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DeereX
05-24-2003, 02:07 PM
An extremely hot day came upon Isla Nubalar. The sun emerged and many of the dinosaurs awoke. A baryonyx stared at the gate that stood before him. The baryonyx growled and started to eat the goat that the workers of Jurassic Park provided. John Hammond owned Site A and Site B, but John Hammond was living the last hours of his life. He layed in bed, awaiting one guest more. Many people went to see John Hammond so they could see him for the very last time. Alan Grant was there along with Ellie Sattler, Ian Malcome, Timmy, Lex, Sarah Harding, and many other unknown people. Lex and Timmy were both crying as they said goodbye to their grandpa. A man with black curly hair ran into the room. Nick Van Owen. One hour later John Hammond died. Many people crying, Ian didn't want to be there at all. Finally they all left. Ian personly didn't care all that much. All John Hammond ever did for Ian was get him practically killed. Ian got in his car. It was Allan Grant who got him to get out of his car. "Hey Allan," Ian called. Allan sighed. Allan didn't exactly like Ian. "Uhm, hi," Allan said uncheerfully."I read your new book, it was actually good!" said Ian, acting as if that was a compliment. "Yeah okay, bye," Allan said quickly jumping in his truck before he would have to strangle Ian.

Nick Van Owen walked to his rusty truck. He got in it when a man came running up to him. "Mr. Owen!" "Mr. Owen!" The man yelled. Nick got out of his truck. The man finally met up with Nick. "Mr. Owen, hi I'm Tyler Zusim," the man said. Tyler Zuzim wore a black suit. His hair was brown and slicked back. He had blue eyes. He looked like a business person. "Err Hello," Nick said looking rather confused.

"Mr. Owen, would you like to go out for tea? Coffee? Punch?" Tyler Zuzim seemed rather nervous. "Sorry, I don't have any money with me," Nick said. "Oh, my treat, Mr. Owen." said Tyler Zuzim shaking his head. Nick followed Tyler Zuzim's car that looked like it was worth 100,000 dollars. They parked in a very expensive cafe. Nick knew this guy was richer than Operah. Inside the cafe was nice. Nick was used to the piece of crap bar he went to. They sat down at a table. "Now Mr. Owen, I have a of-" Tyler Zuzim was inturrupted by the waiter. "What would you like?" she asked. "I'll have a beer," said Nick. "We don't serve beer here." said the waiter cooly. "Okay, then I'll have a pop." Nick said. He was very suprsed they didn't serve beer. "What kind? I don't read minds ya dork, you're waisting my good time." the waiter said. "Listen, big mouth, I'll have a pop, don't care what flavor, I'll just have a stinkin pop," Nick said. The waiter gave Nick the dirtiest look he ever saw. "I'll have a beer please," said Tyler Zuzim. "I'm sure we can fix that up for ya." the waiter said. Nick stared at her in shock.

"Mr. Owen, you went to Site B am I correct?" Tyler Zuzim asked. "Yes" Nick replied. "Well, I have an offer that will earn you $300,500," Tyler Zuzim said. Nick's eyes widened. "Pardon?" Nick looked like he got hit in the head with a piece of metal. "You heard," said Tyler. "What is the deal?" asked Nick. "You come to Isla Nubalar and take pictures of our dinosaurs and help out at the compound for 6 months until we find a new worker to replace Chris Sunnard. Now if your good we'll let you replace Chris permanently." Tyler Zuzim said smiling. "Do you accept?" he continued. "Yes, yes I do sir," said Nick not knowing the dangers that lay in the future for him.


Coming Soon Jurassic Park: The 13 Deaths Chapter Chapter 2:
SITE A

Jarbacca
05-24-2003, 03:19 PM
interesting

LOTR RING
05-24-2003, 03:40 PM
I love Jurasik Park even though I cant spell it!

Jarbacca
05-24-2003, 04:12 PM
Originally posted by LOTR RING
I love Jurasik Park even though I cant spell it!

:lol:

DeereX
05-24-2003, 05:57 PM
thanks!

LOTR RING
05-25-2003, 06:12 PM
Originally posted by Jarbacca
:lol:

The real funny thing is that I could of just looked at the title of the thread for the correct spelling:(

DeereX
06-05-2004, 01:09 PM
Chapter Two



"So, Jim, who did they get to replace Chris?" asked Threan Jones. They were in a car, driving at full-speed. "Ah... I guess they got that Nick Owen guy." Threan took off his hat and pulled something out of it. It was a pencil. "What else do you keep up that hat." Jim asked laughing. Threan smiled and said,"Nothing. Just a pencil so I can take notes on the dinosaurs. I don't have any pockets." The two men were driving to the main Compund of Jurassic Park. Jim got out a mirror, and looked at himself. He was making sure he looked okay. Jim had long red hair and dark blue eyes. "Man... settle down! We're just going to see the new owner of Jurassic Park. All he wants to do, is talk to the Jurassic Park Workers." Jim was driving, he had one hand on the steering wheel, and one hand was holding the mirror that he kept looking at himself in. "Yeah, but the guy now owns the company we work for... I want to get a good first impression." Jim said. Threan rolled his eyes. Threan had been working for John Hammond, for several years. He was very sad when he heard that the man had died. Suddenly, a very large green figure crossed the dirt road. Jim slammed on the breaks trying to avoid hitting it. "What in God's name was that?" Jim asked. Threan got out of the car. He saw footprints in the dirt. "Holy crap!" Threan said,"This thing was huge!" The footprints lead into the forest. Threan walked up to the car, and got a tranquilizer out. "Come on." Threan said. Jim got out of the Jurassic Park car and followed Threan. "Wow." Jim said looking at the enormous footprints. Threan followed the footprints into the forest. The forest was dark and silent. "C-could this be one of o-ours?" Jim asked Threan nervously. Threan nodded,"It is. But how did the thing get out of the fence? The thing is 10,000 volts!" Jim swallowed nervously. "What do you think it is?" Threan frowned, and said to Jim,"I'm guessing it's our rex. It must have broken the fence down." Jim looked around the forest. "How did it get out?" Jim seemed very nervous. "I have no idea." Threan said. Suddenly, a very loud roar could be heard. Threan pointed his gun at the trees in front of him. He was ready to shoot. A massive head came out of the trees behind Threan and Jim. Threan did not notice, he was still pointing the tranquilizer in the trees ahead of him. The massive head quickly grabbed Jim! Threan turned toward the creature and pointed the tranquilizer at it! But, before Threan could pull the trigger, the creature swung it's tail at Threan, and knocked him out! Then, the creature bit Jim in half. It all happened so quick, Jim didn't know what hit him.


Coming Soon: Chapter Three

Tornado
06-05-2004, 01:30 PM
Coming Soon: Chapter Three? You're not going to take another year are you?

It's not bad though man, keep it coming, but perhaps a little quicker this time. ;)

bbf2
06-09-2004, 10:15 PM
Chapter Three:

Then a raptor came and ate them all. The end.

Tornado
06-10-2004, 05:11 PM
Sounds good bbf2.

2_much_popcorn1
06-10-2004, 06:51 PM
its alright

Mr.Matinee
06-10-2004, 08:50 PM
Not bad,but I'd suggest that you update more than once a year.:p