! (oh yea, and great story here too)

tyler_durden

07-23-2002, 05:56 PM

Originally posted by Optimus Prime

Sorry about that Tyler, but I fixed the typeo.

No problem, I was just wondering.:D

Optimus Prime

07-26-2002, 07:48 AM

O.K. this is the last update on this fanfic while I'm gone. Please don't continue it. It's the first thing I plan to do when I get back. So please wait until August 5. Thanks and now for what you really want.

TyRoss: Senator stay back.

(TyRoss and Bee activate there lightsabers. Prime pulls out a pair of laser rifles and tosses one to Ripley.)

Cajun: (Gives them all a cold stare)

(The fight is under way as Cajun activates his lightsaber. Prime and Knerys pin each other down with laser fire, as Ripley, TyRoss, and Bee take on Darth Cajun and Tyler. The room lights up with the confict of the two sides.)

Skink the Hutt: Huhuhu now this is a fight.

(Skink luaghs as the fight goes on and is trying to break the caller around her neck.)

(Suddenly Knerys gets a hit on Prime.)

Prime: Blast IT!!!

(Prime hits the floor damiged but online.)

Knerys: Good bye droid.

(Just as Knerys was about to fire a laser shot hits her sending her to the floor.)

Prime: What the?

Rogue: I thought you'd like some help.

Prime: Senator your my kind of Senator.

(The battle between Ripley and the Jedi vs. Durden and the Sith. Shot after shot, and the swinging of lightsabers continue until Tyler makes a dead shot hitting Bee's lightsaber handle destroying the saber.)

Ripley: Watch out kid!

(Ripley hits Bee out of the way and starts shooting at Tyler. But Cajun attacks!)

Bee, Kitty, Prime, and TyRoss: No!!!

(Cajun's lightsaber stabs Ripley straight through his chest! Ripley hits the floor breathing hard.)

Cajun: You are next Jedi.

(Tyler takes aim at TyRoss while he is fighting Cajun, and only Kitty see him.)

Kitty: No you don't!

(Kitty grabs the chain that Skink is holding her with, she pulls with ever thing she have got and pulls it right out of Skink's hand.)

Skink: What?!?!?!

(Kitty uses the chain like a weapon on Tyler.)

Tyler: How did she get free?!?!

(Tyler activates his jet pack and heads up into mid air. Skink crosses his eyes, his hand grabs a lever.)

Skink: We don't have much more time for this. Good bye Jedi!!!!!

If I can get online while I'm gone I'll post more.

tyler_durden

07-26-2002, 12:42 PM

Talk about a cliff hanger! That was the best installment yet!

Optimus Prime

07-26-2002, 02:36 PM

Originally posted by tyler_durden
Talk about a cliff hanger! That was the best installment yet!

Thank you, TD.

Kitty

07-26-2002, 06:57 PM

wohoo, i did something! ^_^, man, can't wait until u get back, well, i can, but, ya know.

Colorado Cajun

07-26-2002, 07:17 PM

aww I killed poor Ripley lol
Very well done Prime, I can't wait til you get back

Optimus Prime

08-06-2002, 03:24 PM

I'll post the next part tomarrow.

Optimus Prime

08-07-2002, 12:38 PM

(A trap door opens and Skink, Cajun, and the bounty Hunters go down it.)

Prime: There running!?

Skink(through a speaker): Far from is droid, Let's just say I'm out of the way.

Kitty: What is that Hutt talking about?

(The sound of breaking stone fills the room. As TyRoss runs over to Ripley's side.)

TyRoss: Ripley speak to us.

Ripley: (cough) Sorry Ty I don't think I'll be able to help you anymore.

TyRoss: Don't worry you've done your part. Just rest.

Ripley: Right Take care Kitty, I'll see you guys. Late........rrrrrrrrr.

(Ripley closes his eyes for the last time.)

Prime: I hate to break up every thing but we need to get out of here!

TyRoss: Prime is correct, Senator we must leave before....

(Suddenly the wall breaks open!)

Bee: Master we have a problem.

TyRoss: What?

(Three large lights look strat at them)

Bee: That!!!!

*****PROMO for the next fanfic by Optimus Prime*****

This is just to tell everyone of a fanfic I'll be writting after I've fineshed Rush Hour CS style.

I proudly present.....

The Lord of the Ring: CS style!!!!!

Coming Soon from the fanfics of Optimus Prime.

Colorado Cajun

08-07-2002, 12:42 PM

Nice job Optimus my man. I want to be Legolas in CS LOTR!!!:D

PlayingGod

08-07-2002, 01:47 PM

Sweet Optimus....Can I Be Pippen?

Optimus Prime

08-07-2002, 03:13 PM

Originally posted by Colorado Cajun
Nice job Optimus my man. I want to be Legolas in CS LOTR!!!:D

Well I'm get the cast together, So CC you just might be him.

Originally posted by PlayingGod
Sweet Optimus....Can I Be Pippen?

Well see PG

PlayingGod

08-07-2002, 04:48 PM

Pippens The Coolest...:D:D

Kitty

08-07-2002, 06:25 PM

OH COOL! lotr's fanfic, that'll kick @$$ ^_^. i wanna be in it if that's ok with u optimus. by the way, liked the fanfic for this star wars one, it was cool!

Optimus Prime

08-08-2002, 11:05 AM

Originally posted by Kitty
OH COOL! lotr's fanfic, that'll kick @$$ ^_^. i wanna be in it if that's ok with u optimus. by the way, liked the fanfic for this star wars one, it was cool!

Will see, Kitty.

Kitty

08-08-2002, 11:30 AM

Originally posted by Optimus Prime

Will see, Kitty.
oh ok ^_^

PlayingGod

08-08-2002, 12:45 PM

Who can play Pippen Better then me...:D...I'm Just like him...A Mischief Maker :D:D

MovieFreak

08-08-2002, 09:30 PM

great job on the story and oh, can i be in your LOTR fan fic???

Optimus Prime

08-09-2002, 08:39 PM

Originally posted by MovieFreak
great job on the story and oh, can i be in your LOTR fan fic???

We'll see

Optimus Prime

08-14-2002, 09:45 AM

(A large War droid walks into the room.)

Prime: A ference war droid a vary dangerous, and large.

FWD: Targets sighted, Locking on.

TyRoss: Prime attack the legs.

Prime: Yes sir!

(TyRoss and Prime split up, TyRoss takes his lightsaber and strikes the droid's left leg, as prime fires a pair of heavy lasers into it right.)

FWD: Stableizer failer, this unit is going down!!!

(The droid comes crashing down.)

Prime: That wasn't hard.

FWD: This unit has fallen activading self destruct system.

TyRoss: We must leave now senator.

Rogue: Yes we must.

(Everyone flees for the entrence)

FWD: Count down started 10, 9,...

Optimus Prime

08-15-2002, 08:01 PM

Has anyone read the latest part?

MovieDudeGuy

08-16-2002, 02:35 AM

Hey, could I be Sam? Why? I'll be honest. That's my middle name! Plus, he's always been my favorite character:) :D

Optimus Prime

08-16-2002, 09:59 AM

Originally posted by MovieDudeGuy
Hey, could I be Sam? Why? I'll be honest. That's my middle name! Plus, he's always been my favorite character:) :D

We'll see.

Colorado Cajun

08-16-2002, 11:11 AM

I read the latest part Prime my man. I liked it

Optimus Prime

08-22-2002, 08:30 AM

(The five start running for the door.)

Droid: 8, 7.....

(As the heroes are fleeing, Skink, Darth Cajun, and the Bounty Hunter are watching.)

Cajun: My Master will not be pleased if you do not kill the Jedi.

Skink: Hahaha your master does not need to worry about any of them.

(Skink waves his hand and Tyler Durden pulls a lever. Suddenly the massive entrence door begins to close.)

Cajun: Interesting...

Droid: 6, 5, 4....

(The Heroes run through the hall and then notice the door closing.)

Prime: They're sealing the door!

TyRoss: Keep running, we can't stop.

Droid: 3, 2.....

(As the door is sealing TyRoss, Bee, Kitty, and Rouge make it all the way through.)

TyRoss: Speed up Prime!

Prime: I'm running as fast as I can.

Droid: 2, 1, 0.

(Large explotions start and the door is about to seal when TyRoss uses Force pull. Prime is pulled right off his feet and through the door at the last second. Prime fly right into TyRoss.)

Prime: Thanks for the save.

TyRoss: Don't worry about Prime.

Kitty

08-22-2002, 02:56 PM

cool!!! ^_^

tyler_durden

08-28-2002, 12:33 PM

More, we need more!!!

Optimus Prime

08-28-2002, 02:46 PM

Originally posted by tyler_durden
More, we need more!!!

coming tomarrow.

Optimus Prime

08-29-2002, 07:23 AM

(Hours later, that night near Ripley's hanger. The Jedi are preraring to return to Coruscant.)

TyRoss: Are you ready senator?

Rogue: Yes, we must hurry back to Coruscant.

Prime: Well we better get moving or else.

Bee: The speeders are ready.

TyRoss: Good let's get back to the ship.

(A half hour later, under a star light sky. Three speeders hover over the desert.)

TyRoss: Kitty It would be better if...

Kitty: I don't care what would be better, that cloaked guy killed Ripley! And I'm not going to let him go unpunished!

TyRoss: Fine, Prime anything on your internal radar?

Prime: Yes, a single speeder approaching.

(Suddenly the solo speeder turns out to be Darth Cajun!)

Cajun: So my Master, the Jedi will die!

Colorado Cajun

08-29-2002, 07:40 AM

Cajun! Cajun!
the darkside shall finally prevail;)

tyler_durden

08-31-2002, 03:07 PM

Originally posted by Colorado Cajun
Cajun! Cajun!
the darkside shall finally prevail;)

KILL THEM ALL!!!!!!!!!!! KILL THEM ALL!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAAA HA HA HA HA!!!!!!!!!!!!

Optimus Prime

09-06-2002, 08:57 AM

(As Darth Cajun closes in to the Jedi, TyRoss and Bee ignight there Lightsabers...)

TyRoss: Prime get the ship in flight.

Prime: Yes, sir!

(Prime, Kitty, and Rogue Speed off, as TyRoss and Bee turn around and charge twoards Cajun.)

Cajun: Then lets start it Jedi.

Colorado Cajun

09-07-2002, 07:27 PM

Yes! Time to get all Bruce Lee/Brandon Lee/Maul on their asses

I better not lose this time lol;)

MovieDudeGuy

09-08-2002, 02:51 AM

SWEET! This is going to be cool!

Optimus Prime

09-17-2002, 12:16 PM

(The battle begins, the sound of lightsabers clash is heard over the sand dunes of Tatooine. Blow after blow, the Jedi and Sith clash. While the battle continues, Kitty, Prime, and Rogue are have stoped at the shuttle.)

Prime: Take a seat, Senator.

(Prime takes a seat at the controls of the shuttle. As Rogue and Kitty take two of the passinger seats.)

Kitty: Prime? You do know how to fly a shuttle, don't you?

Prime: Be quite, Kitty and let me take off.

(As the shuttles engines power up, the fight goes bad for the Jedi. As Cajun lays a hit on TyRoss's Speeder, TyRoss leaps from the speeder as it explodes!!!)

Cajun: Prepare to die, Jedi.

TyRoss: Not to your hands, Sith.

Bee: Master watch out!

(Cajun charges to finish TyRoss off, But right when he was about to swing his saber, a laser blast hits his speeder, Cajun is blow off as the speeder explodes.)

TyRoss: You could have let me do that, Prime.

(The shuttle lowers it's boarding ramp and Ty and Bee jump on to it. Cajun gets up and looks at the shuttle as it goes up through the sky.)

Cajun: Next time Jedi, No one will interfear.

Soccerman

09-17-2002, 01:23 PM

Hey, Optimus, I just got in on this and I was riveted...I literally read this from the beginning and didn't stop until I got to the last page. Good stuff, man, good stuff. Keep it up, I am hooked!

Optimus Prime

09-23-2002, 03:26 PM

next part coming tomarrow

Soccerman

09-23-2002, 04:07 PM

Originally posted by Optimus Prime
next part coming tomarrow

AWWWWRIIIIIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:D :D

Kitty

09-23-2002, 05:17 PM

Originally posted by Optimus Prime
next part coming tomarrow
YAY! =^.^=

Optimus Prime

09-24-2002, 04:44 PM

(The shuttle flies strat off twoards space, TyRoss and Bee walk into the copit.)

TyRoss: Who ever is flying you had good timing.

(Prime turns his set to face his master.)

Prime: It was no problem, sir.

Bee: How did you learn to fly?!?

Prime: I tought myself, Bee.

TyRoss: Well good timing eather way.

Kitty: So where are we going now?

TyRoss: To escort the ambassador back to Coruscant.

Prime: Yes, sir.

Kitty: Why there?

Rogue: I need support to aid my planet.

Prime: Activating the Hyperdrive...

Soccerman

09-24-2002, 05:24 PM

Tease! Being busy is no excuse... we want more!;)

tyler_durden

10-07-2002, 01:31 AM

Looks like it's been a while since the last update.

Optimus Prime

10-07-2002, 07:49 AM

Update tomarrow. Just thought you'd like to know.

Kitty

10-07-2002, 09:17 PM

Originally posted by Optimus Prime
Update tomarrow. Just thought you'd like to know.
YAY!

Optimus Prime

10-08-2002, 09:55 AM

Hours pass quickly, the shuttle arrives in orbit of Coruscant. Inside the shuttle...

Kitty: Are we there yet?

Prime: We are in orbit, now stop asking!

Rogue: Take us to the senate landing platform, Optimus.

Prime: Roger.

Bee: Who do you think will help you senator?

Rogue: I can only just hope to get a little help.

Prime: We're reseving a transmisson from the Jedi Temple.

TyRoss: I'll take in my private quarters.

Prime: Roger.

Kitty

10-08-2002, 09:03 PM

hehe, taht gives me an IDEA!

Kitty: are we there yet?

Prime: No

Kitty: are we there yet?

Prime: No

Kitty: are we there yet?

Prime: No

Kitty: are we there yet?

Prime: No

Kitty: are we there yet?

Prime: No

Kitty: are we there yet?

Prime: No

Kitty: are we there yet?

Prime: No

Kitty: are we there yet?

Prime: No

Kitty: are we there yet?

Prime: .......

Kitty: Well? are we there yet?

Prime: .......

Kitty: C'mon, answer me!

Prime: NO WERE NOT THERE YET!

:D:D:D

Optimus Prime

10-09-2002, 10:49 AM

Originally posted by Kitty
hehe, taht gives me an IDEA!

Kitty: are we there yet?

Prime: No

Kitty: are we there yet?

Prime: No

Kitty: are we there yet?

Prime: No

Kitty: are we there yet?

Prime: No

Kitty: are we there yet?

Prime: No

Kitty: are we there yet?

Prime: No

Kitty: are we there yet?

Prime: No

Kitty: are we there yet?

Prime: No

Kitty: are we there yet?

Prime: .......

Kitty: Well? are we there yet?

Prime: .......

Kitty: C'mon, answer me!

Prime: NO WERE NOT THERE YET!

:D:D:D

HA HA HA
Funny Kitty

tyler_durden

10-11-2002, 02:19 PM

We need some more action. Your next scene should be me coming in and blowing up their ship, killing them all, and ending it all!!!! Woohoo!!!!;)

Optimus Prime

11-01-2002, 10:11 AM

(In TyRoss's private quarters, TyRoss activates a holo com. The form of Jbond appears.)

Jbond: Were you successful in you mission to save the senator?

TyRoss: Yes.

Jbond: Good as soon as you land on the planet we need to speak.

TyRoss: right away.

(Suddenly a loud explostion is heard and felt on the shuttle.)

Prime: Master you need to come up here!

TyRoss: What is going on Prime?

Prime: We are under attack!!!

Colorado Cajun

11-01-2002, 01:34 PM

oooo! I am all ready for action Prime

Optimus Prime

11-01-2002, 08:49 PM

Originally posted by Colorado Cajun
oooo! I am all ready for action Prime

I'd hope so

Jarbacca

11-01-2002, 08:50 PM

i am too

tyler_durden

12-24-2002, 04:39 PM

Is OP even around anymore?!? If so, update this man!

Kitty

12-27-2002, 04:33 PM

Optimus...please update (or at least come online)

Optimus Prime

01-06-2003, 09:10 AM

Sorry I've been gone so long but Teletran One (My computer) has been out for a long (and I mean LONG) time. but now without further a dew. We continue this Fanfic. PS Jarbacca your going to have to what for the sequel before your in it OK.

(TyRoss runs up into the cockpit.)

TyRoss: Who or what is attacking us?

Prime: The answer is simple them.

(Prime points out the window to a pair of Fighters.)

Kitty: Who's are they?

Prime: At this point I don't know, what I do know is we're in trouble.

(Kitty Starts looking the control panels over and starts to panic.)

Kitty: Where are the weapon controls?!?!

TyRoss: This ship is unarmed feline.

Kitty: WHAT!! You mean we're.... (Thud)

(Kitty faints)

TyRoss: Prime keep this shuttle intact as long as you can.

Prime: And what are you doing, sir?

TyRoss: contacting the Jedi Conceil.

(At the same moment inside the one of the attacking ships.)

Cajun: This is your end Jedi.

Colorado Cajun

01-08-2003, 02:39 PM

I so better not get killed like in that pathetic real ending lol

Optimus Prime

06-27-2003, 05:27 PM

I'm going to continue this tomarrow.

Colorado Cajun

06-27-2003, 10:01 PM

Originally posted by Optimus Prime
I'm going to continue this tomarrow.
wow that is excellent:applaud:

Kitty

06-28-2003, 04:36 PM

hurrah! :D:D:D

Optimus Prime

07-14-2003, 07:59 PM

sure I know it's late but I've been under the weather with pnamonya. "I know I didn't spell it right." But eather way. Here we go...

(a pair of laser shots hit the port side of the shuttle.)

Prime: Blast it. We need some help here, sir.

(In the com room.)

TyRoss: Come in Jedi Conceil, this is TyRoss we are under attack, do you read me?

(A hologram comes on, showing Merko.)

Merko: Read you, we do.

TyRoss: Master we need assistance.

Merko: Hear you, I do. On it's way, help is.

(Just then a massice expotion blows up the consil.)

TyRoss: Hurry, Master.

(back in the cockpit)

Kitty: Shoot back Prime!

Prime: I would if I could but we don't have weapons on a diplomatic shuttle.

Kitty: :meow:

Prime: hold on everyone I'm going to try a few manuvers.

Kitty

07-14-2003, 10:03 PM

oh nice update prime, hope you get better *meow*

Optimus Prime

07-15-2003, 10:08 AM

Originally posted by Kitty
oh nice update prime, hope you get better *meow*

Thank Kitty;)

Optimus Prime

08-04-2003, 09:39 AM

(The shuttle dives into through the clouds. Persused by the Sith Fighter. The large shuttle starts wineding it's way around the buildings. The Sith Fighter fallows.)

Cajun: It is time to die.

(The computer beeps, and the text appears ''Missile Lock''.)

Cajun: Die Jedi.

(Just as he fires the missile, a pair of wedge shape starfighters open fire on him.)

Cajun: Curse Jedi Reinforces.

(the missile closes in on the shuttle.)

Kitty: We're deid!

(Just as the missile is about to hit it stops in mid flight. Standing on a balcony the short Jedi master Merko waves his hand.)

Merko: kill them you will not

(Cajun sharply reilises that the shuttle is escaping.)

Cajun: The sith will not fail.

(The sith fighter punches of at full throttle streat twoards the shuttle.)

Merko: Stop you I will.

(Merko waves his hand and the missile shoots off.)

Jbond(In one of the starfighters): His fighter is to fast.

Cajun: Now no one can stop me from killing...NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!

(Darth Cajun Realise to late, as the missile rams into his ship. A Flash and expoltion followed as the ship spirals down and expodes again as it's burning remain litter the buildings.)

Kitty: Now that was a blast.

(Prime Grones)

Prime: Going in for landing.

Colorado Cajun

08-04-2003, 02:06 PM

not bad Prime

Kitty

08-04-2003, 03:32 PM

now THAT was a blast :D :p
good update prime

Optimus Prime

08-07-2003, 04:13 PM

I'm good to here that everyone liked it.

Optimus Prime

08-08-2003, 10:53 AM

(The shuttle flies overhead and lands on the Landing Platform.)

Prime: We made it.

(A hovercar races over to the side of the shuttle, just as the boarding ramp lowers. TyRoss, Bee, Prime, Kitty, and Rogue walk of the ship. The hover car opens and a pair of tall guards climb out, followed by chansoler Malice.)

Malice: Welcome back, Senator. I'm glad you were not harmed.

Rogue: I'm happy to be free from the prison that I was held.

Malice: Master TyRoss it's good to see that your mission was a sucsessful.

TyRoss: Yes but I must talk to the Jedi conceil.

Malice: Understood, Master Jedi.

(A second hovercar comes up.)

TyRoss: Come Bee.

(TyRoss turns his head to see Bee staring at Rogue.)

TyRoss: Bee let's go.

Bee: Hu ohm yes, Master.

(TyRoss, Bee, and Prime climb in to the hovercar.)

Kitty: Wait you can't leave me.

(Kitty jumps in the drivers set.)

TyRoss: Alright Kitty, then to the Jedi Temple.

Kitty: Right, Where?

TyRoss: I'll guide you.